Part 1:

It was a normal evening for Gary Cole. Haxxor, was his hacker name. Just sitting at the computer, searching randomly for answers. He didn't realize his importance.
'How come when I close my eyes... It seems more real?' He typed into the computer. He wasn't expecting an answer. He never was expecting an answer. But expectations, can be deceiving. A message from some guy named Hitman appeared on the screen.
'Go to the bridge on Elder Avenue.'
Haxxor was surprised. But before he could reply, his computer shut off. Now, as you can imagine, he was nervous. I mean, how could he trust a guy named Hitman? It didn't seem right. But he had no choice. He knew that. His life was a mess. He would rather take the chance and die, then live a life of suffering...

When he got there, no one was around. He waited. He waited for 30 minutes... And a car came by. It looked like a mob car... That really made him uncomfortable. A door opened, and a man in sun glasses and all black clothes opened the door. It was night and it was raining out... And he was wearing sunglasses.
"Get it." Said the man.
Haxxor hesitated... Then entered the car...

Nice start, nice start, like it

agreed and now I want to read MORE of it

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Yes! Thanks a lot guys! I've always dreamed of having people admire my work ;)

Part will be up real soon.

Part 2:

"As you've no doubt have guessed... I'm Hitman."
"Hitman... What kind of name is that?"
"Explanations are on the way... The one driving is MacLeod"
"Hey" Said MacLeod
"Hi...."Replied Haxxor
They pulled up to a hotel. Once inside they entered a small little room.
"Do you know why you're here?" Asked Hitman.
Haxxor paused... Then answered "No."
"You are here because you feel something. Something you can't explain what you feel, you just know it's there. Do you know what that thing is?"
Haxxor thought... "The Matrix?"
"Do you know what it is?"Asked Hitman
"No... What?"
"The Matrix is all around you. You can... Feel it when your hurt. You can... Taste it when you're eating dinner or lunch. It is our senses, our hates, our loves and our lies. It is all."
Haxxor thought. "So you're saying if I punch you in the face, that's The Matrix?"
Hitman laughed. "I thought you would be smarter than this."
Hitman took out two pills from a container he had been holding.
"You take the red pill, I show you why your life is a mess, and why you're here... You take the blue pill... You wake up in your bed, and none of this ever happened."
Haxxor thought. 'Why is this happening to me?' he thought, 'why me what did I do...'
"Take your time" Said Hitman
Slowly but carefully Haxxor took the blue pill. Inspected it... And put it down. He took the red pill and swallowed it with some water...

yeah, good one. And when you come to the Smith scenes - you have to mention me, okay????

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Lol, but you gotta give me some kind of other name, becasue Smith Fan would kinda ruin it No effence.
But wait! If you give me your name, I can make you Agent_[name here] Agent Drake, Agent Kender, and Agent You Interested?

hmmm...what about Agent Selissa (that`s my real name)

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Part 3:

"Follow me" Hitman ordered.
They walked into another section of the room.
"Have a seat"
Inside were Hitman, MacLeod and two other people he didn't know. He didn't feel like asking their names at the moment. In front of him was a cracked mirror... It slowly startd to re-form into a un-broken mirror like jelly. He stared at it. It was moving with the wind.
"Get a signal, Xavier" Said Hitman.
"Yes sir."
The computers starting making noises.
"I got it!" Said Xavier.
"Haxxor, jump through that mirror... Now!"
"What do you mean, jump through it!? That's impossible! What if I..."
"Now, we don't have time! GO!"
Haxxor got up, paused and took a step back... He felt stupid, made face, but he ran for it anyway. He jumped. His right foot hit the mirror, and it chilled him to the bone, but before he could get a reaction, he saw Xavier hit a button and he was inside... A red pool...

Part 4:

Haxxor struggled for air. He reach the top and there was some kind of bubble. He pushed it open, pulled out a plug from his mouth and gasped. He was bald, naked and there were plugs all over his body, and his eyes felt like no pain he'd ever experienced before. Just then a machine-like flying creature came down from the dark destroyed sky... It grabbed him by the neck. He sturggled to get free but couldn't. He panicked, but the machine eventually let go. 'WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!!' he thought. Just then the pool he was in opened up at the bottom, and he slid down. He slid for 20 seconds then landed in a giant dirty water pool. The roof opened up to reveal and giant machine arm that fished him out, and brought him safely up.
"Welcome to the real world" Said Hitman... Or so he looked like Hitman...