ok im gonna start a new story soon, but its going to be about 3 pages long, so do you want it in chapters or the full thing.

ill see if anyone else has any ideas

This is the first chapter of matrix;beggining (the spelling mistake is intentional)


Footsteps pounded on the asphalt behind him. He knew the person was there, though he didn’t know why. All he did was ask that girl the truth. What was so bad abut that. Then he heard the gun being pulled so he ran for it. Hoping to lose the person, he used the back allays the way he always did after school let out, but the guy kept following him. He wondered whether they knew about the French block fire, then he quickly shook his head, they couldn’t have known it was him, there was no evidence, so what agency was he from? He turned a corner and got pulled into a dark alleyway between to shops. “Hello Hitman, we have been watching you for a long time,” Hitman recognised the guy as the girl he was told to ask the truth, “I am Truth, I would like you to come with us.”

Wow good job, can't wait for chapter 2

im still workin on the rest, though i mite post capter 2 in a minute...

I know this is quick, but this is chapter 2
Hitman was a college graduate, who loved computers. Yesterday, on his usual travels round the net, looking for an answer, his computer went blank. A few seconds later, a message showed up on screen, hello hitman, I am truth, coincidentally what you are searching for. Meet me on 6th and Main. So he did. And this is what the outcome was. “Idiot, why did you listen to her?” He thought, as he was being lead to an abandoned building he passed every morning on his way to work.

Inside, 4 other people were working, “Sit down,” said Truth, “I will introduce you later, now, listen. What you about to hear you may think is absurd, however, keep your opinions to yourself. Now, we are in a system, a game if you will, being run by machines. The real world you cannot see until you are unplugged. We are all unplugged. 02, throw me the pot!” She caught it with amazing grace, as if everything slowed down a bit, “Now, in this pot there are two pills, a red one, which will lead you to the real, to the truth, and a blue one, which will erase your memory of this, now, which one will you chose?” Hitman thought about it, the picked the red one and swallowed it immediately. Truth spoke again, “OK, I will now introduce you. This guy is MacLeod, This fair lady you know as 02, these two guys are Haxxor and TheOneIsGone.”
“TheOneIsGone, what kinda name is that?”
“You have to understand, when you are unplugged, you keep the online name you were using at the time, so that’s the name he got stuck with.”
“Hey, that’s a cool name!” Said TheOneIsGone. The mobile on the table Hitman failed to notice earlier started ringing. “Jake, we’ve got him,” said Truth, and put the phone down.02 lead Hitman to a chair next to a mirror with a large crack in it. He sat down and the mirror fixed itself. Curious, Hitman touched it. He didn’t realise that as Haxxor talked to him the liquidated mirror glass started to crawl up his arm and onto his body. It reached his head when he finaly noticed that he was cold. He looked down at himself and screamed. He loosed consciousness quickly

Wow good job... but not a lot of detail... But I like it!

I am honored to be in your story TheOneIsGone.
I like the story so far, except, you are going 100 miliion mph at this. It is probably why you said it was going to be three pages, instead of chapters. I like it, hopefully you actually make a cool series out of it. I have my fingers crossed. j/k

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i hope it will be a bit longer before next time

part 3 is here!

“QUICK!” shouted Hitman, as he ran towards the others. The agent was right behind him as he turned the last corner. By the time he got there the others had already jacked out. The phone started ringing as he got to it. He picked it up.

“What happened in there, TheOneIsGone”
“Just call me T.O.I.G. will ya? Anyways, that agent appeared out of nowhere.”
“No he didn’t.” Everybody turned and looked at Hitman, “I saw him a while back, though, I don’t think it was him.”
“What!?” Chorused everyone,
“I saw a different coding”
“You what!” shouted truth
“You heard me, I found out about this a while back, I can see the coding of the matrix.”
“When were you going to tell us that” asked T.O.I.G.
“Well, you have all got your skills so when I found out about mine, I wanted to keep it under wraps, cos I like being in the background.”
“Look, tell us these thing once in a while, Ok?” ordered Macleod. Hitman was the last member to join the Apocalypse, the ship commanded by the fearless Truth. Their mission from Zion was to unplug as many people as they can. The count was 298 according to T.O.I.G.
“Right, who wants some dinner” exclaimed Haxxor. Everyone grunted, including their operator inside the matrix, Jake, who will eat anything.
“Did you see who the agent was?” T.O.I.G. asked.
“I think it was Agent_Drake.” Mumbled Hitman. A long silence followed. The member of the crew that came before Hitman died in the release of the largest amount of minds in a month ever. He died in a fatal car crash. He had no chance.

Wow I like it! It gives me great pleasure, to be in my first story! Now I know how god feels. ... ...