Well this is my first fan-fic so...
I own a site here in Brazil where you write your story about how you get out of the matrix, this is mine (really short).

Rebirth

Mescaline? Lucid Dream? I didn´t even knew if it was real or if I was just dreaming, but I could feel it, some how I could feel it.
The first contact was made by Ghost through internet, a kind of warning, I wasn´t ready and I should be very careful, but betwen so many dreams I was just waking up again. A small part of my subconscious was rebelling at the same time that dreams turned into nightmares, unfortunately inside the matrix time is always against us and people are potencial agents.
In fact I was about to get bugged and Ghost makes his second and final contact giving a sample of the hard reality my front.
Like everybody does except for Neo of course we run and thanks to Ghost´s skills after a hard shoot out (which I made what I could) we get to the place of the "rebirth", the pill now could change everything and the comfort and illusion of the matrix could be changed for a war. Familiar, friends, strangers, enemies, would I be able to live without them? and at the end they were the ones who gave me the will to see it for myself.
Ghost informed me that the time had come and the choice had to be made soon, so there I was, having Ghost as a mentor and seeing how deep the rabbit role goes.

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It is very short, but to the point, I like it. Keep up the work, but try yo make it longer than my signature. j/k

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Thanks Haxxor ! Well my site have only short storys but I´ll try to make others fan-fics (longer then your signature lol).

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interesting...sounds like a good START to an ongoing fan fic.........
HINT, HINT...

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Well then I´ll make a second part... thanks for the suport Hitman!

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I feel the same. Good work, just try and add a bit next time. Your on the right track.