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Part One of a story about the source
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07-30-2003, 10:58 AM
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GAIA
A figure is at a plain-looking door. He opens it. Inside, the matrix code is the only scenery in the room. The code comes from a young woman in the center of the room. She is truly beautiful. She has long, golden hair, pale skin, and eyes that shine w/ purity and wisdom. She is wearing a white dress that reaveals her shoulders. Shie is barefoot. She must be floating, because the only surface, the code, flows from her feet; it even flows from the ends of her hair. She is Gaia, the Source of the matrix. A human that is filled with every single code in the Matrix. She looks up as the door opens, her eyes filled with hope. She whispers using her only form of speaking, thought-speak, "Neo..."
But, her eyes change from hope to fear as she sees who stands at the door in Neo's place. "How could you be here? Only the one can enter this room.." she thought speaks.
(to be continued)
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MacLeod
Cogito, Ergo, Sum.
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07-30-2003, 11:06 AM
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Wow that's a great piece you got-but it ended too darn soon! Is it a what-if considering if it wasn't the Arc waiting for Neo?
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07-30-2003, 11:09 AM
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I forgot to add this one part.....Who do YOU think should be at the door? the best idea gets written up. reply w/ ideas
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The world won't be destroyed, it will just...change...
'Turkey: The only animal smarter than man'
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MacLeod
Cogito, Ergo, Sum.
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07-30-2003, 11:26 AM
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Argh-of course!! Nw you've said it I gotta re-configure me thinking...my fingers say its the Arc!!
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07-30-2003, 11:59 AM
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anyone else care to share an idea?
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The world won't be destroyed, it will just...change...
'Turkey: The only animal smarter than man'
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07-30-2003, 12:36 PM
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another human, an evil one with the same abilities but with evil intentions. someone in a lost prophicy the machines found and hid so nobody would now about him until it was too late.
hows that for a matrix movie.
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never underestimate the power of stupid people in large numbers.- serious sam
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neo742003
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07-30-2003, 01:52 PM
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I like it. I'm thinking of some ideas. Will get back to you on it. But love part one keep it up.
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07-30-2003, 03:28 PM
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Who should be at the door? Smith.
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Re: Part One of a story about the source
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iamatwin
Matrix veteran..
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07-30-2003, 04:00 PM
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Quote:
Originally posted by Oracle2.0
GAIA
A figure is at a plain-looking door. He opens it. Inside, the matrix code is the only scenery in the room. The code comes from a young woman in the center of the room. She is truly beautiful. She has long, golden hair, pale skin, and eyes that shine w/ purity and wisdom. She is wearing a white dress that reaveals her shoulders. Shie is barefoot. She must be floating, because the only surface, the code, flows from her feet; it even flows from the ends of her hair. She is Gaia, the Source of the matrix. A human that is filled with every single code in the Matrix. She looks up as the door opens, her eyes filled with hope. She whispers using her only form of speaking, thought-speak, "Neo..."
But, her eyes change from hope to fear as she sees who stands at the door in Neo's place. "How could you be here? Only the one can enter this room.." she thought speaks.
(to be continued)
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incredible!
i reckon its smith, who else colud make a woman quiver like that? exept the twins o course
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Hitman
Way to go, Kenobi...
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07-30-2003, 06:09 PM
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It should either be Smith or the Merovingian...being that Mero is so mysterious and Persephone did say he used to be "like (Neo)"...That'd be an interesting twist...
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TheDrakemaster
I want to believe
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07-30-2003, 06:10 PM
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Since it's a he I guess it's Smith. That would certainly be a shock to the 'source-woman' (to stumble on Smith that is). It would really be great in my opinion that it would be Smith. That way u can make a fascinating plot with all kinds of twists and turns based on the original matrix storyline.
Besides, I liked the short first part; wonder who's it gonna be... ;)
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iamatwin
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