This is how it goes crew: I write the story from my point of view as a captian until a certain point. Another crew member than writes the story from their point of veiw at the same time, it shouldnt include anything i've said but somewhere in the story you should mention an incident from my story to show that the stories are moving at a parallel time, Quentin Terentino Style, now I will edit this post within the next 12 hours to add my story, from then on another crew member will post his story. Try not to wirte too much guys, and away we go......
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Chapter 1: Departure of the Vigilant.

We boarded the ship, with all our suplies, and as I stood on the Vigilnats' entrance I looked back at the Dock and wonderd If I was ever to return here again.I got inside and the doors shut behind me.
“Alright guys, listen up, the council is not aware of our mission. We may have peace with the machines but there is no agreement about unexpected visitors. So no one is to know about this trip if we are ever to make it back. No everyone get to your positions!!”
I sat in my captains chair and watched from the window as all the other ships were taken off, and hoped that my little plan was not revealed to anyone, I looked in the ship cameras and there it is was in the corner of the storage room covered in a grey piece of cloths, so that to a strangers eyes it would appear as boxes stored over each other, rather than what it really was.
“Hortaio, everything operational?”
“Yes sir, we are ready to departure from the dock”
“Good the sooner we leave the better. Johnson, Mazman, are the bullets in place?”
“Yes sir”Replying Simultaneously
“Sir, Zion Command centre has granted us exit through gate no. 6, we are ready to leave”
I then ignited the engine and made our way through the gate and into the dark cold tunnels of the real.... (To be continued)..

Niiiice!

Just remember to include all your crew in important situations.

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...........aboard the Vigilant I stared deep into the darkness of the clouds of the real as Mazman asked me, "what are you going to do when we get there?" "to where?" i asked. "To 01." I said "follow the captains orders and decimate any squiddie that gets near this ship or trys to make a run for Zion, but I have a little ace up my sleeve for when we get there." "like what?" Mazman asked me. "You'll see, you'll see." I said. Just then the captain called for me, I reported in, "Yes sir, what is it that you need sir!" He asked if the guns had been fully loaded and cleaned for combat. I answered yes and he then called Horatio, and Mazman over and we went over the battle plan one last time. After that it was one long trip into the abyss of the real, not knowing what is ahead of us, I once again found myself staring into the darkness of the clouds of the real, preping the guns for combat along with Mazman. We began talking about what we would do after we won the war....................

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..."are you sure this is a good idea?" I said to Johnson.
"Whats the problem?" He said.
"Well...."
Captain strode confidently into the room; "Everything okay on the squiddie front?" He said with a wry smile.
"Yeah, all fine so far."
"Yup, all clear"
Just then, the small red light burst frantically into life,
"Oh shit." I said.
"What's it picking up?" Said TA.
"Just a second, sir." Said Johnson.
Flickering profusely, the hologram eventually emerged in the form of...
"The Logos?" Said Captain, "what's the range?"
"9, 10 miles" I said, fingers going a-mile-a-minute over the keyboard trying to find out more. I noticed Johnson seemed a bit more agitated than usual.
"it's coming towards us at a huge speed. Possibly 200 miles per hour." Said Johnson, now staring into his screen as if hypnotised.
Suddenly, Horatio called out, hey everyone, get over here NOW!"
We all gathered around the operators table. Horatio seemed to be talking to someone on the headset.
"...yes, OK, here he is."
He handed the headset to captain TA.
"Who is it?"
"The Merovingian" said Horatio.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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"What do you want?" Questioned the captain. Everyone strained to listen as TA talked to The Merovingian. I studed the screens, to see if anything was happening. Nothing. Suddenly, the captain spoke. "I'm jacking in, he wants to meet me, Horatio, get ready." I was thrilled at guiding a trip into the maatrix to meet the Merovingian, and got the equipment ready quickly. "All done boss," I said, as he sat in the chair....

Chapter 2:
Captian and operator go to the Matrix
We seated ourselves on the jack-in chairs, I myslef kept wondering about what reason the Mero. needed me for. ' Hortaio, are you ready?"
"yes sir, I am"
" Your worried arent you? we all were on our first time to go back in the Matrix
"Dont worry sir I've wanted this for a really long time now, I wont mess up I promise"
Mazman and A.J. stood behind our chairs, and as soon as the computer issued a singal that there was a safe hardline for us to go through, they both plugged us in.
We got in the elevator making our way to floor 101.
"Why so high sir??"
"They're french!! I geuss scenery matters for them alot."
We got out and walked into a very elegant restaraunt, and directly ahead of us was the Merv. and what seemed to be his gang seated around him.
"Dont ask, Horatio!!"
"Well, well,well if it isint tHe aRcHeItEcT, himself the true creator and ofcourse Hortaio one of the survivng APU fighter of the siege, please sit down I've heard alot about you two. This is my wife Presephone"
To Haratio " Scenery does matter to them alot!!"
"Now that we are here, what do you want to know from us?"
"Please, There is nothing you know that I dont, the real reason I brought you here was because, there is someone who was aboard your old ship who wants to meat its new captain..."
A person appeared from behind us," Hello aRcH."
"Smith?!"........(to be continued)

good story begining tHe aRcHeItEcT
keep it up (and of course the rest)
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Cool fanfic guys, thing kicks ass. course the caduceus one's gonna be way better

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^ Read the above edited chapter guys and I'll write the third instalement tonight, "Smtih confrontation"......and I got a suprise I cant wait to write....

yeah dude and we can't wait to read it man.

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I cant write the third chapter yet until at least one other member writes something.. .....