(cheezy title i know )

My story is about the real life of the characters in the matrix and non-movie characters including myself.

"Mouse will you please stop playing with the phone!"
"I'm sorry it's just so cool."
"Ok well look, just stay here while I get the package."
"Kyo..."
"What?"
"I love you."
"Yeah ok whatever."
As I rolled my eyes and walked into the dark post office, I got an eerie feeling as if someone was watching me. I decided to forget about it and do what I had come to do. I grabbed the package, not knowing what it was, and headed back to the door.
"Did you get it?" Mouse said doubtfully.
"Yes of course I did."
"Alright then lets get out of here."
Just then we spotted an agent. We looked at each other and started running.
"Mouse get Link!" I shouted.
"Got it"
"Operator"
"Link, we need an exit now."
"Alright there is one in the old electrical repair shop on Cell and North. Get there now. Agents are closing in."
Mouse dropped the phone and tried to go back for it.
"Leave it!" I shouted. "Our only concern right now is to get out"
When we got there, the door was locked. We broke a small window tried to get into the main office. Again the door was locked. Then we heard footsteps just outside the thin walls.
"We have to go." I whispered. Mouse ran into the door and the rusty, old hinges broke. The agents heard us and desperatley tried to get in. We got to the phone just as it began to ring.
"Here take it." I said.
"Ladies first." Mouse replied. I picked up the phone. Just as I did, agents came into the room. Before I had a chance to do anything, I felt it. The icy, cold torture that is my reality. When I got out, Link was there to unplug me. We ran back to the monitor. I had no idea how to read the code so I just stared at Link for his reactions. He just stared blankly at the screen.
"What is it? Whats happening?" I shouted.
"Mouse... is... dead. The agents killed him. He didn't have a chance." I couldn't move. I couldn't say a word. All I could do was watch as the green code drizzled down the screen like rain. Rain was a feeling of sadness, loniless, and depression. I felt every emotion but joy. I was angry and sad. At the same time. "t should have been me" I thought. If only he had gone first. I just stared over at his lifeless body and cried. As I was leaving the room, I through the package down on the table not even caring what it was mouse had given his life for. I went down to the lounge area and decided what I was gonna do. I hardly knew any of the people sitting in there because I hadn't been there very long. A few people waved to me and said hi but that was all. For all I know they could have all been shouting to me and flailing there arms and I wouldn't have noticed. I just sat down and cried....

(more to come.)

Interesting beginning; I can't wait to see where you go from here

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I will post more when I get home from school.

very nice, good story and excelent beginning hope more will come soon

Thank you guys very much.

Then HE walked in. I used to have a crush on him. You know, the kind like a teenage girl with posters and pictures all over the walls in her bedroom. Ever since I got to know him though, I don't think of him the same. He is now just an amazing man who is here to save the world, well at least thats what Morpheus believes.
"Hey" he said sitting down and lowering his head. I just nodded. I knew he had just found out by the look on his face. He always seemed to be upset about something, well of course he would be with the responsibilty he had, but this was different. I just sat for a minute staring at him, he didn't notice though. I got up to go back to my room but he stopped me.
"Hey uhh about your birthday," the tone in his voice had changed as if he tried to make the current situation disappear "what did you have planned?"
"I think I'm just going to go home and be with my friends." Yeah be with my friends. The one place where I felt safe.
"You can't go home! You weren't supposed to know this but, we have a party planned for you"
"Uh..."
"Please, you have to stay. At least think about it."
"Alright. I've got to get back to my room. Goodnight." I said heading for the door. He stopped me and hugged me tight.
"I miss him too." he whispered.

Wow very nice there NLO I cant belive I have never seen this fan fiction before. I like how you are using the characters in the movie and adding your self in...nice work, and keep it up.:up:

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thanks so much. I've been thinking of this story for a few months. It's gotten to be very long.

I sat on my bed in my room. I just thought for a while of what I wanted to do. About a half hour ago they took mouse outside to bury him and give him a proper funeral but I didn't go. It would have been to hard. I decided to just go another time. The really sad thing is, is that Mouse's parents had died and no one knew. He ran away and Morpheus found him so he brought him out of the matrix. The day I was introduced to this place was I day I'll never forget, although I wish I would. Sometimes I wish I could take the green pill and forget everything but I know that isn't possible unless I decide to leave. Thats another thing I had been thinking about; going home. Maybe that was the best thing for me to do. Oh well I guess I could decide in the morning.
"Hey, Nik, wake up." Jada was in my face poking my shoulder.
"What, it's still early. Let me go back to sleep."
"Uh actually, Nik, it's 1 pm." she had to be joking.
"Are you serious!" I sat up. I had to get up and get ready to go home 3 hours ago. My friends were planning a party for me.
"Come on," she said dragging me out of bed. I threw on my jeans and a t-shirt and we walked into the lounge area.
"Surprise!!" everyone shouted. Laurence, Carrie, Keanu, and the rest of the crew were in there with a cake for me the Carrie had made.
"Happy birthday" they all said in unison. They lit the one candle on the cake. I guess they ran out or something. We all sat around and talked.
"I'm sorry we don't have anything for you yet." Keanu said, speaking for all of them.
"Nah, don't worry about it. I don't need anything." I continued eating my cake. People kept coming over asking me what I wanted. I told them all theres nothing I really wanted. Keanu then came over and asked me the same question.
"Alright," I said loudly standing up "all of you have been coming to me asking me what I want for my birthday. I've thought a lot about this and the truth is, I want to go home."
"You can go home anytime you want." Jada said with a puzzled look.
"No you don't understand, I want to go home forever. I want to go home and never think about this place again. I never want to see any of you either. Not because I hate you, but because I know that if I do, I'll realize that I've made a bad choice in leaving when indeed It is the best thing for me. I'm sorry." They all just stared at me. I felt like crying and in turn the feeling turned into a reality. I began sobbing so I turned away and walked back to my room. I put my face in my pillow and just cried. I cried because I missed my family, I missed mouse, and I couldn't stand all the death that seemed to fill the matrix. I packed what little things I had into my suitcase and just stood in my doorway. Keanu came behind me putting his hand on my shoulder.
"Are you sure this is what you want?" He said.
"Yes I am. I've decided to go now. I don't want to wait here another day."
"Let me take that" He grabbed my suitcase for me and headed to the door. On the way out I hugged a few people, waved at some, and cried with others. Morpheus was at the door.
"I don't think you'll be needing to take the green pill." He said so sure I would never say a word about this underground city; Zion, and I didn't want to. I cared too much for these people to put their lives in danger.
"Goodbye, Laurence" I said, and with that, left Zion with which I thought would be forever. I hugged Keanu, got into the car, and drove away.

I drove home with the car silent. I didn't listen to any of the music in which I usually found soothing. My family and Friends never really questioned me as to why I was always gone. Zion was incredibly smaller than it was in the movie, and it was located underground in a small desolate area in Pennsylvania. When I first saw it I couldn't believe how they could keep something like this a secret but they did and still are. The entrance is just a small shed like structure that has "no hunting" and "no trespassing" signs. I guess the signs are there to make it look like some man who is all alone in the woods lives there. When I finally reached the street I lived on, I sighed knowing I would never have to go back there again. I would be able to celebrate my 17th birthday with the people I loved most. I walked into my house. It was silent until i walked into my kitchen. Everyone I ever cared about was in there with a cake and presents.
"You're late!" My best friend Jessica yelled.
"What took you so long?" My aunt said, hugging me. The next few days past and people continued to call me wishing me a happy birthday. A few weeks passed and of course like every other date or event of significance passes, people forget or just don't care anymore. Not that I cared that no one was telling me happy birthday I just hate how things people seem to care about is only celebrated when it has to be. Things seem so manufactured these days. It was now August 26, the day before school started again and I was excited to see all the people I hadn't seen in so long, too long really. It had now been about 4 months since I left Zion and I was happy. I hadn't thought much about it but everytime I turned on the TV and one of those people were on, something inside of me felt empty. I missed them so much. "Speed" had been on the other day and seeing Keanu, once more save the day, made me wonder whether or not he really was "the one" or not. I decided just to forget about it and concentrate on what kind of impression I would make on my class tomorrow. I was up until 1 picking washing my hair, picking out my outfit and just worrying in general. I finally laughed and told myself I had to get to some rest so I pushed everything off of my bed and fell asleep.
*beep* *beep* *beep* "noo, just a few more minutes" I thought as I swung my arm over and hit my alarm. I got dressed and headed for school. I couldn't wait to see the people I missed. Since 7th grade I had liked this guy named Robert, RJ for short. All summer I couldn't wait to see him but now I didn't really care whether he was there or not. The first school day passed and just like everything else, it was forgotten. The teacher and all the students had gotten back into their regular patern and I knew this was going to be a long year.