The Matrix: Reconfigured

Warning: This is more like a chapter story but isn't as big, expect chapters to have more (I will usually post if there will be more to the chapter)

Introduction:

After 20 years Zion had been fully rebuilt, it was only meant to be 6 but there was a added city made which connected Zion and The Machine city together, it was vast. The humans had found a solution on how to remove the dark electrical clouds which kept the beautiful sky from aweing the humans, the machines were assigned on the task to build the great machine which would be kept in history for years and years and slowly a year later the clouds were disapearing leaving the machines with full power and the humans with billions and beyond of artificial flesh which made up the human society bigger and as big as it could get for quite a while.

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"Hey, have you seen the sanctuary for Neo?" A boy with brown medium hair asked another fellow the same age as him.

"Nah, you have right? was it cool?!"

"Yeah, they say Neo isn't dead.. but he looks like he is to me, they say he hasn't aged a bit since he was last at Zion. I think that is incredible"

"Heh, yeah"

The two boys who had left their history class continued to walk until Marwe had broken the silence between them.

"I think Neo will wake up, Morpheus. I just have a strong feeling"

"You don't even know what he looks like Mar, and stop calling me Morpheus; I said I liked Morph to you since we met back in half-school"

"I know, it's just that.. Why don't you want to be called Morpheus? He was the one who found Neo, he was the one who gave Neo a reason to be here, I just don't get you"

Morpheus didn't say anything and just looked down.

"I'm going this way, just don't come ok.." he had said and left Marwe.

Marwe spotted a directory and headed for it he searched for Neo's sanctuary but couldn't find it.

"Damn, must be an old one.."

Just then two guys approached Marwe, one put a hand on Marwe's shoulder.

"Have any good for us skinny?"

Marwe's eyes narrowed

"No, I don't isn't that too bad?"

He tried to walk away but was pulled by the collar back. The two older teens had grins on their faces and one pulled his arm back and punched Marwe hard in the gut leading him to his knees. Marwe felt sick like if he was going to vomit his food right out until he saw a hand on one of the teen's shoulder; after a blink he was on his knees and same with his buddy. There standing, was a man with cloth around his eyes and ragged clothing used long ago. Right away Marwe felt that is had to be him, it HAD to, and with a slow moving lip he said.

"Are you, Neo?"

The man nodded and pulled Marwe up.

"Do you know where Zion is?"

"Zion? no one ever goes there except for the elders, that place is garbagy"

"Look kid, take me there, I need to speak with Morpheus"



Well that ends Chapter one, I know they aren't long but hey, if you want me to make longer chapters I'd be glad to!

A very interesting start, what happens next?

yeah...interesting...
I thought Neo NEEDS to stabilized the Matrix(ver.7) ...and he cannot return...
PLEASE CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY ANYWAY...i love the story...

hey, thanks for the encouragement, right at the moment I'm going to be playing a game so I'll do the next chapter like tomorrow

Originally posted by Swampy
A very interesting start, what happens next?
Yes I'm eager for part 2

quick quick...finished up the story...

HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHERES THE NEXT EPISODE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
im angry....

Ok, I'm going to to try to finish it up now

Neo and Marwe had arrived at Zion at last. The port T.T.P. (Transportation Tactical Patrol) has stopped them due to some trouble with another bus 73H8 who had gone hay-wire and is on a rampage.
Neo and Marwe walked into the East Gate, Neo was surprised about how everything seemed new but some remained old he had come to the thought that the war had been fierce and he had stopped it just on time. As they walked older men and women seemed to be the only kind here, they all glanced at Neo and seemed to be having a big smile on their faces as they passed; could they have known it was Neo? Silence went on until one man who didn't seem to old at all actually came out to Neo and yelled with joy.
"Neo? Neo, is that really you?!"
There was a sudden pause and Neo then had a little smile.
"Hey kid, you look.. different?" Neo was surprised about how he was much older looking now.
"Wow, I can't believe it! You're finally here!"
Neo nodded.
"I need Morpheus, do you know where he lives?"
"Yes, he lives on the middle floor cell 588, you'll notice cause it looks old and darker colored than the rest of the cells, see-ya Neo" and then he walked off into the crowd excitedly.
Neo looked up at the middle section of the rows of doors and started to walk forward to the elevator, once they both got there he had pressed the the buttons. They were quietly going up, but something was wrong Neo could feel it, but it was too late for him to do anything, a bus which was the 73H8 had crashed right into the elevator Neo hadn't been crushed but his stomache was queezy, he felt like they were falling and they were. Neo looked beside him and saw that Marwe had been knocked hard in the head since he was too close and was bleeding and knocked out (luckily or he would be screaming I bet) Neo tried to consentrate hard to reduce further injuries but he couldn't do much the elevator crashed to the ground and Neo slammed into the ceiling wall pressed into it by the bottom of the elevator. He could faintly hear screaming or yelling, he could hear Mr. Popper yelling that Neo could be inside there with a teenage kid but he only got "sure kid" or "stop joking cause someone is seriously hurt in there!" Four men came and tried their hardest to open the messed door and managed to open it 2 inches until they brought claws which seperated the too doors and too their amazement they saw the one man who had saved them there looking surprised and breathing; they imediatly pulled him out.
"What about the boy? What about hi-" Neo had passed out and was now being carried by the men to the medical area, they found him pressed hard against te left wall luckily not smushed to death, he was barely breathing and his heart rate was going slower and slower, they got 1 of their fastest guys to run for the medical area.
The word about Neo awakening spread throughout Zion and a bit out into the tunnels. Morpheus had been the 2nd person to visit him in the MA and was so excited to see The One. But this looked quite familiar to him, this scene of him laying down on the bed, reminded him about a time 20 years ago.

There, I think that might finish it up..

Originally posted by Freedom_Fighter
(Does anyone know the kid who took Mihune's mech? I just can't remember his name, did they mention it at all?)
It is the Mifune's mech...not Mihune?!?
the Kid is Mr. Popper...u will get his name from The Animatrix...
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More episodes pls...its sooo slow...

I like this story...short but sweet chapters...keep it up!

I'm really sorry about it being so slow, it's just.. I am busy with school and stuff

There we go, chapter 2 looks finished, I know I feel that the ending is a bit oozy, don't worry tho; he won't be knocked out forever.

whens the next part...
IM GETTING IMPATIENT....

HEY!!!
THATS IT???
CONTINUE...sigh
why stop suddenly!!!???!??!?!??!

don't keep waiting, look at different stories cause I am busy alot so I can't post new chapters all the time.. I hope I have spare time to but once it hits summer I'll try to post more...