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BackDoor

In a land before memory, and a time before space, there was a principle.
A thought echoed upon all nothingness. The mysteries created that foggy night shall hunt men kind throughout existence.

“…And there was a dream. And there was a space, and a memory.
The principle had triumphed and all mirages were now solid. It had begun…”
Alpheous Soran, The New Memories of Tomorrow




Silent Night


The streets are empty. A smell of fear finds it’s way into the neurotic sensors of the walking steel fortress…. with the mechanic quickness that only a twentieth fourth century OmegaBot can have, he pulls off his sonic harmonics-amplifier, a scream floods the air. Pain. And then…the morbid silence of Death makes the concrete walls of every building shiver with fear.
In the dead mind of the OB only one directive -> Mission Accomplished…. entering scanner mode.
The rebel’s body lays, in the corner, inactive. Blood makes a halo around his ears. He has been “pacified”.


It’s Search Night. In every skyscraper the Prophets are using their scanners, digging trough the privacy of every room…it’s a night of fear. Of disrespect.
One more. Only one more.
The quiet avenues do not confess the mess in the buildings. And they are not meant to. All is done in the shadows; the only sounds heard are of the rebels. A young force that still believes they can restore the dream of Alpheous Soran. The founder of The Orb.
Alpheous Soran was the first true Peace Scientist. His life was devoted to this project that he called “The Orb”. An entity that could predict the consequences of all human inventions and determine if they would be Good or Evil. As Soran continued his researched he found out new tasks for The Orb. The Orb could read into human minds and foresee if they would me criminals or peace man. In secrecy Soran kept the fact that The Orb was not a machine. It lived in Symbiosis with him.
He lived in a great palace, The Lab. In The Lab, one room was different. It was special. In the center of the building, deep underground, a round room was filled with computers, always running, always online.
Alpheous had implanted in himself a mechanism that communicated with the computers interface, giving them the intelligence needed to calculate and interpret the data. Soran did not believe in AI. He believed in himself instead. He had red too many books and seen too many movies to make that mistake…
…But Fate, it seems, it not without a sense of irony…
Infact The Orb became so dependent to Alpheous brain that it became symbiotic with him. Alpheous could no longer leave the building, or The Orb would not have a support for the enormous calculations and would meltdown.

But Alpheous research was blossoming. He had contributed to human evolution as noone had ever. Wars were stopped, problems detected before they became a problem, and evil men were convicted with the help of The Orb…and still…the symbiosis was a secret… Alpheous demanded to “work” from The Lab…saying that his work was too important for him to leave the house.

If he had only knew…

In my room I watch the stars…the only beauty left…they and my dreams.
My mind, somehow has found a way of dreaming, of getting away from this…nightmare. And in nights like this one, I dream.
The searches are mere propaganda, they cannot perceive if we are the rebels or not, they can only see if we are evil. But the atrocities are not bearable. It has to stop.
Once, silence was another meaning for peace. Now, it means fear. I must stop writing, the dawn is coming, and Stephanie should be here in minutes.
In this war, we have to be close, or be dead. Steph has sometimes been my reason to keep fighting…she and a couple more…everything I’ve got left…they, and my dreams.
Tomorrow I speak to my people. I must isolate myself for a while, give my ideas some thought. The message I have to reveal is not easy…not easy like this…silent night…
Oracle2.0

a little hard to follow, but u have great writing skills
MacLeod

whoa...I'll admit I didn't expect this.
It's an excellent Piece BD-frankly one of the most abstract and complex pieces I've seen. What's the idea here, then? A prequel to the machine wars? Where did you get the inspiration? A strong beginning, though a little confusing-please add more soon, there're alotta questions hanging! :D
Hitman

VERY interesting...unique...I'm very interested to see where this goes...agreed, it is a little hard to follow, but very compelling.
Truth

Whew...damn Backdoor! This is an absolutely astonishing start- definitely one of the most compelling and intelligent beginnings I've seen yet.
We have lots of questions...but I'm sure that's how you've planned this- you have incredible talent as a writer. Well done. And we're looking forward to reading some more!
Horatio

good story, well writen. Question, is MacLeod, Hitman, Truth and Oracle 2.0 running some sort of group cos every story ive read so far they have replied. its good in all, but its giving me questions
Hitman

No, not a group. We're just the ones who are always here; who read everything that comes through...we're...the regulars... ;) In other words, jump right in with your own ideas!
Oracle2.0

really? You mean we didn't form a Fan Fic cult? uh oh....
j/k. Hitman, Mac, truth and I have all written Fan Fics and in turn we put each other in them, so we usually check out who's new in the neighborhood, etc.
Haxxor

I have decided to join your ranks as part of the "Regulars", So here I am. Now its Hitman, MacLeod, Oracle2.0, Truth,
and Haxxor, thats me.

Great story so far, love the writing. Good JOB!!!!! The thing is, I follow it completely, and perfectly.
Oracle2.0

you're sure u want to join the ranks?
This is you last chance. After this there is no going back.
You take the blue pen, you wake up on your keyboard, believe whatever you want to believe.
You take the red pen, you stay in Wonderland and we show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
All we're offering is the Truth (about Fan fic), nothing more.
I couldn't resist!! :D
Hitman

LMAO...niiiice....but I don't think Truth would appreciate being offered without her consent... ;) Just kiddin' Truth, you know how I am... :D
Horatio

okay ur know the 4 musketteirs
Oracle2.0

lol- ironically, we already are; Truth wrote a fan fic about us being The Four Musketeers of the Matrix :D
MacLeod

Yeegad I feel so old now. :D
And a warm welcome from the masters of this lair! Yep, Hitman, me, Truth, O2, and BD for a time...we came in and took the place as our own. Feel free to join up, but don't think we're some panel of judged-we love variety! <winks> So what'dya say guys? Let's haze the newbies!!! jk lmao :D
As a side note, if you're really interested in what us Musketeers put up once (for some strange reason) check out O2's Capricorn (predecessor of Hard Core), Truth's Replay (The only one of her excellent pieces), Hitman's Blue Pill (The Days of Our Lives of the Matrix :D), and my Watchers (with Quickening if you like Highlander vs Smith). Most are pretty buried in previous pages but their still classics in my opinion (except for Hitman's piece-it hasn't faded yet! :p)
Enjoy, and cheerio, fanfic vets! :D
Hitman

You know, you're right, Mac...we have taken over this area as our own, haven't we? LMAO...oh well...we promise to be kind rulers...:D j/k. Indeed, everything in here deserves a read. I'm honestly impressed with the level of variety we've achieved in here and I truly hope that we continue to grow and evolve. Keep posting people, and keep inventing.
Hitman.
Oracle2.0

Indeed, this is my FAVORITE section(not hard to guess why)!!!
I've made friends here and I'm honored to be privliged to be in their stories, and be able to entertain them, in turn, with my own creations.
btw......
Once I've finished Hard Core, I'm writing YET ANOTHER fan fic!!! :D
Truth

You are? Yes!!!! (but go ahead, offer me around :D lol)

And so you're saying we didn't form a fan fic cult? Bloody hell.....what am I going to do with all those black candles and pentagrams now? lmao- jk.........

This forum is open to everyone, we were just some of the first posters. And back when this forum had almost no threads in it, and the readership was literally a circle of maybe 3 people, we had to stick together! lol. In turn to say thankyou we've featured each other in the stories themselves, which is a huge honour for me, I appreciate you guys so much- not least because you entertain me so much!

This is by far my favourite forum on the site, since I know I'll always find friends and amazing quality work. Thanx guys, this site would not be the same without you!

Oh, and I reply so much, not only because most things really are great, but I know when I first posted my fan fic it would have been awful if no one had replied. It's always nice just to receive a bit of acceptance and encouragement, right?

So what, we're now the 6 Musketeers? Mac, Hitman, O2, Haxxor, Me, and FYM (I think he gets to be in even though he didn't right anything yet :) ) BUt there's still plenty of room in here, and we're always thirsting for new fics!! :D

Thanz guys- here's looking forward to more!!
Oracle2.0

there's got ot be SOME famous group of six....besides the Brady Bunch kids.....
freeyourmind

Fantastic start BackDoor. Are you planning on continuing it any time soon? There's been 17 (now 18) replies but no continuation yet, which is a pity, cuz it looks set to be a fine piece...

Truth, not that I'm officially a Musketter I guess I have no choice but to add my own fan-fic. I have something in mind, but it's a bit complicated and very different to the style most of you guys have. But I'll start taking it seriously and hopefully I'll start posting soon... :)
Haxxor

Im now a musketeer, hooray. I just wish more people would reply to may fan-fic- The Reality Of the Unknown: The story- I mean Hitman must love this piece (and his has/still roxxored my soxxors), but I am wondering what about the rest of you. Its like you stopped replying to it a long time ago. I am curious to why. BackDoor, come back here, before your thread is taking over by the Musketeers. j/k :D
MacLeod

Haha. Yeah I miss the dude. Schoolwork, if I'm not wrong.
'Same as me, for I'm currently caught up in an exam that'll eat up 2 more weeks from now (and Revolutions! SOBS!) when I'm back though you'll be sure this'll be the first place I'll crack my knuckles over!
Hmm...Hitman and Truth are caught up in work and O2 in school too, so that about rounds up the roster. Since you're so free Hax, why not add up while we're gone? It'll be so great to own the place for awhile! :D And there'll be so much to read in your story when I return...don't worry, I'll post up! :)
As for you FYM-remember it only takes the first step, as so many here have found out for themselves. The story will grow by itself-trust me on that. I'll be waiting for that first step, my friend. :)
Ok guys that's all for now-Remember: One for all, All for the Matrix! lmao :D
Hitman

Agreed...Haxxor, get to work! You too, FYM...I want to see something soon...and BD, you've definitely got a potential following...an excellent start, but we're anxious for MORE...
BackDoor

I am! I wrote that begining, and then university classes started and I was complectly sucked in by it, and never finished the story! I apologise for my negligence....also......i already missed my friends here! in special Truth, Mcleod and O2!

Also....revolutions rokx the world!!! I was there, watching it right on day one :) :)

Everybondy clapped their hands in the ending...and I can say one thing......no one explected the matrix ending up with a rainbow sunrise :)

Not disapointing in my opinion...inovating.
Agent_Drake

Lol I almost cried... :(
Oracle2.0

I know! During the whole 'Super Brawl' I was on the edge of a cliff over a river of tears! I didn't want Neo to die so bad, for a second I thought :"I don't care if MIM is a stupid idea, I want it to be true, just to see Neo make it through this!" Of course, I now regret that thought, but anyways...
Agent_Drake

Lol I was thinking more the ending... lol.

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