Birth - Chapter 1

Here is my own little fan story. This is Chapter 1 of what i am going to call Birth. Hope you like it. Excpect Chapter 2 soon with more more more of everything!!!

~Juno

Darn Fine start I'd say! Waiting for pt2!!
-ended a lil' quickly though...and could u typr it here direct?

Thanks! Im going to work on pt2 tonight... Yeah, it did end quite early but I guess it will serve...

Found any of my hidden meanings and stuff? More of them coming soon!

I digs it. The only criticism I have is to stay away from some of the cliché’s from the movies, specifically "You have to see it for your self". I'm writing a fan fiction myself (Matrix V3.03 (http://www.matrixreloaded.com/showthread.php?threadid=4716)) and I thought "would my characters use the same phrases as morpheous? I spend hours and days trying to think of different ways of saying the same things that the movie said, but in my opinion it makes the story that much better. :confused:

And also I remote link to my stories because I haven't found a way to center text on this forum. I'd guess Juntaro has a similar reason.