the matrix re... somthin

this is my non-parody,matrix fanfic. its pretty long and is a bit confusing couse i tried to write the coreography. its still pretty kool though. enjoy!

btw,its too long 4 this site so its gonna b more tahn one post long.

Matrix-fan fiction
By Dan Lago

Opening scene:
Trinity-“its not worth it, its just one child, we have to get out of here”
Neo-“I won't let them get him, he knows enough to be considered dangerous.”
Trinity-“why are you so obsessed with this kid?”
Neo-“I don’t know.”
Trinity-“then let him go. There are others”
Neo-“i'm sorry trinity I have to do this”
Trinity-(short pause)“good luck”
Neo-“yah, I suppose even I need it at times”
They each go separate ways. Neo is looking into a window at a kid with headphones on, a car drives into the driveway, and two agents come out. Neo jumps from the ledge above the house onto the roof. The kid jerks his head up from the noise. He hears a knock at the door down stairs. The kid takes his headphones off and creeps to the stairs. He looks at the door and immediately both the agents look at him. He runs back to his room. The agents run up the stairs the kids mother chasing after all of them. The kid goes to the window just as the agents enter. The agents raise their guns. One shoots. The bullet in slow motion goes toward the boy. Neo’s hand reaches on the kids shirt and throws him up on the roof and the bullet barley nips the edge of his shoe. Agents look at each other and approach the window.
Neo-“are you ok kid?”
Kid-“neo?”
Neo-“hey”
Agents clime up onto roof
Agent 1-“the anomaly”
Agent 2-“Do we proceed?”
Agent 1-“of course”
Agent 3-“what about the last time”
Agent 1-“yes but this time we have an advantage”
Neo-“and that would be?”
Agent 2-“he doesn’t know”
Kid-“o ****!”
Neo-“what is it?”
Kid-“run”
An agent hand smashes from under the roof and grabs the kid’s leg. Neo immediately tugs it away and runs across the roof. From the roof he can see in the driveway several swat cars and 1 more agent car. Neo hops from the roof onto a car next door.
Kid-“wait what about my mom?”
Neo stops dead and turns his head toward the kid
Neo-“i'm sorry, i came for you”
The kid looks down sadly and stares at the ground. Neo runs again with the kid sulkily jogging behind. As they get to the end of the street a cars stops next to them.
Trinity -“GET IN!”
Neo and the kid get in the car.
Neo gets out the side window with an oozy and shoots an agent that comes by. It “zzzrrhhts” into a police person.
Neo gets back into the car as they drive.
Neo-“thanks for coming back”
Trinity-“I knew you’d need me”
They kiss quickly then sit back down.
Neo-“what's your name kid?”
Kid-“tom”
Neo-tom???”
Trinity-“wasn’t that name…”
Tom-“what?”
Neo-“nothin”
They hear sirens
Trinity-“Our friends could make it”
Neo gets out of the car back with the oozy and starts shooting at the cop car. Tom ducks under the back of the seat. The cops zzzrrhht into agents and shoot out the back seat window. Tom suddenly takes out a pistol from his coat and shoots at the car. Trinity and neo both look at him but decide to wait till later to talk about it. They take a sharp turn onto a bridge were another car on the wrong side of the road is headed straight toward them. They turn onto the other side of the road and swerve out of the way of another car. And the two cars collide. Four agents walk out of the car.
Agent 1-“we cannot let him out”
Agent 2-“were are they going?”
Agent 3-“they’re headed to the post office”
They zzzrrhht out of there bodies into someone else
Neo-“where did you get that?”
Tom-“my dad”
Trinity-“we can talk later, we still got coppers on our tail, get’em off!
Neo-“right, tom you get down!”
Tom-“I can help”
Neo-“not now”
Tom-“fine”
Neo gets out and continues to shoot at the cop cars until the oozy runs out of bullets. He throws the gun at the cop driving the car. He gets unconscious and swerves off the bridge. Neo reaches in his coat and pulls out a shotgun. He shoots another cop car once. Then cocks the gun shoots it again and it hits the tire it swerves in and out and then hits a car on the other side of the bridge. Suddenly an agent jumps on the top of the car and smacks neo in the face who falls out the window and drops his gun and grabs onto the open window. Trinity swerves and tries to make the agent fall off.

. Neo opens the door and it flies open. Neo jumps off and knocks the agent off the hood of the car. Neo tumbles on the road and quickly stops himself and stands up. He turns to the already standing agent and stares him out for a few moments. They both suddenly run towards each other. Neo punches him the agent moves his head quickly. Neo grabs a punch thrown by the agent and punches him. The agent flies backward hitting a suspender from the bridge. Neo turns and starts walking the opposite direction of the bridge. Suddenly another agent tackles him and neo flies into a nearby car. The car nearly flips to its side but falls back on it bottom. The man in the car gets out.
Man in car-“hey man are you ok?”
Neo-“get away from here” as he’s walking away
Man in car-“wh---“
Neo turns around and the man is an agent. All three agents slowly close in on him from all sides. Neo jumps up with his legs in a mid air split. The camera goes around him and neo kicks Agent#4 and Agent#5 at once. Neo lands and ducks from the agent#6. He trips the Agent#6 and the agent falls on his back. Agent#4 comes and punches neo twice both of which neo dodges. The agent kicks him neo grabs his leg and throws him at agent#5. Neo quickly turns in the direction of agent#6 who is running at him. He throws him over his body on to the car that the man came from. Agent#6 gets up leaving is a big dent in the hood of the car. The 3 agents all slowly come at him again. Neo does a jumps onto a cable line, jumps off it and onto the very top of the bridge. The agents follow.

Tom-“what about neo?”
Trinity-“he’s the one, he’ll manage”
Tom-“what do you mean… what's the one? And what's so special about my name?”
Trinity-“all your questions will be answered soon!”
Trinity pulls out her cell phone.
Trinity-“LINK! We need an exit!”
Cell phone-“we can't get’em to an exit, he has to take the pill, the mirror, the whole nine yards!”
Trinity-“I have an idea that might not work but its worth a try, when we get to the exit prepare my body.
Cell phone-“ok, there’s an exit at the post office, o **** there’s agents! Be careful”
Trinity-“ how’s neo?”
Cell phone-“good enough, you two need to focus though, you can make it.”
Trinity-“thanks”
She hangs up the phone
Tom-“who was that?”
Trinity-“you’ll find out soon.”
Tom-“stop saying that!”
Trinity smiles.

Agent #5 comes up to neo and punches him neo dodges it. He blocks a few kicks and another punch. he kicks the agent who walks back a bit comes back and swings at neo which he instantly dodges. Neo punches him and the agent blocks it. Agent#4 comes up from behind neo and grabs his arms. Neo kicks agent#5 with the support of agent# 4 twice and kicks agent#4 over his shoulder. Neo sees agent #6 jump from an other arch onto neo. Neo falls over and grabs onto a ledge on the arch. He pulls up does a flip over and kicks Agent#6 and agent#5 who were getting up. Then kicks off agent #5. He falls on the ground and zzzrrhhts back into the man from the car. Agent #4 breaks off a part of a pipe. Steam comes out of it. Agent#4 thrusts it toward neo who cartwheels past the agent. He grabs onto to pipes and pulls himself upward and kicks the agent back. He rips the pipes off and swings them at the agent. The agent barely dodges them. Agent #6 comes and swings at neo, neo rolls out of the way with his feet half off the edge of the top of the bridge. Neo jumps up and flips over the two agents. Agent #6 punches neo at the same time agent# 4 swings a pipe at him. Neo leans back on his hands. And pushes back up. He smacks agent# 6 in the face and stabs agent #4 simultaneously. Agent #4 zzzrrhhts into a police officer and falls off the bridge with a loud thud on the pavement. Agent # 6 grabs a pipe and swings at neo. Neo blocks all of his swings and thrusts with his pipes. The agent thrust his pipe right in neo’s face. Neo stopped them right in his face by squeezing the 2 pipes together. he pulls the two pipes back and the pipe in the center twirls for a second in mid air and then fell to the floor. Neo quickly stabs the pipe into the agents body and kicks the agent which walks back and falls in the far below ocean. Neo looked down to see a car suddenly stop. 1 woman jumps out of the car screaming and dashes across the bridge as the three agents walked out and looked up at neo. Neo flies away.

Meanwhile at the post office….

Trinity and tom quickly rush around the side of the post office knowing that agents would be waiting inside. They look as if they are going up a fire escape until trinity turns suddenly to a building next to the post office.
Tom-“I though we were supposed to go to the post office”
Trinity-“we are.”
Tom-“but the post office is right-”
Trinity-“listen, just trust me”
Tom-“k”
Trinity slams her shoulder into the door and an alarm goes off.
Trinity-“we gotta hurry, come with me”
They walk up the dusty stairs with the ringing alarm chasing after them. As they get near the top. Trinity suddenly turns to a window , opens it and looks in the window straight across it.

Trinity-“how far can u jump?”
Tom(nervously)-“why”
Trinity points through the window to a closed window on the opposite side of the alley.
Tom-“are you serious???”
Trinity-“o ****!”
Trinity ducks under the window yanking tom under with her.
Tom-“what”
Trinity-“agents”
Tom peaks up and sees an agent, gun drawn, across the room.
Trinity-“can you run fast?”
Tom-“kind of”
Trinity-“gods speed”
She bolts up and jumps through the window crashing through the window across the alley. The agent turns as trinity pulls a gun and shoots him in the head. The other two agents hear the noise from downstairs and start to go up the stairs. Trinity runs back to the window.
Trinity-“c’mon!”
Tom-“are you fricken crazy?”
Trinity-“you can make it, I did.”
Tom-“I dunno how but do you really think I can?”
Trinity-“just take the leap of faith.”
Tom stares back at her for several moments. Suddenly trinity hears a bang. She turns around to see the door flying back across the room. Trinity runs over behind a desk as they shoot at her. When they stop shooting trinity jumps out of the desk and runs quickly toward them they shoot at her she rolls and the bullets fly by her. She jumps up and kicks one of their guns up and kicks him in the face then jumping out of the way dodging another round of bullets coming toward her. She runs up a wall and kicks another agents gun but he retrieves it. Trinity quickly jumps up and over him and kicks him forward. The other agent comes at her and hits her twice which she blocks. Then he punches her and she flies back against the wall. Tom sees this across the room. He looks down and closes his eyes. He opens them and leaps across the alley. He grasps the ledge by the window. And dangles over the alley. He uses all his muscle to pull himself up. The agents too busy fighting trinities don’t notice him plop on the ground under the window. Trinity badly losing the fight sees tom come in. tom not knowing what to do creeps over to a desk. Trinity moves around one agent and purposely gets knocked in the direction of tom. She lands on a desk near his.
Trinity-“answer the phone already, ill keep’em busy!”
The agents who were running at her stop in their tracks and look around for the accomplice which she had talked to. She bolts up and runs at them to continue fighting but the agents refuse to fight and simply push her out of the way. Tom bolts out from the phone and tries to shoot at the agents wit his dads gun but they dodge every single one. They walk toward him until trinity starts to fight them again. Trinity now infuriated her plan is failing kicks and agent hard hitting the floor. Unfortunately the agent lands right near the gun that she had kicked from his hand. He gets up and kicks trinity while she is fighting the other agent. She flies into a table across the room. The agent brings the gun down toward her.
Agent#2-“you're becoming a bother.”
Trinity looks up and clenches her teeth. The agent fires a round of bullets toward trinity. Suddenly neo jumps from the ceiling landing in front of trinity. He stops the bullets with his hand.
Neo-“were even”
Trinity-“thanks”
Trinity gets up. Neo and her walk toward the agents. Tom using this distraction runs toward the ringing phone. Agent#2 hears his footsteps. He shoots at the kid who grabs the phone just as a bullet goes past him. Suddenly trinities real body opens her eyes and bolts up and looks around then falling back from pain in her neck.


To be continued….

so you wrote that?

yah... but i was kinda expecting input of some sort.