"The Matrix V3.03" is an original fan fiction based on the fictional reality of The Matrix Trilogy. In it, I attempt to explain ideas which are still at question. Season 1 details the discovery of the one two builds before the version in which Neo resolved a peace accord between the humans and machines during the fifth build of the third version of the matrix.
The Matrix V3.03 : Character Profiles (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-profiles.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 1 : Redline (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-01redline.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 2 : Scavenger (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-02scavenger.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 3 : Sweet Dreams (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-03sweet_dreams.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 4 : Sandmen (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-04sandmen.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 5 : Love and War (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-05love_and_war.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 6 : The Plunge (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-06plunge.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 7 : Homecoming (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-07homecoming.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 8 : Exordium (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-08exordium.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 9 : Mara (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-09mara.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 10 : Fulfillment (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-10fulfillment.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 11 : Enlightenment (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-11enlightenment.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 12 : Reconciliation (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-12reconciliation.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 13 : Special Delivery (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-13special_delivery.html)
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 14 : Teaser (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-14teaser.html) I enjoyed that Choi......just waiting for episode 2 now Don't mean to be confusing all of you, but that wasn't the latest version. I've made a name change. :o
Thanks for your complements though. They are very much appreciated. You've definetly caught my interest, Choi!
*waiting for part 2* Now that's cool. ;)
Drfinitely waiting for Part 2. :D I've just launched a new web site that I'm going to put all of my matrix related stuff at. Including this fan fiction. click here (www.alltel.net/~b4483) to visit it. There is a small clip from my next episode if anybody is intrested. New episode available click here (http://www.matrixreloaded.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4884) excellent man. now you got me waiting again. :D you're pretty good at this how long do you think you can make this story go on for? i'm hopin for a while cuz i'm enjoyin it. Thanks guys. I continue to write them as long as you continue to read them. I hope I can post a new one every week. I've already wrote episode 3. It's got some pollishing to do though. And I might have to change things in it depending on what I write in episode 4 (which I'm going to start to write tonight) You'll just have to wait until next tuesday :) Time to relieve the mid-week doldrums. Sweet Dreams everybody :) i liked this choi, its really good, ill tell all of my friends to read it, and afew ppl on msn messenger i kno love these kinda fics. beautiful work. As a fellow writer, and matrix fan, I'm impressed. Excellent piece of work! I didn't understand before because of the Movie-type presentation but now that I sat down and read it through its beautiful! More!! hey i love to make comics
but i wont sell it.
may i..... Originally posted by deadcowdying
hey i love to make comics
but i wont sell it.
may i..... Wow, I always though it would be cool if somebody did that, but I duno. Let me think aobut it. Originally posted by Choi
Wow, I always though it would be cool if somebody did that, but I duno. Let me think aobut it.
dude go for it! Alright, well the way I see it is I really can't stop you. My ideas are alterations of the Wachowski Brothers ideas which are owned by Warner Brothers. I'm not an expert on copyrights, but who really owns the ideas of The Matrix v3.03 is a little gray even in the court of law. So if somebody were to make a comic book on my scripts that would be an alteration of the ideas in The Matrix v3.03 which would cause that same gray area.
So if anybody wants to make a comic book or anything on The Matrix v3.03 go ahead, I'd be honored. I do have a few requests though.
1) Exchange some contact information with me. In each script I've included my name and secondary email address. I'd expect you to do the same.
2) Treat my screen plays only as guide lines. If your having trouble fitting the scripts in the word bubbles feel free to modify them. If your into comic books, this is also knowen as Marval style.
3) Credit me for writing the original script.
4) Don't make it suck :D
Oh, and 5) If you do get any money/opertunities out of it, show some love :D :D well. im not that proffesional like im gonna sell it or something. its just for fun.
but if im going to do it proffesional way. i'll inform you, i'll discuss the character design, and so on.
and one thing...why can i click the link to the new episodes. it keep says invalid link. wuts happened ? I'm asuming you had a typo and you can't access the new episodes.
Well I don't know. I can visit them just fine. Try and go to home.alltel.net/b4483 and access them from there. well i can see the link just fine, duno whats happenin on ur com deadcowdy! id love 2 c a comic version of this, i love comics and i love this fic! great. but dont push me to do the comic thing. i just said it becouse IF sometimes i interested to perform a comic, i already get the permission
and...i did accessed your homepage, but there's no link to the new episodes. maybe you can mail me the script, if you dont mind. plus, when i close the window, it hanged my pc...dont tell me im not allowed to see the new episodes pls :( Yeah, just feel free to do what ever you want, whenever you want.
I use java scripts and inline frames on my site, so if you don't use Internet Explorer 5+ or Netscape 6+ you'll probley have problems. If you are using a windows operating system just click on 'Start', select 'Run', type 'iexplore' and click 'OK'. This will open up Internet Explorer which will more than likley be able to view everything on the site. Feel free to inform me via a note that I've arrived in the script, I cannot wait to see how you detail me out. this fic is coming along great choi! i just read cptr3 and i am hooked! ok..thx
hey you know what. im working on the one v4.0. i have to admit that this thread influenced me.
the script has a back and forth storyline. but only take 15 min of duration. it doesnt matter though. hmm...just wait felllaaaaa Can you feel the tingle of excitement. It's tuesday and around noon the sandmen will come :D Originally posted by deadcowdying
ok..thx
hey you know what. im working on the one v4.0. i have to admit that this thread influenced me.
the script has a back and forth storyline. but only take 15 min of duration. it doesnt matter though. hmm...just wait felllaaaaa
cool sounds good :) just read sandman, I love this tuff! keep it coming! u do kno how to get the reader in suspense choi u kno that? still working.
the first script i made was on 12 am which made me very oddly put the language. english is not my daily language so...
should i give hints here? the one is not a hacker, he's a doctor. i try to make the surroundings covered majorly in white, even the rebel's outfit. :D :D :D Not much plot development here. I just wanted to have some fun with a training program. Enjoy :D The W. Bros. should try to buy the rights to your story and make it a movie or something! it's great! I tried to make a Matrix fanfic once, but it wasn't very good.....but I still have it to remind me of my failure. You, Choi, are definatly an inspiration to me! Originally posted by Th3M4TrixH4sU
The W. Bros. should try to buy the rights to your story and make it a movie or something! it's great! I tried to make a Matrix fanfic once, but it wasn't very good.....but I still have it to remind me of my failure. You, Choi, are definatly an inspiration to me! You're probley all going to hate me for saying this, but this is my first peice of fiction that I've ever written. My schooling is in argumentative writing. I'm pleased that this is being received so well by this community. FIRST!? Man, you have pure talent! Your fanfic flows perfectly, has great well-organized scenes, and has smooth, life-like dialogue that makes the characters believable. How do you do it? I hope I can continue to please the masses. I'm uploading The Plunge now. Originally posted by Th3M4TrixH4sU
I tried to make a Matrix fanfic once, but it wasn't very good.....but I still have it to remind me of my failure. You, Choi, are definatly an inspiration to me!
ive done tonnes, but they are crap, lol.
i agree with this dude ur a real inspiration choi keep the chapters commin! Choi, I can't believe how bloody diverse you are. Truly an artist for sure. I remember a long time ago when you gave me that very first pm and I still laugh my head off thinking of the content. You've probably long forgotten by now, but that day was a classic.
It has been a true joy to read, and Ima is right, you have a real knack about how to keep people in suspense. Keep it up as you are brilliant.
Thanks for all your input into this place from me and all the others you have given your free time too willingly.
love
UT Dude. Your script sucks. Take some creative writing courses. Sorry I've been leaving you guys hanging by not continuing. Just with work, school, and band who has time? But then if we never take time, how can we ever have time :) But fear not; the ideas that I was building up to are still in my head.
Maybe once the DVD comes out and I start gearing up to revolutions I'll find some time. Perhaps this is a good think. I was wanting to include the Merovingian in the near future, but we still are not sure of his motives.
I appreciate all of your positive feedback, and neoanomoly... ehhhh whatever.
Well with that I must say adu and good buy for we are all victims of causality. I drink too much whiskey, I must take a piss. Choi you have me drooling for more©©©© Like someone else posted this would be a great basis for a movie ¥there'd have to be a lot more filler though¤ or even an Animatrix-style short©©© PLEASE keep em coming this is some really good sh1t!
btw, I LOVE the vehicle references and the multiplayer shooter thing you had goin on! After all, the Matrix could just be the world's most immersive video game ever! I'm sure you'll all be happy to hear that I've explanded episode 7: homecomming. I've got one more scene to write, and it's going to be a doosie. Damn©©©©when I saw that Choi had posted again on my cp i was SOOO excited to read a little more©©©© for now I guess I'll just get a new roll of bounty and clean up the puddle on the floor© Hurray, Home comming is finnished. It's about twice as long as my normal episodes. I told you there was a lot to write about it. I just have to say that if The Matrix Online is anything like the end of Homecomming, I'll be a happy man. :D
Also I just wanted to take this oppertunity to say WTF?
WTF happened to this forum. MatrixMania??????? WTF? I don't know, I guess warner borthers could have gotten to the admin of this site about copyrighting The Matrix: Reloaded, but come on MatrixMania is the best you could come up with? You guys just may make me retreat to zero-dream.com
Anyways I just had to get that off my chest, I hope you all like the complete Homecomming. Choi you rock my world... This MUST be made transferred onto film or at least made into an Animatrix style short... Absolutely incredible and I really look forward to checking out your new stuff whenever I come online. You have to talk to someone about developing this into a full-on novel (like so many writers have done in the Star Wars universe) or a shoot-em-up action thrill-ride movie experience. The way you wrote it I could actually hear the soundtrack pumping as Signat was dodging bullets and taking out all comers. I'm just at a loss for words man. I don't think many other things I've read have grabbed me the way this story has. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!! Alright episode 8 time, Exordium (A beginning or introductory part, especially of a speech or treatise). I'd advise that before reading you do a little web search on a Three segment staff and a Jo staff. I think everybody knows what a kendo stick is, if not then search that too.
Now I'm not a martial artist, but I am a huge Bruce Lee fan. He taught me through "Enter The Dragon" that the martial arts is actually and ART. I guess he also taught me what art was; the expression of an emotion. With all that aside, when I have my character use these staff weapons, I'm making everything up in my head from what I've seen, so it might be hard to comprehend what I'm having my characters perform and what they are performing may not be in the proper form; however another important lesson that Bruce Lee thought is that the perfect from is not to have a form... I don't know what I'm saying, just enjoy the episode.
:)
And I always love to hear all of my readers feed back.
Thanks a bunch for your complementary words UnbrokenMirror. When I'm writing these episodes I always imagine them in an anime artistic style. Like when I blew signats head off in the end of homecoming, Kill Bill was in the fore front of my mind.
-later everybody. I fixed the titles of each the episodes. Oh yeah, and I also threw episode 9 up there. Though you guys would like that too.
Mara -- Slavic Legend -- Evil blooddrinking female vampire that attacks people during their sleep. I fixed up episode 9 a bit. I released it at 11pm just after I finneshed it. I knew I should have read through it again, but I was ancious to get it out.
If you already read through it, don't bother reading it again, just cosmetic changes. Except perhaps the last line. Alright, I hope this isn't as ugly as I think it is. I just have so many events that I want to take place at the same time, that I don't quite know how to write it other than breaking it into three parts. I hope you guys are grasping the concepts that I have invisioned, but then again I look like not a lot of you are responding to my recent writings...
Oh well, I've got at least one more episode after this one in me so I'll write it anyways. You know, for being the 3rd most viewed series on this site (Though Red pill is fast approaching), I sure am not getting much feed back. Oh well...
Anyways I'm getting into some pretty revolutionary things here. Sorta opening up my complete view of the Matrix universe. The bulk of this episode take place in a mid-evil gothic cathedral, so I've included a basic plan for the typical cathedral to help you follow along. So read up and enjoy, it's got what I think is one of my best fight to date!!!
http://home.alltel.net/b4483/cathedral.jpg
As alwayse feedback is much appreciated. I think I'm going through withdrawl :D Surely there's more to this story? I haven't been around lately but I was looking forward to a new chapter since the last time I was here. WOW! Somebody has been reading it. (: I have a load of ideas, but couldn't find any reason to take the time to write them down. (pluss I've been adicted to Final Fantasy XI as of late). If anybody else would like to see this continue, please let me know. I'd be happy to write more. I finally had some free time at work, so I proof read episode 11. Damn there were a lot of typo's there. I also renamed it "Enlightenment". Those wishing to free their mind, enjoy :) Is that an episode 12 I see? Why yes it is. I finaly had some spare time at work, so I got my mind back to writing. It's a little short, but I'm warming back up. I think it came out pretty good.
I'd like to dedicate this episode to Unbroken Mirror. With out your support I probley would have thought this fan fic had been deleted off of the server, and this episode would have never came about. THANKS!
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 12 : Reconciliation (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-12reconciliation.html) Awesome dude... keep it coming! I don't get on here much anymore but this story is pretty much the main reason I come back to check the site now and then. People are reading, even if they aren't responding :) Ok, ok, ok, It's been a while. Sorry to leave you guys hanging. But you can all thank kzap for inspiring me to finnish this one up because I was about to accept putting this project down for good.
Hi,
Sorry for the delayed reply.
I have finally gotten around to adding your great fan fiction to our
website:
http://matrix.ogaming.com/data/1547~FanFiction.php
It truly is a awesome piece of work. If you have any more chapters, please
do send them.
Thanks,
kzap
I had a heck of a time finding this old thread though, some how the agents moved it to The Matrix forum from the Fan Fiction forum. Daja Vu, yes?
If you wana read more, just let me know!
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 13 : Special Delivery (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-13special_delivery.html) Umm lemme think about that one.....YES! Where the hell have you been? OMG it's so good to see you again honey. Don't you dare go anywhere lol. Well drop by more often at the very least please. This has made my night AND day here. Where have I been? I've been romping around FFXI on the Odin server. If anybody shares the same hunting grounds, toss me a /tell. I go by the name 'Arbiter'. (Hmmm) where did I get that name from? Well I wanted Tachyon, but it was already taken !>.<!
I'll try and drop by more often for you UT ^_- Ha ha...its good to have you back. But seriously...why've you taken so long to return? Your stories are missed by the vets here! Do post up soon...and check out the other fanfics around. ;) Where have I been? I've been romping around FFXI on the Odin server. If anybody shares the same hunting grounds, toss me a /tell. I go by the name 'Arbiter'. (Hmmm) where did I get that name from? Well I wanted Tachyon, but it was already taken !>.<!
I'll try and drop by more often for you UT ^_-
Ahhh so that's what you've been up to? Well in case Mac hasn't made it obviously clear the first time, and neither did I (in here and pm ahemmm) you've been sorely missed angel. Please stick around.
*UT grins from ear to ear* Hey, guess I haven't been sticking around as much as I said I was going to, sorry :cry: I still have all of my ideas including multiple matri and the tower of babal; however I'm too lazy to write any of it down.
Also I want to appologize to anybody who was using my avatars as I removed them from the web space (I needed it) I still have them on disk so if you want them just ask.
Perhaps I will see all of you soon in the rabbit hole. Can the ending really suck that bad? Well you know I have more to write about; however I have a lot more to do before I can touch on the exodus from zion on the tower of babal. So inspire me, what do you think should happen with Mara, Cherub, Faust, and not to mention The One?
The Matrix V3.03 : Episode 14 : Teaser (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-14teaser.html) In an attempt to make my stories more approachable, I've created a Character Profiles page that gives a brief bio of all the main characters. It also has a hand full of definitions of words that I coined
The Matrix V3.03 : Character Profiles (http://home.alltel.net/b4483/Fan%20Fiction/v303-profiles.html)
In addition, I'm going to add a synopsis to the posting of each episode.
Furthermore in an effort to make the characters more memorable, I've color-coded the main characters. I'm not sure how good that idea is, so give me your opinion.
And lastly episode 13 will be the last episode for "The Matrix V3.03." I will be creating a second season still yet unnamed which will continue the saga of the Arbiter and his crew aboard the Nostradamous. I recognize that the length of my story is just too long to pick up and read casually over the iNet. Hopefully by starting a new, I will be able to pick up new readers.
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