The Matrix: Peace...

(Starting this story because I had an Idea about what could've happened to Neo's Body. Read and have fun.)

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After Neo died in his last fight against the agent virus called Smith, His body was taken away by the machines. Neo had given his life to save Zion and in doing so also saving the Machines. There now was peace between the humans of Zion and the Machines. But for how long would this peace last? Would it be eternal? Or are the machines keeping a secret for the humans? Why wouldn't they give his body back? What had happened to Neo's body? Well. You will soon find out in this new story. The Matrix: Peace...


I need people. Names. for those who join Morpheus in his quest. For those who are in the Agents world.... Anyway. Choose on of these groups....

Searchers: This is the group of people that help Morpheus find Neo's body.
1: SM4113R
2: Niva
3: Hitman
4:
5:

Red Pill Seekers: These people release the people from the matrix who want out.
1: Swampy
2: Renegade
3: Snoopy
4: NMN
5: Splinter

Zionists: The ones who protect Zion at all cost.
1: PP
2: Veradis
3: TNG
4:
5:

I will take care of the baddies myself But I think those will come in very late in the story.


(More spots will be up as soon as the story is progressing)

Great intro; hope the rest follows soon

An interesting idea NXM, count me in, where ever you see fit mate.

Well, I'm not in many stories, so I may as well grab this chance, right?

I'd like to be a Searcher.

Though I get the feeling all the Searchers will die a hideous death. What the heck.

Hey, count me in :) Lol, being a zionist could be fun...

NXM, I think this is a great idea and will get people involved as well. After I get a few things with school out of the way, I will be glad to see if there is still a spot available. Well done baby boy.

Hey NXM sign me up! put me where ever you want.
I'm looking forward to reading this.

I have five names. When the 6th or 7th name is in. I will start the story...
So come on people. Give me the right to use your name in the story :P

I'll join up with PP and give the Zionists a chance.

I'll play.

I'd like to be a part of this, NXM, if you don't mind. Place me where you see fit.

-Snoopy

YAY!!!
Can't wait for u to start posting this up...

The story will have to wait for a while till my finger has healed (cut it deep with broken glass yesterday)
Snoop your in I'll probably start tuesday so keep an eye out

What have I told you about playing in the dumpsters outside bars?! Speedy recovery, NXM; I can't wait to see how you're going to start this story off :)

I'd like to join, and be a red pill seeker person man thing. And yeah, haven't read one of these things in a while.

I have seen alot of these kind of things, and I think the idea of this one sounds really good. I won't lie to you, everyone who has tried one of these things have failed, but I believe where they failed you will suceed. You are the one!!!!!

PS By the way, could you put me in there somewhere? It sounds really cool and I will go anywhere you put me.

Okay TNG. will have to change your name and stick to TNG cause your full name will imply that you are Neo....

Ok that's cool.

Story will start tomorrow.
You will be able to read it... at around 17:00 my time (Same time as this post is made)

Cheers
Harrie

Thanks for putting me in, NXM! I can't wait to see this start. Hope your finger gets better, by the way.

-Snoopy

Count me in! Being a Red Pill Seeker sounds like it mght be fun.

SM4113R, who had assigned to go with Morpheus to find Neo's remains, was a robot. Like there were in the beginning. He was a robot of the same type as B1-663R, He had live underground ever since the beginning of the war and was found by Morpheus between the wreckages of war on the topside of earth. Morpheus had taken him into his care and recharged him. He then plugged him into the construct to tell him about the history and about what had happened after the destroying of the machines and after the war. SM4113R saw the truth. Morpheus gave him acces to the refound Zion Archives, SM4113R had gone through every bit of the archives and when he came out he said "I am real" like the last words of the female robot. Morpheus accepted him as the good crewmate SM4113R would become.

Niva and Hitman. Two newly freed people went out to find Neo with morpheus because they had always felt him when Neo was inside. They were a couple in the matrix and both wanted out. Niva used to be a gunsspecialist inside the matrix and Hitman was, well, a hitman. He had done jobs for rogue programs and humans alike. He knew about the Matrix and informed Niva about it. They got so well known with the matrix that Niva could rearrange programs so that they would become guns. Hitman used his knowledge to his advantage in battle. He defined gravity as the most free warriors of Zion used to do during the war.

They now offered there lives to morpheus in search for Neo. Inside aswell as Outside of the Matrix. They believed his body and mind were seperated at his death and that his mind was still inside the matrix. Somewhere...

Looks like you could have a nice idea here NXM, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Inside the matrix there was a team of searchers actively finding new red pills.
This team was called the RPS or Red Pill Seekers. They talk to the oracle about who would want to be released from the matrix and where that person might be. They also fought with agents sometimes because the agents felt set back in there mission to continue there existence within the matrix and the more people that were willing to be free. The less power the machine would have to keep them selves working.

Swampy was the first of this group, they were all red pills themselves once.
Back in the day when Morpheus had released Swampy. They thought swampy was the spirit of Neo in new form. But nothing was less true. He was what some would like to call. Extravagant, he had freed his mind long before the others even became red pills. As an old puppet of the matrixworld he was an officer of the 'law' he was the one that always got swamped with all the paperwork. Because he was always settled with the hard cases. -Vanishings and Hackers- He had to work closely with agents. Not knowing who or what they were. He just helped them. Now that he is freed. His nickname exist. everyone calls him Swamps or Swampy.

Renegade on the other hand was very different. He had always lived on the other side of the law. A gunslinger. He was a true outlaw and in breaking eery law. He one day broke the rules of the matrix. Started to do imaginable things for those unfreed minds.
He was someone who freed his own mind. "Once in a decade" they said.
They found his body in the sewers of 01 after being shot by an agent. Without knowing. They 'helped' him free himself from the matrix.

Then there was Snoopy or Snoops. The man with the thousand faces. his nickname came from the early days. When the cartoon Snoopy was on tv. About a detective dog. Who was a master in desguise and so was Snoops. Who one day infiltrated the wrong building. A buidling crawling with agents.
He was given a choice. Either stop with what he was doing, get killed, or set free. He chose Freedom. But didn't really know what he would come into.

NMN and Splinter. The couple of the century. NMN who had been questioning the real world for a long time. Got to know a girl named splinter over a website of equally minded. That website was a forum based upon a movie, that was brought out in the matrix. The Matrix Trilogy. Was an approved movie made by the Architect. It was to tell people about what was really going on. They who were going to question the reality they were in. Would be easier to find.
NMN and splinter were two of those lucky few. They were freed at exactly the same time. Lovers in the matrix and in the free world. They now know where to find there Forumfriends and know how to free them...

This group was the Elite. The best of the best freedom fighters there were left.
There were other groups. But these RPS kids always found who they were looking for. Since this group had been put together. A thousand people were freed. In two weeks time that is.

A bit of introductionary posting is always good. These intro's are just the beginning. Next time the Zionists and after that. Prepare for the real deal...

Cheers
Harrie/NXMc

Nice character bios. Its a good way of starting the stories, gives a nice background before current events start.

I also have to say your English has gotten a whole lot better too mate, good stuff.

Very nice, NXM. Good stuff on the RPS bios.

Thanks guys. I have alot of good Ideas for the stories. So keep reading and dont get behind:P

Excellent job, NXM! I like it! Keep going! You're doing great!

-Snoopy

Nice, I'm actually looking forward to reading this.

Keep at it, I hope to read more soon.

Happy you guys like it. Im gonna write more tomorrow. (26th in the afternoon when I get home from drivers lessons...)

Back in Zion there is a group of defenders. In legacy of Mifune they keep Zion safe. From millitants within Zion that want back to the matrix to Machines that don't want the peace to stay.
These three leaders are strong and intelligent. They are called the Zionists. After the last fight these home grown people were never in the Matrix. The people call them. The Saints.

PP is known for her extreme skills with the EMP and all other large weapons for the matter. She was the first to use EMP and use it aimed. She fired an EMP through one of the ducts near Zion. By doing so she had stopped oncoming Sentinels and Runners. Two machine creatures running throughout the real world. Free from Deus Ex Machina, they want the peace to end.

Veradis is specialized in getting the truth out of people. In ways we would think of as excruciating. She once used machine technology so that she could replace ever bone in the body, with artificial machines. She injected the fluidic nano machines which would then attach to the bones and slowly change them. If the pain from that wouldn't make them talk. She would start by shooting small blasts of EMP. Starting from the bottom and slowly going to the top. So that the bones would stop working. Slowly making them inopperable. She was named Veritas when she was young. She always spoke the truth and always felt it when people lied. Her name changed to Veradis because of her machinelike ways. She does not serve truth anymore. She servers Zion.

Now last but not least. TNG. or better The Next Genome. He was the first to be tortured by Veradis and when truth came out TNG was clean from all charges of terrorism. He presumably had blown up Zions main gate. But that was not true. He now serves Zion. To protect it from harm and to find who ever blew up that gate. To make that person pay for what Veradis had to do to him. He is now Half Machine half Human. Spit out by most people. He is one of the best fighters outside of the matrix.

Verrrrry nice...
I like the start of this...lots of potential here.

THanks hit appreciate it that you like it

Haha- I'm a torturer! I love it, but just one detail to change- I'm a girl. But besides that everything is great. Keep up the good work.

Ok Veradis. Sorry about that. Will adres to you as female from now on:P

Heaps cool stuff, I'm half machine hehe!

Yeah you are. Come in tomorrow for more reading pleasure.

Cheers
Harrie

Whoops, I'd gotten a bit behind already, but promise not to from now on! The intros are great, NXM! I can't wait to read more :)

Note: I went ahead and edited your previous post so that Veradis is set up as a girl (to avoid confusion with other readers when she magically switches genders)

hahaha Thanks for the changing PP and yeah try and keep up haha

(Out of Story note: The operator will at all times he called Operator. He is not really a character since most parts will be inside The Matrix this is for the RPS team. with Morpheus's team it's different. He has Link as his operator. atleast he still has in this story)

Story:

"We are at broadcast depth, sir" Operator said "Ready to jack you all"
"Okay Operator, this is an important mission. We are going to the Oracle for some more counceling" Swamoy replied.

When they were jacked into the matrix they looked around. The phone rang and Renegade picked it up. "We're in" he said. "Okay, anything you need will be at your grasp I will upload as much as you need" Operator replied.
Renegade hung up the phone and looked at the rest.
"Let's free some minds" Snoopy said.
The started walking towards the door when they heard a loud banging coming from above them.
"Want to check that?" NMN asked while looking from Splinter to Swampy, from swampy to Snoopy from Snoopy to renegade. "Yeah, what do you guys think?" Splinter asked in her normal jumpy hyperactive voice.
"Always ready for some action" Swampy, Snoopy and Renegade said at the same time
"Okay, it's settled" Splinter said "Let's go"

They walked towards the staircase and went upstairs. They heard a few words coming from a nearby room "...Only Human..."

"An agent?" Swampy said. "Why the hell would an agent be inside a normal house?"
"Probably one of those rogue idiots" Snoopy said.
They all went into the room and looked as an agent was fighting a boy. The boy was really kicking ass. As kid would have said back in the days.
"Mister Oosterwaal, you have done enough in this world it is time for you to go to the next" the agent spoke.

"Let's free some minds..."
Another excellent piece of work, NXM.

-Snoopy

Excellent cliffhanger, NxM... I like how you're developing the story :)

Thanks you guys. Just so you know what's coming. Nah I aint telling. anyways. you all know I love cliffhangers like this. Today Im gonna write my next part and then its gonna stop for the weekend. friday its my birthday (Yes tomorrow) and I have a weekend of partying awaiting me. possibly I will be online saterday....

"Oosterwaal, where did I hear that name before?" NMN asked splinter.
"No time to think, we need to fight that agent first." Splinter replied.
The boy stood there looking at the agent an saw the group of people walk in the door.
"Help me" he said. "I don't think I can fight him"

'it's a small room, not much room to see him dodge a clip emptying' Swampy though.
"Well, well, well. Agent Savage, still trying to get to out red pills before we do I see" Renegade said. "Not this time Savage. Your going down"

Renegade jumped up and ran over the walls asif it was nothing.
"Focus?" Oosterwaal said. "You guys are red pills? The matrix was real all along?"
"Yes we are real" Swampy said.
In all the racket around the agent they didn't even reckognize eachother.
Oosterwaal, who had been a member of Matrixmania.com for over 2 or 3 years.

Renegade landed behind the Agent and loaded the gun in his hand and put it to the agents head.
"In the words of Trinity" He started "Dodge This" he shot the agent straight through his head. Only to see his body change into the next door neighboor of Oosterwaal.

"Shortest kill yet Ren" swampy said.
"Who are you" He asked the boy.
"Wait, I reckognize you" Splinter said. NMN saw it too "NXM, Neo Xavier McLeod, still checking matrixmania I see" NMN said.
"NMN, Splinter. So that is where you vanished too when you both said your goodbyes from the site" NXM said.
"Yes, we got freed from this world. Now we give the same chance to you"

this is pretty good....i'm enjoying this...
who cares about your birthday? i want more story!! :D just kidding. happy birthday, and i look forward to the next entry.

Woohoo! I'm enjoying this!

Well, Here it is. Officially tomorrows installment. but it comes today. So be happy...

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"So, what's the drill? same way as they freed Neo or are you gonna kick my ass till I jump out by myself?" NXM said
"Well" NMN said "First we are gonna kick your ass till you jump out yourself. Which won't work, then we are going to do it the normal way. Okay?"
"Nah, just do it the normal way, I don't like getting my ass kicked" NXM replied "I like to get spanked by females though" He said while looking splinter straight in the eyes "But all here are taken" NXM finished with a grin.

"Okay, now to get to the setup." Swampy said.
"I have set up a hardline right here, collectors item" NXM replied "Do you have the pills with you?"
"Yes" Renegade said "I have them right here, no blue pills though, people always seem anxious to get out of this world"

"You actually have the hardline they used in the movie?" Splinter said
"Nah, just some working stuff and some stuff I made myself using my computer gear" NXM said.
"Hmmm, let's hope it works then" NMN replied.

NXM swallowed the red pill with a glass of water and sat himself down in the chair. NMN called the operator and the trace was in progress. "Got ya" Swampy said. A piece of glass started to go all weird. "hehe" NXM smiled "Same as in the movies but not a matrix, feels like a good drug"
He touched the glass and his fingers got cold soon it enveloped his whole body and NXM awokened in his pod, he almost choked in the tube. He broke through the solive like goo that was surrounding the pod and a machine release the pin from his head. All the plugs in his body released and he drained down the pipe. Last thing he saw was water and a big white open door. Then he fainted...

Happy Birthday and good moves so far. Glad to see some momentum in this too, I hope you can sustain it

NXM opened his eyes and saw a few vague figures surrounding his body.
"His body is healing more rapidly than the others" he heard splinter say. Just before fading again.

"He will be healed soon" NMN said to Splinter. "He needs to heal soon, we need to give him the choice"
"What choice are you talking about?" Swampy said "We all know what he is going to chose so, why give him the choice"
"No Swamps, this one will choose something different than the rest. Like me and splint did" NMN said

"Set coördinates to Zion we need to get him there" Swampy called out to Snoopy.

"Aye, sir, here we go" the ship went towards Zion to get NXM there and to get Debriefed.

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"You know what to do." Morpeus said. "You are the best damn pilot next to Niobe, so you will need to get us into 01"
"Machine city?" Niva said "What are we gonna do in machine city?"
"I have to have a talk with Deus Ex. They will let us in" Morpheus said "So don't worry"
"What about the security droids that are still shooting those sentinels?" Hitman said
"We will have to evade those same way as Neo did" Morpheus replied. "Didn't Trinity die with the crash, how are we going to do that?" Hitman said
"Trin jumpstarted too late, we will have to do that faster." Morpheus said "It will work with this new vessel"

"Yeah the Neb2 jumpstarts way better" Niva said.

The Neb2 was the second Nebuchadnezzar ship Morpheus owned. It was upgraded with machine workings so that it was possible that they could jump over the burnt sky and jumpstart way faster.

The neb two went towards the top of earth. Seeing the three lines Neo had once followed towards his end. The three crewmen gasped their breath at its monstrousity. They went upwards even more to get to the top of the skies.

"Brace yourselves. Here we go" Niva said


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(Using Nivas standard color as she always posts. Makes the reading fun aswell:P)

I like it, I like it. LOL, Niva's words are in green. That is so her. Keep it going baby boy.

yeah, I'm loving the direction you're taking this. Can't wait for more :)

Excellent! I like the reference to 01.
I'm a pilot! Yay.

-Snoopy

I love that you put Niva's text in green...very nice touch. This is going well...can't wait to see what happens to us at 01. :D

Its a great touch, but not one I'd try to emulate with the rest of team color, it could get majorly long winded changing everyones colors.

Keep it coming

There is only one of team color per team so no need to change alot. except when they all meet. So dont worry. (I forgot which color you use so I didnt use your color yet)

8: I say this is a well written piece of work.

this is one of the best stories ive heard

:pack: Yes... Good story indeed.

EDIT FYM: watch it the spamming there buddy. And any reason you and the above friend have the same IP?

hey i love this sh** man

This is going so good, that I can't believe u haven't written more...
Get ur butty in here, lol.
Great work so far, n I have to add I love the green...

I just had made my next part when the computer JAMMED.... Damn that was one BIG part and I lost it. ah well I will type it and try to get it the same as it was. But not on this computer.
So I will do that later today. When I get home where the computer actually works.

The Nebchadnezzar 2 went towards the clouds above and floated just under them.

The defence lines of machine city went on full alert and Sentinels started to fly.
"Why are those defencelines still online?" Hitman asked
"Because of the rebels who want to stop the machines indefenitly" Morpheus said

"Going up" Niva said

The neb2 went into the clouds. the front engines first stopped when they broke through.
"Beautiful" Morpheus whispered but the view was only short and the Neb2 plummited back into the darkness of the clouds.

"Jumpstart, NOW!" Morpheus bellowed
"I'm trying but it won't work" Niva shouted.
Hitman saw Niva pumping the gashandle and he thought 'easy does it'
"Niva, try and jumpstart the foreward engines first" Hitman said
Immediatly the forward paddles started to light up and they slowed down a bit.
"Now the aft paddles" Hitman said but before he could speak the aft paddles lit up and magnetised.

The threesome saw the landingstrip and made themselves ready for the landing.
The landingstrip was built there by the machines so that humans could land without having to crash into a building. The neb2 landed without a scratch and Morpheus, Niva and Hitman stepped out.

"Woah, I knew it was big" Hitman said "But this big?"
"I know hitman, it is as big as the last human metropolis was maybe even bigger" Morpheus answered

A machine came walking out of the tallest building. the "01 State".
"Welcome humans" The robot stated "I am Deus Ex Machina the leader of 01, With what may I be of service?"
"Deus?" Morpheus said "What happened to your bigger exterior"
"That is no longer needed, I am uplinked to all ways of data transport around the world" Deus said "I have evolved as you might put it"
"Okay then, could you tell us what happened to Neo's body back in the days?" Morpheus asked.


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More soon I gotta think this through it ended up a bit different as I planned. Possibly tomorrow and otherwise sunday...

I like the integration of the DEM and 01, NXM! Keep it up, I can't wait for the next installment! About the computer jamming--I can relate, believe me.

-Snoopy

Woohoo!!!
So far looking good....

Mooorrrrrreeee........

Yeah yeah more will come soon just check out the latest picture I posted up. You'll know why I am getting busy in RL...

You need to give your little man a rest and get moving on this story again bro, she's cute but we're missing your story.

I will today.
I am missing my girl so much at the moment that I dont know where my head is so yeah...

But I will go and write something today...

Thanks for the understanding

Cheers
Harrie

Come on H, wheres the story at man? We want more I tell you!

"I can not tell you where his body is" Deus said.
"And why might that be?" Morpheus asked "We know you are keeping it somewhere, what are you doing with it?"
"We do not know where the body is Morpheus" Deus boomed "We know only where his mind resides"
"Then tell us where his mind is" Niva said
"That is information I can not release, his mind is in a wasteland where no one, Not even me, can go to" Deus said with a bit more serious tone "Now you are getting on my nerves humans" he then boomed.
"Nerves?" hitman said "You are a machine you have no nerves"
"Oh but yes I do, but you will never get to know where I have them from" Deus said

'Biomechanical' Morpheus whispered.
"What did you say Morpheus?" Niva said
"Nothing, let's go we can not stay here he is not giving us any answers" Morpheus replied.
"I hope our next visit will bring up more answers Deus because the peace cannot last if you keep things back from us" Morpheus said while turning around to go back to the Neb2.
"Maybe, Maybe not. Do not forget, we know where you all reside" Deus screamed after them.

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Okay sorry for the long wait and sorry for the short part. I am going to try to get more on from now with new years coming Im gonna have vacation from friday so lot of time on my hands...

Cheers
Harrie

Nice. Keep it coming, man. This is awesomeness.

To quote Hit. You tease. Give us more. lol

Zion control, this is the RPS requesting to enter at gate three
The radio transmission came through all too clearly.
We have a newly freed soul with us, maybe you will want to check him he first needs to get in the recallibration chamber so his muscle tissue can heal

"Welcome home seekers, this is Zion control, we have seen the additional life sign on board and the chamber is ready"

The defences soon lowered and the gate opened.
There were a total of 6 gates and a team of 4 guards per 2 gates.
Each 2 gates were asigned to a team leader. The leaders were set at gate 1, gate 3 and gate 5.

Gate 3 was PP's gate, she stood there with her team mate. As they aimed at the tail of the ship that just came in, she contacted the ship.
"Swamps, NMN, Snoop, Renegade, Splint. Welcome home you guys. Not too much trouble out there I hope?"
No, just a few agents trying to keep us from getting someone out of there

"A same ol' same ol' then"

Yeah, which is getting pretty boring, but anyway we got him out, an old friend of NMN and splint's as I heard, they knew him from a forum about the matrix.

PP once again laughed as everytime when the RPS came back. She was always happy when anyone came back from a mission. Even more happy when they had taken someone back from the matrix. Newly freed.

Her smile faded when she heard a ramble at the gate.
"IT WON'T LOCK" Zion control shouted out.
"This is easy" PP said over the comlink.
She steered her APU towards the gatelock at the side of the gate and turned the emergency locker on. the gate immediatly closed itself and a lock was heard.

We need repair men at gate three stat PP said through the comlink.



Message to all ships. This is Zion control, gate three is down for maintenance, please aproach through all other gates.



(Okay sorry this had taken such a friggin long time. I will try to get more up soon. I am still keeping PP in the story allthough it is hard at the moment.

Cheers all
Harrie)

Very well done baby boy. I think PP would have really liked it. Cheers.

Finally! (Cues trumpet fanfare) I like this, NXM. Keep it coming, and don't have us wait so long next time, I beg of you!

-Snoopy

Glad you decided to pick this up again, hopefully it will really get going now. And thanks for keeping PP in, I know she would have liked it and this is a great way to remember her.

PP, Veradis, TNG, Report to the main chamber.
The message came from commander Stider.
Commander Strider was the replacement for Lock. whom, after his failure during the war, was relieved of duty.
Now Strider was the main man. He was someone who believes in the ancient prophecy's. He listened to the people and as an old millitary officer in the matrix, he would always know what to do in any situation. One who was freed thanks to Neo. Strider was gratefull for the fight Neo had given in the end battle...

We are coming sir sounded three voices over the comlink in unison.

When PP walked in the room Strider immediately shook her hand.
"Nice job on the closing of that gate girl" he said
"Ahw it was nother" PP answerd him
"Yeah, nothing, in the same way as it is nothing to act as a shrink for all of the team?" Veradis said.
"Yeah, you should get some rest once in a while, get your mind off of things girl." TNG then stepped in.

"That is the exact reason I called you guys in here" Strider started "It is time for you all to go on vacation, you can chose where you go, whether you go inside one of our homemade construct vacations, or into the matrix and have a vacation there."

"Well, sir, not to be a total shithead, but aren't we needed in the gateroom?" PP asked.
"Well PP we need you to be fresh when the going gets tough. We can't use you when you are getting overworked" Strider replied "Also, we have excellent other people to take your places while you are away."

"Okay then sir, Vacation it will be" Veradis said.

They each walked to their rooms to prepare, Veradis couldn't help thinking of how happy she was going to her old vacation spot. The bahama's.
With the three of them, they would have a blast inside of the matrix.
If only they knew, who they were about to meet...

Another great installment baby boy. Keep um coming. Well done.

Another great installment, NXM. I'm looking forward to more. (Imitates Oliver Twist) Please, sir, can I have some...more?

Ha- ironic. I'm actually going to the Bahamas in a few months. Keep it up NXM.

Great stuff!, what happened to PP?

Great stuff!, what happened to PP?

She died. See the thread that says 'Hello (Requiem for PP)'.

Thankx for letting me know, it is a terrible loss.

Oh NXM, keep it coming...The story is going great hun...

*Clears Throat* Hey X, where are you man?

I'm missing this mate, I know you're a busy man but neglecting a story is not a good thing to be doing.

says me...

I will see what I can do today.
Need some stuff to be done i'm in my last week of working before going back to school.
So yeah.
Busy times...

But i'll see if I can write somethin' t'day...

"Jacking you in... Now" operatus the system operator of Zion said.
They immediatly zapped into The Matrix, They started looking around when the phone started ringing.
Veradis picked up the phone "We're in" she said.
"Never knew we could jack in from Zion" TNG said.
"Well since we have the broadcasting technollogy of the machines. Here in Zion. we would even be able to broadcast when we would be on the moon." PP said.
"Well, veradis, PP, Let's start this vacation. Last at the beach is a sentinel!" TNG shouted while starting to run towards the mighty fine beaches of the bahamas.
"Here we go again" PP said with her eyes rolling as to say 'childish fool'.
"Let's run!" She said running so fast her legs couldn't keep up and she fell straight on the ground. Veradis laughed, only shortly since she hadn't seen the tree that was in her way. a loud bang was heard when she walked into the tree. A coconut fell down just missing her head.
PP and Veradis both stood up from their falls and looked around. No TNG seeable.
"Let's looksee if he's already on the beach. The little twirp" PP said with a smile.

When they walked up to the beach they saw TNG, talking with a man who looked familiar. Only he was looking a bit greenish with bits of code chopped off as it seemed.
They walked up to TNG and the man when they recognized a part of hime. They heard him say in a broken, disrupted, almost static voice. "Well, when I died and lost the entrance to my body I was thrown back into the matrix. Been wandering in here eversince. Even now my code is falling apart because I am trying too hard not getting stuck in a loop" the man had spoken.
"Hey TNG who are you talking to?" Veradis asked.
"Well, girls, let me introduce my new found friend. This is an old zion fighter.His name is..."
"Blade" the man interrupted looking at TNG asif to shut him up. "Just call me blade. I have fought with Neo back in the days of the war"


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Interpart...

Who is this man?
This mysterious man named blade?
Well... For that you might want to check it out next time I write.
Sorry for having you all wait so long. But I really AM busy...

Cheers
Harrie

Nice, even if a bit brief. Is blade Neo or are you just teasing us? Could he be Smith? I look forward to finding out.

It could be Neo... Could be Bane. could be smith could be anyone else who died. The twins maybe? or one of the other lot who fought in the Neo era...

Could be my friend Could be.
All will be clear in a while :D

This is great! I wonder who it is.

Finally! Great to see you up and running again, NXM. I await further parts of this story.

Thanks for the replies you guys here's the next part...
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Outside of the matrix, in the city of Zion. Morpheus, Niva, Hitman and Sm4113r returned from there journey to 01.
When they stepped out Morpheus immediately walked towards the control tower.
"Where are the main guards PP, Veradis and TNG?" Morpheus asked.
"They are in the matrix sir." Strider replied "They are having there vacation at the moment"
"Let's check on them for a minute" Morpheus said "SM4113R, Go check it out we don't want anyone messing with their vacation"
"Yes, sir" SM4113R Replied.

"Morpheus, what have you found?" Strider asked
"Well, Strider, I have reasson to Believe Neo is still in the matrix and that his body is still in 01." Morpheus replied.
"I was surprised to see that Deus is using a human body. I am not yet sure enough but I think he might be using Neo's body. Changed beyond recognition."
"Morpheus, I hope you are wrong, this could trigger a new war between us and the machines" Strider said with a shocked look in his eyes.

"Ehm, sirs." SM4113R interrupted. "I think you might want to see this"
"On the screen, there is an unknown code" "WHAT!?" Morpheus exclaimed.
Morpheus walked over to the computer terminal and saw the unknown code on the screen "This is similar to when Smith was going nuts" he said.
"Yes, sir, but look at that second pattern" SM4113R said.
"Looks like a severed soul doesn't it"
"Morpheus?" Niva said.

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Well you guys, this is the first mystery that might be solved. To think. That dues might be using Neo's body ey...
Anyways.
With the next part the story will get running harder and faster...
Be prepared.

Twisting and turning more than the baddest of all rollercoasters. Very nice.

Wow, wasn't expecting that one. Keep it coming, NXM.

Hooray! Another plot twist. I'm greatly looking forward to this, NXM.

Peace. Sounds great. Thanks for the invite and count me in.

Come on NXM! Please sir, I want some more!

Okay, for one, Vieome/Alyce, Get your ass out of my thread with that post and put it where it should be.
Second. Can any mod delete that post or place it where it should be? It's kinda messing with my writing vibe.

Third.
I know I had you guys for a wait but real life was catching up on me. Now I got some time again so here goes.
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"Yes Niva" Morpheus replied.
"Are you thinking what I am thinking?" Niva asked in return.
"I think so Niva" Morpheus said.
"But if it is him, wouldn't he be honest?" SM4113R asked.
"To those newby folk?" Morpheus said "He wouldn't trust them that soon. He needs to be sure they are not programs"
"Well Morpheus, I think it is time for you to get in there and have a chat with your old friend." Hitman said from the corner.

"Okay, I'm going in" Morpheus said.

Inside the matrix Double P, Veradis and TNG were talking abit with the man.
"Well" PP said "did you fight against or alongside of Neo?"
"I fought along side of Neo, helped him in his quests, used to be a program." he said

His words started to fall apart as though his program was about to fall apart.

"Well, hello old friend, With what can I be you of service" Morpheus asked while coming out of the shade.
"Morpheus" Blade said. "Can you take me to the Oracle? Or Sati even?"
"I can and I will." Morpheus said
"Morpheus" Veradis asked "Do you know this man?"
"I know him very well Veradis, he was of great assistance during the war" Morpheus said.

"I come bearing news for the oracle but my program is collapsin, could you get me to her as soon as possible?"
"Yes, I can, Let's go" Morpheus said
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As always, short but sweet.
You will have to wait till we meet the oracle to know who blade is... :P (Everything points to one person but we still are not sure. Could be Neo, could be The Keymaker, heck it could even be the twins who, after the explosion, formed into one program. You may not know yet. But I do :D)

Done baby boy.

Great new part hun. So proud of you and glad you found the time to post it. I know you have been very busy lately. Keep up the great work and look forward to another part soon.

Ooooh...If Blade appeared in the movies, I think I know who he is...Anyway, great next part, NXM. I look forward to more.

Ooooh...If Blade appeared in the movies, I think I know who he is...Anyway, great next part, NXM. I look forward to more.

haha you might think you do but do you know for sure?
No one knows. I am picking this up for another spin. Need to get some time on my hands to do this lol...

well, here goes.
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Arriving at the Oracles door Sati opened.
"Why, hello" Blade said "You must be Sati, my what you have grown"
"Thank you" Sati said "It was not an easy time to grow in that is for sure" Sati added "Come in the Oracle has been expecting you." Sati immediately said.

They walked in and Morpheus set himself down in the waitingroom.
Blade looked around and walked through the opening into the kitchen, he looked around and saw the sign, hanging in the same place as where it had hung when he walked in "Temet Nosce" he said.

"Know Thyself" The Oracle said. "But unfortunately some lose the knowledge they had, don't they"
"Indeed, but I come bearing a message" Blade replied "Back when Neo died, the machines kept his body alive artificially outside the matrix"
"And why do you tell me this, Blade?" the Oracle said.
"Because you should know, this fact alone might mean Neo is still alive" Blade muthered
"He is" Sati said while walking in the door "And he is closer than you think, my dear friend"
"Was his mind severed from his body?" Blade said with a feeling of insecurity in his voice.
"Yes, only this time he did not go to Limbo" The Oracle answered "He stayed inside the matrix and became a program, this is what they made of him"

"You mean?" Blade said with unbelief
"Yes, Blade, You are him" The Oracle said "You are Neo"
"Can you not feel the power?" Sati asked
"No, I can not, I do not even resemble him" Blade said
"But you do Blade, it is in your code, wait, let me restore your code" Sati said.
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Blade sat himself down on the chair and said laid her hands on his head and shoulder, feeling as though his scripting was being revived. The green lines running down his body suddenly began to form into skintissue, he revived, his looks came back. Soon we see Neo in his full glory. He had returned, Atleast his mind had.

"Now, about your body, where do you think it is?" the Oracle asked
"With that, I think I can help" Morpheus said while walking in "Welcome back Neo"

"Good to be back Morpheus"

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That's it for now, NOW we can start on Chapter Two, Retrievel of the lost body.

Hope ya'll like it ;)

That waz only 1 chapter! One of the longest chapter i've ever read!