Star Wars:Balance of the force

Well my other star wars fan fic kinda sucked and i did't plan it very well,but i've put real thought into this one and i really hope you enjoy so i'm proud to present-

A new generation....
A new hero.....
A new war....
A new balance....
STAR WARS:BALANCE OF THE FORCE

The grand republic is under attack from the imperial conclave,while the shadowy guerilla fighters of the united rebellion front have allied themselves with the conclave and are striking at key locations that the grand republic rely on for survival.

The jedi are more powerful than ever before and are being led into battle by the charismatic,powerful and skilled Troy skywalker,the desendant of luke skywalker himself.

Meanwhile a shadowy enemy has returned to once again shroud the galaxy in darkness.
The Sith have arose once again,more powerful then ever before and are moving slowy towards their goal of exterminating the jedi,

A group of politicians and businessmen have set up the order of dissident priests,deidicated to dissolving the jedi order,jealous of the jedi's power,the jedi reeling from attack on all sides are becoming increasingly desperate....................





The sun set on the rocky planet of iridonia,it was growing cold,the nights of iridonia were harsh and unforgiving,yet three tall zabraks cold be seen scaling the side of a mountain,they were moving with amazing agility and speed,like spiders,their hands and feet instantly finding grip on the mountain side.

As they reached the top a shorter,older human stood there,cloaked in flowing black robes,they knelt before him.

"Ahhh,you have passed the test,you do indeed have the potential,but i do not have the time nessacary to train you in the arts of the sith,i shall leave that upto my apprentice darth scorn" The cloaked man rasped as a taller man decked in black armour that was covered in laser burns and dents came out of the shadows,the zabraks saluted him."And now i must leave,i shall return soon to see your progress."The old man walked off into a cave,a few seconds later,a small shuttle flew out of the top of the mountain and disappeared into the sky.

Darth scorn looked down at the zabraks and laughed,a deep,chilling laugh,then he strode past the zabraks and began the long climb back down the mountain,the zabraks quickly followed suit,

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"But master skywalker why would the jedi...."a geonosian senator asked but was cut off by the young man opposite him,Troy skywalker.

"Listen jaggle,i've no time to entertain the wonderings of a senator,take this up with the jedi council,i have more important matters to deal with,in case you haven't noticed,the grand republic is under heavy attack from the imperial conclave and the united rebellion front,now if you'll excuse me,theres a battle i'm late for"

Troy ran off,his long brown hair flowing behind him as he jumped into his x wing jedi class fighter and began to launch

"k2c2,prepare those torpedos,i think this battles gonna be a big one,i don't know why the rebellion front would be foolish enough to attack corusant,but we'll still need every pilot we can get up there" Troy thought aloud as he checked off the launch procedures and the x wing shot out of the docking bay and into the sky.

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"Master justa,you think that master skywalker is becoming too arrogant?" the noghri jedi master known as chim-me-ra asked.

"No,no just over confident,he rushes into battles too quickly,not thinking with his head" replied the mon calamari defensively.

"I must concurr here,with justa here,shes right y'know,he's not keeping the peace or defending anymore,he's become the aggressor" aggreed the Miraluka called septakan.

Chi me nodded his head grimy "we will discuss this with master skywalker when he returns
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Troy jumped out of his cockpit and ran over to Zarna,his enchani apprentice,she had a huge grin on her face.

"We won!" she exclaimed triumhpantly running up to troy and hugging him.

"Was there ever any doubt?"He replied jokingly as he embraced her,he felt once again at peace in her arms,although his face quickly turned to a scowl as general pitt came up behind her,his face like thunder.

"Why did you specifically disobey my orders?" He bellowed at troy,spraying spittle all over him.

Troy detached himself from Zarna and looked up at the general,who was huge,towering over nearly everyone at 10ft.

"I thought this situation required jedi intervention" Troy replied simply,layering his voice subtly with the force.

"Don't pull that jedi mind trick crap here,it won't cut no ice,you were just showing off,you listen here,you may be a jedi master and the desendent of luke skywalker himself and that may make you god in some peoples eyes,but to me you're just a soldier,no different from the rest,you'd better believe this isn't the end of this" General pitt growled as his turned on his heel and marched off.

Troy watched him leave then turned to Zarna."don't worry,it's going to be okay" he assured her,seeing the concerned look on her face "But i believe you and i have a little time to ourselves now so....." The sentence hung in the air as Chi-mi-ra came up.

"Troy,the council wishes to speak with you"
"With me? now?well lead on,i'll be back soon my dear" troy promised as he tried to keep up with Chi-mi-ra's fast pace.

"Hey buddy,why the long face?we won the battle,with a little help from me" Troy laughed.

Chi-mi-ra's face grew dark.

"Troy,the council is angry at your aggresive actions,we are jedi,we keep the peace,defend,not attack,we don't fight wars,yet you purely for the sake of your own glory are running head first into battle after battle" Chi-mi-ra burst out his outrage getting the better of him "i did't train you to act like this,this is not the way of the jedi,this is the path that may well lead you to darkness" He lamented

Troy looked shocked.

"I....I.....the council are jealous,aren't they?"He asked suspicously.

Chi-mi-ra suddenly stopped and glared at Troy "You are truly a fool if you believe that" He wispered then once again strode off towards the council chambers.
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two of the zabraks lay dead on the ground,they were a mess of bloody limbs and organs strewn about the dirt.

"Yes,yes,you have truly learned well,darth eclipse will be most pleased to hear of your progress,you are now,darth hush,the silent blade of the sith"Darth scorn congratulated the zabrak as he rose to his feet and pulled a hood over his head and saluted the gen'dai.

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Chi-me-ra led Troy through the doors of the council chamber and into the centre of the chamber and then took his seat.

Master justa addressed Troy first "Do you know why you have been called here?"

"No" Troy replied simply,yet with a hint of contempt in his voice.

"You have become arrogant Master skywalker,you believe we should take this war to the enemy,that we should become the agressor,you believe we should disregard all negioiations,you are mistaken" Master sepkatan hissed.

"Perhaps" troy said camly.

Suddenly the emergency evauation alarm sounded.

The buzz of the security speakers could be heard far off.

All non military personal evacuate the planet immediatly,corusant is being invaded,the enemy has made planet fall,repeat all non military personal evacuate the planet immediatly

"But i defeated them" Troy gasped.

Chi-me-ra remarked coldly "Obviously you were mistaken about that too"

Troy glared at him.then an imperial tie fighter flew past the tower,firing his missiles at it,it exploded.

Troy looked up through the smoke,only Justa,septakan,chi-me-ra and himself were still alive.

"We must evacuate,gather whoevers left in the temple and get them aboard the contemplation" Chi-me-ra ordered as he and the other masters ran off to gather the other jedi.

Troy stood there motionless,he was angry he had let this happen,he wasn't going to run...he was going to fight he ran off towards his x wing to find zarna climbing aboard hers,she saluted him as she closed the cockpit.

He sent out a message of good luck through the force to her.

He climbed into his ship,all systems were ready and he shot off into the sky,he looked around him as he burst throught the clouds,he could see hundreads of other ships fleeing the planet.

"Lets do this"Troy muttered to himself.

He easily dodged the imcoming tie fighters,taking two of them out with a swift volley of torpedos and destroying three more with a blast of laser fire from the rapid fire laser cannons.

Zarna had taken out five and was in a spin to avoid the imcoming fire from two tie fighters,Troy swooped in and picked them off.

"Thanks" Zarna called over the comlink.

"No problem" Troy replied allowing himself a quick smile,but this was war so he sped ahead to a squardron of rebellion y wings.

He laughed as he flew right past them,launching the remains of his torpedos wiping them out.

His comlink burst into static.

Skywalker########temple########all gone######

Troy re-adjusted the com-link settings.

Master skywalker,the jedi temples been destroyed,their all gone,they did't make it,i'm sorry

Troy felt tears well up in his eyes,so many lives,so many jedi,so many friends,he could feel the sadness begin to burn,to become rage.

He also felt zarna's concern through the force telling him to stay calm.

"I think it's about time we leave the battle,we've done all we can here" Zarna said over the com.

"Yeah,yeah,ok"Troy agreed,still slightly dazed at the news of the jedi.
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Darth scorn stood there in the hanger that was built into the side of the mountain,he watched as three sith ships landed and their pilots climbed out and marched over to him.

"Ahhh lord zealot,lord decadence and master eclipse,it is time,our final member is ready,i introduce,darth hush" he stood back and motioned to the shadows as darth hush revealed himself and bowed,scorn,zealot and decadence followed suit bowing before their master,darth eclipse.

"The time has come,alert the dissident priests" He rasped turning around and walking back towards his ship.

"It has already begun my master"darth scorn informed.

"Excellant,the jedi will be powerless to stop us,darth hush,darth scorn you will come with me to hoth,we must implement the next stage of our plan,darth zealot,you go to naboo and darth decadence you remain here and wait for the signal"darth eclipse finished as he walked up the ramp into his ship.

Darth decadence rose to his feet and walked off towards the training area.

Darth decadence was unique in the fact that he was a cyborg,a cyborg that could also use the force,he resembled a skeleton,his eyes were deep pits of darkness,he had four thin yet powerful arms,he was a tall imposing figure at seven ft tall,he wore a long black cape that was drapped over his back and had a huge silver belt strapped across his waist which held four lightsabres.

He stomped down the corridor,until he came to the training area,he walked into the middle of the areana and drew his four light sabres and activated them.

"Activated training program omega five triple x delta" He growled as at least 50 super battle droids came out of an opening in the arena wall.

He jumped into the air and landed in the middle of the droids and spun around decimating their numbers,then he raised his hands,summoning the force sending 10 of the droids flying back wards,then his spun on one leg and tore through the remaining droids.

"Wheres a challenge when you need it" He grumbled to himself as he left the arena.

So thoughts anyone?apart from the usual "your spelling and grammer need work"

RA your stories are always so difficult to read. I love the ideas you come up with but your spelling and grammar do need work, and this isn't idle criticism. Maybe you'd get more readers if you tried to work on that.

Yes,yes you are correct i shall try to improve,next chapter shuold be on the way soon.

Troy jumped out of ship and walked over to Zarna who ran over to him and hugged him, as he burst into tears and sunk to his knees in despair.

"Come on, come on, it’s not your fault there’s nothing you could have done" Zarna soothed him, brushing his eye back and drying his eyes.
"now come on, you don't want to look like that in front of the others, general Pitts waiting for us in the base"

she got up and lifted gently to his feet and led him with her arm through the snowy no mans land of hoth,towards the underground base.

Just as they came to the entrance, a man in a dark cloak came spinning out of the mountain side and landed in front of them and activated a bright red double bladed light sabre which illuminated his face, he had crimson skin which was covered black tattoos and his eyes were a strange mix of orange and red, they glowed manevolenty, full of hatred.

Troy pushed Zarna back and pulled out his lightsabre and activated it, it was bright green, it had once belonged to a wise Jedi master named qui gon jinn, and Troy had found it years ago while searching the tomb world of naboo.

"Prepare to die sith" Troy warned as he charged at the sith but was surprised when the sith easily knocked Troy back with a force push and leaped into the air and attempted to land a knee drop on Troy's head, but his Jedi reflexes saved him as he rolled out of the way just in the nick of time, he jumped to his feet and regained his breath and looked around to see that the sith had vanished.

So had Zarna.
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Darth zealot landed in the middle of a desolate waste land, he noted with bitter regret that this planet used to be covered in lush forests and hundreds of beings, like his family, but all his fellow gungans had been wiped out years ago during the burning of naboo, a day that would go down in history as the final end of the sith, a great victory with great cost.

He walked across the ground cautiously until he came to a huge temple.

A small smile played across his lips.
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Troy ran back to his x wing and jumped in.

"k2c2,scan the area for a small battle crusier,something like a bounty hunter would own, I’m not going to let her die" He resolved, he activated launch.

As he shot off into the air, he read the read outs,k2 had located the ship, it was heading for naboo.

Troy felt a flutter of fear in the force.

"Naboo? i don't like the sound of this" He said thoughtfully as he pushed the engine to maximum speed.

Troy landed and was surprised to see their were two identical ships in the clearing.

"k2c2,you watch the ship,i'll check this place out" Troy said as he jumped out of the cockpit and ran off into the forest,using the force to pinpoint Zarna's location.

He breathed heavily as he tried to calm himself,he could feel his anger comsuming him.

Then he noticed a figure was standing behind him in the shadows,silently watching him.

"Sith! reveal yourself" He shouted into the undergrowth activating his lightsabre.

Darth zealot sprung from the shadow moving faster then Troy thought possible,he flew towards Troy and began to attack with an orange double bladed lightsabre,he attacked with such fierousity and hate,but Troy easily repelled his attacks and knocked his lightsabre from his grip.

"Where is she?" Troy demanded as he held his lightsabre to the siths neck.

A huge grin broke out on his face as he pointed to the ruins.

With a flick of his wrist,Troy decapited the sith.
He stood their silently for a few moments,contemplating what he had done.

He turned to the temple and walked towards it but as he did,the entrance slid shut and a short old man walked out of the forest,his eyes were wide with fear .

"what are you doing here?" the old man asked,eyeing Troy warily.

"I'm looking for someone,have you seen her?" He growled.

The old man retracted in fear.

"Yes,the two aliens took her into the temple and.....killed her...i'm sorry" The old man mumbled.

Troy was crushed,he felt anger,despair,hatred,he felt so lost now,he glared at the old man.
"Thanks" He spat ,he felt the tears in his eyes,there had been too much death today.

The old man ran off into the forest hastily.

As Troy turned to walk back to his ship,he was shocked to see a man standing there,a man made of pure light,he shimmered strangely in the sunlight.

"Hello troy" The aparation greeted.

"Who are you?" Troy asked dumbfounded.

A smile came to the ghosts face."Guess"

"Luke skywalker?" Troy ventured uneasily.

"Right,well Troy,it's good to see the force still runs strong in our family,but it seems like you've given into your anger" Luke said with a hint of disappointment in his voice.

Troy hung his head "i'm sorry i did't mean to,it's just...so many dead...so many friends"

"I know,I know,but it is at times like this a jedi must be strongest,you have a big part to play in this galaxy ,don't giv into your anger" Luke said finally as he faded away.

Troy wiped his eyes and jumped into his x wing.
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The old man ran through the forest but came to a screeching halt as he noticed the evil figure of Darth hush before him.

The old man mutated,his face become pale and withered,his hair retracted into his skull,his eyes changed to black slits,Darth hush handed him a long black cloaked which he wrapped around himself.

"Come Darth hush,the time has come to annonce the news to the senate"

"The jedi have been wiped out, our leaders are dead, Now is a time for quick and decisive action, it is time the dissident priests be given leardership of the grand republic,so we,the united systems of the dissdent priests,propose,that power be granted to us to take control of the military forces of the grand republic,in exchange we will lead the republic to victory and of course we shall share our valuable resources with the republic,we demand a vote!" duke sarfadius bellowed in to the senate hall.

The senate echoed with applause.

"Vote now,vote now vote now" The voices of the senators booming.

Jaggle the greater realised he was the only senator not screaming the chant.

"Something is out of place here" He mutttered to himself,he turned turned and left his senate box and walked out.

"I think I should go see senator jeb"
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"Ahhh,jeb,I trust your trip to the outer rim proved fruitful?" Jaggle greeted warmly.

"Ahh,well it seems the silmarks have been wiped out by the imperial conclave,but I did meet an excellant warrior who I have employed as my body guard,jaggle,may I introduce lord scorn,the last living gen dai" jeb replied,rambling somewhat.

Jaggle shook scorns oversized gauntlets.

"Good grip,it is most pleasant to meet you,but now on to more pressing business,have you heard that the senate has voted to give the dissident priest control of our military forces?" Jaggle asked.

"Control of our military forces!" Jeb exclaimed "The fools,holonews on "

The holonews screen flashed on.

"In what has been a shocking and dark day,another shock has shook the republic,a short time ago,the senate voted to give the dissented priests control of the grand republics military forces and the dissidents priests first act with their new power was too elect new generals to replace the fallen jedis and as part of their agreement with the republic that have set up a "force recognition training program",An organisation that will take in force strong younglings and train them for combat.

Jeb switched the holonews of angryily.

"The fools" He repeated under his breath.

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Troy flew as fast as he could keeping an eye on his ships energy readings,he realised he was now in imperial space.

"I've got a bad feeling about this" He grumbled to himself.