Here we go again people. FALL IN!

Ok guys, we've just recieved word we are heading out yet again. How are we all looking for time?

Let's fall in, do a head count and grab the key to the sake cabinet Mac! I feel I should learn from last time.

We will not be heading out until all report in this time, so we will all be actively participating in (coughImacough) this mission. As always, it's just as important as our last. This time we shall be taking Liani back out with us.

We'll continue with Macs suggestion of the UNDER CONSTRUCTION sign in your post just so we know someone is in the middle of expanding their RPG. I think I might actually dig up a small image we can all use to attach or take off when we are done just so we know that after that it's all GTG.

Oh and sparky, you've been promoted and don't forget to bring your Liza Minelli drag gear, as I so love those "Priscilla' nights on our journeys out lol.

Cheers all, now FALL IN PEEPS! :)



UT.




EDIT: Oh and one more thing, I've been working on the begining of this story for 3 days, so I would really love to kick it off when we are all ready ok. Cheers ;)

I'm not quite certain if you guys are requiring assistance from the Osiris on your next mission here, but if that is the case, I'll be here, with an Uzi in one hand and a butter knife in the other (for my biscuits, of course).

Good luck!

yes, if you need help again. the osirus is happy to help you again

Thanks guys. If UT needs help, she knows who to call.

But anyhoo, NMN reporting for duty Cap'n. I much enjoyed your physical last night, and this Medic is energized for any mission. Anywhere you need me, I will be.

Come on Mac, Niva! Sparky, Raj! Ima, Alfredo!

Let's get this show on the road.

hehehehehe. So did I, believe me ;)

I would love the Osirus to join us once more, as it was so enjoyable last time with all the diverse plot twists. Thanks guys, and don't forget to load up more sugar rush foods this time, and in saying that we also need ritalin and ritalout for about 90% of us lol.

Ok, my posse, where be you?

Get a room you two! Lol, j/k... Ya know, UT, if you want to undress for NMN while I spectate, I'm all for that.

I have a couple 24-packs of Mountain Dew, some giant tubes of pixie stix, and all the Reese's peanut butter cups you can fathom. I also have many bags of pure granulated sugar and powdered sugar, so we can sprinkle sugar on our candy.

Umm....we don't need a room. And I don't mind. Do you, UT?

I gots me some Kit Kat bars. The king size ones. THe ones you don't normall hand out to little babies. The size for the big boys and girls. Oh, that and some Sour Patch Kids. Best sour candy there is!

lol. Hell no, I'm just fine the way I am thanks angel. Actually more than fine ;)

OK. So we have all the important food groups covered, good, good. Oh, wait a tic, we'd better take some of those green and leafy thingies that grow in the ground for Liani....oh damn whatcha call them again?

Oh that's it, vegies. Ok, you slowly forget about what you don't eat. My bad. XD..

*hehehehehe....ssshhhh*

I'm here, thanks for the roster, NMN.
So...for our ship, that'll be Niva, Raj, and Sparky? No rest for the weary...I'll be here when ya need me.

Yo, El Sparko reporting for duty, suited, booted, ready to go!

Originally posted by sparky667
Yo, El Sparko reporting for duty, suited, booted, ready to go! Ahem....tuck the dress in, it's showing lol j/k.

Thanks Mac and Sparky, now where be the others? (I really can't talk like a pirate, however I'm trying here ok lol).

I'm reporting in.....I'll be in the back. Just let me know when everybody is here....

Like hell you're in the back girl. Get up in the front. I'm not having you hiding out back on us as you're the best damn co-pilot there is! I'm driving right, or is it you? Who cares, let's all take turns lol. Ok, I need to get drunk. Who's with me?

*The crew of both ships get rolling drunk and sneak off to Vals ship, performing an atomic wedgie before they leave...*

'Alright, I'll won't go to the back, lol.
Just promise me that before we go off on the mission. Tonight we'll have a good time.' Niva said, as she goes n stands next to UT.....
'Lets have good time. Oh btw, when r we heading out. Just wanna know before I get drunk, UT???'

I say tonight you are in charge birthday grllll! Let us get rolling rat arsed drunk here! :D It's on my tab!!!

Alright, thanks for giving me tonight....Now lets got off to Kara's....

Ok, here we go. Firstly I'm posting our little Under construction image. Just use the properties I'm using to show it in your post when you're in the middle of a storyline. Here is the Caduceus' little mascot dude and helping hand, Mr. Flibble ;)
http://www.reddwarfgraphics.com/images/fib.gif

Ok now on with the mission!!

Liani looked nervously as she walked up to the Caduseus. UT, holding her hand, felt it as the child kept slightly hesitating every so often to look at her last link to the matrix.

UT: It's ok Liani, just remember you are fine now, and I personally promise you that nothing bad will happen ok. See, look at Mac, he's smiling at something! And you told me he never smiled.

Liani: I don't think he is used to children. You and NMN are, well, different. Niva is always tucking me in lately, I hope she is ok. I feel something very sad inside her.

UT looked at the child, and remembered who much she had grown mentally strong in the short 4 months she had been freed from the matrix. Just as the council had preditcted, she was indeed special. Liani soaked up all the training programs faster than anyone else she had seen when the child was told she would be joining us for this mission. NMN walked up behind UT and Liani as they were both deep in thought and startled them with his always carefree and happy 'BOO'.

UT: Damnit man, I was miles away.
NMN: Well nice to see you too captain.
UT: Sorry, I've got alot on my mind right now. Say, how's the med lab looking? And how long did it take you to complete your program studies to full doctor stats?
NMN: It's looking damn fine if I may say so myself, and oh I'd say at a rough guess 2 weeks to become fully adapt at my new proffession. Cool huh! Sure beats the average 12 years + those poor bastards out there have to look forward to and complete. I am now quite the proffessional...
UT:Yeah, but proffessional what?
NMN: hey!
Mac: Hi guys, are we all ok and ready to board?

Mac looked down at Liani and took both her hands.

Mac: And how's my little Liani today? Ok?
Liani: I'm fine, I guess. Still having those dreams about that man, however it will be made known to me in time I'm sure. How are you Mac?

UT, NMN and Mac all looked at each other breifly as if to absorb the sheer clarity the child possesses at times, then Mac looked back to her.

Mac: I am sure you are correct Liani, so far you have shown me you are a child with an amazing amount of insight into the most complex things. I'm sure you'll be teaching me a thing or two shortly.
Liani: Mac, you have yet to know what you are truly capable of.
Mac: I had a feeling you were gonna say that.

He smiled at the child and he left them as he moved to settle into the ship. UT watched thoughtfully as he fussed and pottered around aboard the ship.

UT: Mac is slightly nervous I feel.
She told her close friend NMN. He glanced over his shoulder at Mac and watched his movements.
NMN: I think he's thinking about a girl if you ask me.
UT: Why is it everytime you're asked your opinion of what someone is feeling, you come to that conclusion lol. At this rate you'll have the crew of Zion paired off within a week!
NMN: Well, call it a guess, however check the picture he's putting back up...

UT looked over and saw a very familiar face. The face of her sister sitting in a frame next to Macs bag.
UT: Oh.......

please continue and if it's ok I would like it if you could not add to the lass in the frame, as I have my own coming up. ;)

"AHEM...got room for one more?" a deep voice asked from behind them. "Hitman! ...all I have to say is, Hell YES!" UT shouted. "Good to see you, mate...glad to have you aboard." Hitman smirked. "Thanks, UT. Mac...Long time no see, brother. How've you been?" Macleod smiled back and replied, "Good, good...hope you've been keeping up on your sword skills..." Hitman smiled broadly. "Once we're on our way, I hope we'll have a chance to do a little sparring...see how we match up now...I've learned a few new tricks since last we met..." Macleod laughed out loud. "I can't wait, old friend...can't wait..." "So...where are we off to now, Captain?" Hitman asked.

UT: We are off to give a young girl a happy ending Hit. I've been asked if we could search for Lianis mother. And I for one can't wait to meet her. I hope we aren't too late, that's all.
Hitman: Hell. Where is she supposed to be?
UT: Still living near the hospital Liani was a patient of. So as that is the intell, let's hope she hasn't been relocated.
Mac: Well, you do love a challenge Sis!
Mac patted UT on the arm and the two men left her to wander behind and collect her thoughts.

She smiled thinking of her old and new crew working side by side. This is going to be one hell of a mission, she thought to herself and followed her old friends aboard the place her and Niva jokingly called their real home, the Caduceus. Looking out the window, her and Niva waved over at the Osiris and settled into their seats, getting the old girl ready to leave as soon as control gave the all clear.

Niva: Who's driving?
UT: You are. I can see you're itching to get behind the controls, and I need to do a few things and prep Hitman while we head out.
Niva: Hey, I can't help it. I enjoy it.
UT: And that is what makes you damn good at it girl. Call me when we get the all clear, ok.
Niva: No probs UT.

'She smiled at Niva and head off to meet the rest of the crew. Sparky bumped into her on the way in.

Sparky: Hey there, man it's not been long and we're back out. What's the word capn?
UT: Hey, I know. I hope you've rested, as we're gonna need your muscle as gunner.
Sparky. Yes Maam!!
UT: I thought you'd be happy with that one. Well, you deserved it. So go sort yourself out and I'll fill you in on our mission with the rest of the crew shortly.
Sparky: No probs UT.

Continue please someone :)

Ok....Work in Progress!!
And thanks lots for featuring me UT...you've done it beautifully - a jump in your fanfic skills...now let me see what I can do...


4 Months, eh? That's quite some time...

MacLeod, in the midst of an order, paused and stopped to stare nostalgically around at the busy ship around him. It had been so long. He couldn't remember as distinctively now the day he was rescued from the matrix, and that gave him a feeling of how old he was beginning to get. It was still the good fight, and though things had changed a lot since the destruction of their previous ship - the Nautilus - some things thankfully hadn't changed. UT was still her old self. Hitman was back. Many of the others, those who weren't dead, were at least still doing their various bit for Zion in various areas. Including a lover...He looked down at the battered but almost cosy control seats, the operation of which he could still remember by heart. They looked so...odd, empty.
He was interrupted in his thoughts by a tug on his hand. He looked down to see the smiling face of Liani, and bent down to her level.
"Hey there...it's best you find somewhere to sit. We're getting ready to leave any time...and we're gonna find your mom."
She looked uncertain. Interesting. MacLeod had a distinct feeling she may not have even remembered her mother's face, from so long ago when she was abandoned. She looked...hopeful.
"...Promise, Uncle Mac?"
"Aye girl. I promise."
A smile. She definitely looked better when she smiled more. "...And my Dad?"
He cocked his eyebrows. "Well...'never really thought much on him. Maybe another mission?"
"...But...I won't have a Dad till then."
He almost wanted to laugh, had it not been his habit. Kids these days... "Well then kiddo - look up ol' NMN, or my old friend Hitman. They're the best Daddies you can find around here, I can tell you." He winked.
She did, too. But he seemed to sense a...disappointment in her eyes. Was it something he said? No matter - his attention was drawn to the sound of the door closing. Niva was speaking.
"...Docking moors are disconnected, all items secured and tied down, and Dock Command grants permission to depart, sir."
He stood, looking to UT for orders...when he realised she had been looking at him, with a glint in her eye. He didn't know how long she had been looking at him...but then she spoke.
"Niva...thanks. If you'll excuse us, though....we'd like to take the ship out ourselves."
"Pardon? Oh...I see......of course, Ma'am."
A smiling and grateful Hitman took her offered seat at the Helm. UT took her traditional standing position behind the main control seats as Captain of the ship. The two veterans looked back at the last person left...and, with a grateful look at the competent, fresh faces around him, took up the co-pilot's seat. He settled into his role like wearing an old glove.
"Engaging Repulsors, doing one last check of immediate area...done."
"Fuel and engine readouts are nominal. Docking clamps now fully retracted. Bay doors are open..." Hitman took this moment, like the rest, to look back at the Captain, for her final and familiar command to end the sequence.
She smiled, and gave in to the timeless, nostalgic beauty of the moment. Then she looked straight ahead out through the windows with the familiar fire in her eyes.
"Alright then Helm........Let's Take Her Out."
...And, like a great dove, the Ship of Mercy glided gracefully out the jaws of Zion's dock, and into the depths of the outside world.

Just tell us if you need any help and the osirus will come as fast as she can fly :neo: :)

Thank you Mac for the kudos. I'm slowly trying, however I'm indeed wowed by the praise. Thanks again bro. I think the 'construction' idea is bloody brilliant. Thanks for that one too, and perhaps we can take this time to add comments/comparisons/suggestions etc. to the story whilst we are waiting for the writer. The way we've always done in the past however with a more concentrated hit of input in one area instead of a spread. That way we can all read it, have a more uniformed plan of the plot (so to speak) and so on. I hope that makes sense to you guys, it's late here and I have a hungry child trying to chew my mouse lol.

Oh, and I saw your IM Mac, and I actually do have a plan for her birthday. PM me as soon as your free ;)

UT

Ok, my turn if you don't mind.



NMN heads to the back of the ship where the fleet's most well-prepared med lab is located. He now has a purpose to the mangled mess that is the Caduceus crew.
"I am so glad I am at the back under the main deck. Don't ahe to deal with the whole flying thing. Just kick back and relax," he thought to himself as he put his bags done as he felt the ship lift off and head out.

(Over the comm)" Hey, NMN, it's UT. I need you to have the medlab set up for the extraction of Liani's mother. I hope your quick training can help you in this matter, you are needed more than ever, now. I am sorry, but I need you to stay out of the Matrix for this one. You need to help Niva, and you need to be prepared for the mother. UT out."
The comm was always an eerie thing to listen to. It made him jump everytime it turned on.
(over comm)" No problem, cap'n. I can handle it, I hope. At least, I know how to take blood pressure."

NMN sat at the lab table and began to set the things he needed up. He knew he was in for a long rejuvanation process with Liana's mother, but it will be worth it to see that little girl's mother in the real world with her daughter. 'I just want what's best. That girl is all we have right now. She is important in her own right,' he thought to himself.

The Caduceus sped off into the vast tunnel system that was the old sewer system. It would be a while before they got up to braodcast depth.

Since there was a bit of time before they reached broadcast depth, Macleod approached Hitman about doing a quick round of sparring before they were ready to enter the Matrix. Hitman grinned. "You got it, Mac...but don't pull any of that old Highlander crap on me, ok?" Macleod smiled and said, "Ok, Ok...I'll try not to get carried away." UT nodded to Hitman. "I'll take over piloting for now...you two go get warmed up." Hitman joined Macleod and they jacked in.

The Dojo. Home of sparring for all members of the Matrix. Macleod stood across the room from Hitman, dressed in red Samurai armor. Hitman, on the opposite side, was dressed similarly, but in black. "Let's do this." Macleod said simply. Hitman nodded, drawing his blade from its sheath, whirling it around in front of him with the skill of ages. Macleod smiled. "I see you're still a bit of a showoff...are you still hot-headed as well? That was always your downfall, and why I was always just a little bit better than you...why I could always best you in the end." Hitman smiled calmly. "No. I've found my center...centered my chi. I am master of myself now...and no one can break me of my new focus...not even you." Macleod smirked and without warning charged Hitman. Their swords clashed loudly, sending up sparks. "You've gotten stronger, Macleod..." Hitman grunted.

"I've been working out...thanks for noticing!" With that, Macleod kicked Hitman in the chest, launching himself away and pushing Hitman back. "Unnngh!" Hitman grunted. He recovered, running forward and leaping high into the air, bringing his sword above his head and slashing downward. Macleod rolled left, barely avoiding Hitman's attack, which shattered the floorboards. Hitman spun round, slashing low to try to catch Macleod at the ankles. Macleod leaped over the advance, bounded off the wall and flipped over Hitman's head. Hitman was ready, however, and timed his slash so that he would be spinning upward and caught Macleod with a roundhouse kick to the back that thrust him forward through one of the pillars. "Grrraaaaah!! Nice one, Hitman..." Macleod gasped, getting to his feet.

"This armor's too heavy for me..." Hitman muttered, "Got no...maneuverability." He pulled off his armor, revealing a ninja style getup, again, all in black. Macleod smiled. "Now you're talking." He removed his armor as well revealing the same but in red. Hitman was now on the opposite side of the room. He nodded at Macleod, who seemed to get the message. Macleod smiled, then shouted, "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE!" They ran at each other, full speed, and leaped into the air, virtually flying, and slash hack slash at each other as they passed in the air. Each deflected the other's onslaught and landed on the ground opposite where he'd started. Again they charged at each other, leaping high into the air, drawing back their respective swords and-

"EXCUSE ME." Niva's voice boomed throughout the room like God's. Both men lost their focus and fell to the ground. "WE'VE REACHED BROADCAST DEPTH." "Niva...stop shouting baby..." Hitman said, ears ringing. "SORRY...Sorry. Had the mic turned up to high. Anyway, we need you guys out here...we're getting ready."

Hitman looked at Macleod, who was staring right back at him. "Next time, Mac...next time..." They shook hands, grinning at each other. "We'll see, Hitman...we'll see..." and then they were enveloped by the white of the Construct as the Dojo fell away and they returned to the Real.

Mac and Hitman opened their eyes to see UT smiling at them.

UT: Have fun did we gentlemen?
Hitman: You could say that..
Macleod: Sis, I promise you're next to spar with ok.
UT: Oh yeaahh like I can see that happening. It's ok, I can understand you both have a hell of a lot of catch up to play. I can wait brother.

Mac grinned at Hitman and they all made their way to where the rest of the crew were waiting to be told of the mission. NMN met them as they passed the medlab.

UT: How's it looking in there handsome? Are we good to go?
NMN: Certainly are cap. Just finished double checking everything and now it's just a matter of me waiting for you guys to bring her back..
UT: I know you hate waiting, however you know it's vital we have you remain.
NMN: I understand. Doesn't mean I have to like it!!
UT: Indeed. And thank you for all you've done. You really have done a hell of a lot in such a short time. I'm impressed and very proud.
NMN: aww shucks maam. T'was nothin'.

UT greated the rest of the crew as they sat in the mess. As she brought them up to speed with logistics, Mac filled them in with what the council asked of them to do and how important it was to retrieve this woman.

Sparky: Lianas mum heh? Wow that's awesome.
Niva: Do we know her name yet Mac?
Mac: Micheala. It's been some time since she has seen Liani, let alone her child well. So here's to hoping this goes smooth...

Awesome story so far guys, guess it's time for the Osiris to get a piece of ass, er, action...

*The past four months have been quite a spectacle. The crew of the Osiris has spent most of their time relaxing after their expedition with the Caduceus some time ago. While the city of Zion remains at a comfortable temperature next to the Earth’s core, the aboveground world progressed as it always has. The months passed. Winter changed into spring, spring changed into summer, summer changed back into winter, and winter gave spring and summer amiss and went straight into autumn - All within the span of these few short months, until one day…*

Freddy: Captain Freddy of the Osiris, requesting access to Gate 3.

Zion Control: Access granted, be safe and good luck.

*Freddy carefully lifts the Osiris off the ground, guiding it towards Gate 3. Kobra is sitting in the co-pilot seat. Helios is typing away furiously at his operating station, tinkering with the settings as he gets the ship ready for broadcast. Smith1 and AO are playing poker, using their Alf pogs as wagers (Alf… You know, he’s back… In pog form!). TINM and PP are off doing the odd jobs, tying up lose ends and making final preparations before their next mission begins. The ship is relatively quite until Helios suddenly spins around in his chair and grabs a headset.*

Helios: Operator.

*PP looks at TINM. She jogs over to Helios and presses a button, turning on the speaker phone.*

UT: Good afternoon guys, ready for some action?

*The crew gathers around the speaker phone while Freddy and Kobra turn on their headsets in the cockpit.*

PP: Four months of hibernation, we’re good to go.

UT: Excellent - I just debriefed my crew on the mission, and now it’s your guys’ turn. As you probably are aware of, we’re going in after Liana’s mother. There’s an old Motel 6 about 5 blocks away from the hospital we rescued Liana from. Her mother’s house is within walking distance of the hospital. We will meet at the Motel 6 and split up into groups there. Meet you there in 15, got it?

TINM: Yep, you will go to the Motel 6 and split up, then we will go there in 15 minutes.

UT: No, no… We all meet at the Motel 6 in 15 minutes, we’ll split up there.

TINM: Right, we’ll split up here in 15 minutes and meet you at the Motel 6.

UT: No, you meet with us at the Motel 6 in 15 minutes and THEN we’ll split up.

TINM: Of course, we’ll stay here and you’ll go to the Motel 6.

UT: We both go to the Motel 6.

TINM: Yes, yes… but ummm…

UT: Yes? What is it?

TINM: Umm… Oh, I remember, would it be alright if we split into groups after we left the Motel 6?

UT: You meet us there in 15 minutes.

TINM: Well of course we’ll meet you there in 15 minutes, but do we have to pick our groups at that very moment?

UT: No! You be sure to meet us at the Motel 6 in the next 15 minutes and we will divide into groups. Now I’m going to get ready…

TINM: Right, right - In 15 minutes you guys will go to the Motel 6.

UT: And you will meet us there. See ya in 15. *UT hangs up*

TINM: What?

*PP smacks TINM across the back of his head.*

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Guess what movie I watched tonight for the 20th time ;).

sorry i'm late but i'm here now i'll bring a drum kit for some entertainment to make up for my lateness.

LMAO. Give me those sticks Raj, ok get writing and welcome. Now where's my Niva an Ima?? OI GIRLS??

I'm here, here's a bit I wrote. I'll write more later...

As Niva was on the ship witht he crew, she just couldn't wait to get Liani mom back. The joy the lil'girl gonna have. She wanted nothing to go wrong with this mission.
She even got excited when she heard they were get help again.

She sat infront of the screens. To get the exact location the mother is going to be, n where to have a safe exit.
Surprisinly the Agents weren't around.

"UT, n u guys r gonna get plugged in???" Niva asked.
"In a few..." she replied back.

Niva got back to her chair n kept on looking at the screens. Hopeing this mission won't too much of a problem.

humm and here i whas thinking, that you would be her new mommy UT ?
lol whats the next mission (after this one) getting daddy out ?

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Freddy lands his ship down at the Zion docks.
PP: oke people, be ready for take off in 60 minute's !
AO: what that fast
PP: yes, that fast
TINM: where are we going then
Freddy: to a broad cast depth, and the we plug in. to help UT and her crew on her new mission
kobra: oh yeah, i heard they whant to plug liani's mother out of the matrix
PP:her mother ?
kobra: yes
Freddy: get going people. get the things you need and then come back
Helios: i will have the ship ready, as fast as i can
Freddy: i know i can count on you.

"Motel 6..." Hitman said, "Those guys couldn't have picked a better place than a Motel 6?" Hitman, UT and Macleod stood in the lobby of the Motel 6, dressed in their typical Matrix black and leather gear. Needless to say, they stood out like sore thumbs. "I mean, really, we could've met at a Hyatt...those are nice...or a Marriott...I like those too..." UT slapped him on the back of the head and said, "We're not here on a pleasure trip, Hitman. It's mission time." Macleod shrugged and said, "Aye...but I do understand what ye mean...this place is a...dump."

The attendant at the counter stared at the threesome, eyes bugged out. He slowly reached for the phone and dialed 911. "911 Emergency...State the nature of your emergency..." the operator's voice said. "There's...some...scary people in my Motel 6....I think they might be terrorists or sumpin...Please...send hel-" Before he could finish his unfounded request, he found himself beginning to shake violently. The Motel 6 attendant was no more, and in his place stood a new man, well dressed, in a suit and sunglasses. His name was Agent Swartzblatt. He put his finger to his ear and then reached in his coat, drawing his standard issue Desert Eagle. He pointed it at the trio in the lobby...

But unbeknownst to the Agent, Sync was walking up behind him. As Sync was walking he pulled out a pair of sais and as he was about to stab the agent he turned around grabbing Sync's arm. Sync tried to stab the agent with his other sai but the agent grabbed his other arm aswell.

"do you really think you could kill me Mr. Puni? do yoou really think i couldn't hear you?" asked the agent.

"Hey can you hear this?" Sync kicked the agent. he fell to the floor and changed back to normal. " I knew that knife in my shoe would come handy." Sync said to himself quietly. "Man you three need to be more careful." He shouted.

"Sync." UT looked down at the dead agent, then back up at Sync. "Thanks for the backup. Where's Freddy and crew?" Sync shrugged, as did Macleod. Hitman wiped his trademark sword, stoic as ever. "This..." Macleod began, "has got to be the longest fifteen minutes in history. Should we proceed without them?" Hitman sheathed his blade and looked to UT. She sighed. "We'll give them five more minutes. Then we'll move on."

Freddy Krueger piloted his ship through the treacherous canyons of the real. He looked forward to seeing the crew of the Cadeucus again...especially UT. It'd been a while since they'd gone on a mission and he actually found himself missing her. He brought the ship up to broadcast depth and set down on a cliff overlooking the wreckage of another older hovercraft.

Hitman grew impatient, and it was obvious to everyone that he was not the most patient individual. He looked at his watch, tapped his foot, paced the room. Just that moment, the door opened and a customer to the Motel 6 stepped in. She looked at the four freedom fighters, then down at the dead body, then at the group again. She screamed loudly. Macleod said, "We didn't do this lass...ye've gotta believe. We...called the cops...they're on their way, ok? Ye can go now, lass." The woman backed away slowly and left.

"Where the hell are you, Freddy? UT asked silenly, as she feared for the worst.

Niva saw them waiting around, n that wasn't good. She even tried to get in contact with the Osirus, nothing was going through. She just hoped that they were ok.

She was usto of being alone on the ship when her crew was plugged. NMN, was constently watching the screens oner her back, n that annoyed her. But she let him, once they get the mother out she needs him to make sure everything goes well.

NMN asked 'Have u heard anything from FK, n the others??? What the hell can be happening to them???
'NMN, I have no clue. I just hope they r fine, n we hear word from them soon.' Niva replied.
'If they don't show up we still need an exit??? The exit is ......'
(Somebody take over)

"I need to be in there. Damn. I wish I could help. But, being the new medic and all, UT needs me here. Damn." NMN was quietly tlaking to himself as Niva gave the location of the exit. "Honey, you need to stop complaining and help me watch these screens. I hate it when people do it, but any help is good help." Niva was feverishly typing and looking back and forth, monitoring every aspect of the Matrix arond her fellow crew.

"This is Freddy Kreuger of the Osiris. We ahve reached braodcast depth. Going in now. Tell UT we are on our way." Freddy's voice came in loud and clear over the speaker.

Niva immediately dialed into UT's phone. "The Osiris is the way. Get ready for extraction." UT came back relieved, "Good. It's about damn time. Make sure you are ready, NMN."

NMN silently acknowledged this command, his eyes still plastered to the screens of scrolling Matrix.

NMN heard UTs voice speaking to Niva and heard his name mentioned.

NMN: OI? What is it?
UT: Ok sweetheart, change of plans, looks like your needed in here.
NMN: I'm there yesterday!
UT: Yesterday or today is cool. As long as its not tommorrow I'm down. Micheala's been shot. We've come too far for Liani to lose her mum now.
NMN: Ok I'm coming UT.

Niva jacked NMN in and he met up with the crew.

UT: Well? How bad is she NMN?
NMN: Well let's put it this way, It's gonna challenge my trainng that's for sure..

Just when they want to start running, people drop down from the big glass window above them.

it's the Osirus crew. AO, kobra, smith1 and TINM pull out there pistols and uzi's and start shooting at the SWAT people that are storming in, with there MP5's

Freddy: quickly follow me and PP, we know a safe way out of here. ah damn is that who i think she is ?
UT: yes sadly she is, it's liani's mother
PP: then we realy need to hurry. where is NMN ?
Mac: he is comming as fast as he can.
Hitman: i'll help the others. you all get her out of here.

suddenly they all hear a hard sound.
AO: wtf what that
hitman: i have no idea.
the (still alive) SWAT people turn around and also look outside (like the osirus crew and the Caduceus crew)

swat member 1: what do you think that is
swat2: i have no idea, is it something of us ?
then smith1 see's what is it
she shouts to everyone *quickly run to front desk, away from the door*
they all run to the back of the room, but the 5 remaining swat members keep looking outside. then 1 of them opens the door, but quickly close's it.

swat3: what is it
swat4: it's a F*CKING MONSTER TRUCK.

then the monster truck drive's right into the building, crushing the swat people under it's tire's. it stops just inche's away from the Osirus and Caduceus crew

Hitman: do you think it's a agent
mac: could be
AO: let's just get ready
UT: we realy need to hurry, she is bleeding fast
Freddy: oke me, you, PP macleod and TINM will carry her out of here. If that is a agent, you try your best to stop that bastard.

then the door opens, and NMN jumps out of it
NMN: missed me ?
Hitman: man you scarred us for a moment, we thought you where a agent.
Kobra: coudn't you of said anything
NMN: didn't niva call you
Mac: we hadn't had a call from her. how come ?

PP: that can only 1 thing.
UT: agents are blocking our signal !
smith1: but that means ....
hitman: there close. damn there they are

3 agent stand in the big hole, the monster truck made, and look at rebels
agent1: weak
agent2: filty
agent3: humans
agent1: prepare
agent2: to
agent3: DIE !
Freddy: f*ck you !. let's get out of here.

TINM and NMN pick up Micheala, and carry her out of there. UT opens the door, PP goes true first, to check if everything is safe
PP: oke let's go !

PP leads, wile TINM and NMN (carying Micheala) walk behind her, UT and Freddy cover the rear.

Hitman, macleod, Sync, Almightyone, kobra, smith1 and imatwin stay behind to fight against the agents. as long as they can
Mac: so wich do you whant hitman ?
Hitman: let's both get the one in the middle, he looks the strongest.
Mac: excelent idea
AO: oke you and me smith1, we fight the one on the left.

kobra, Sync and ima walk over to the agent on the right. and they attack him.

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Mac: Hey you big guy!

Middle Agent: What do you want human?

Mac: I want to kick your ass and so does Hitman.

Middle Agent: Stupid humans you will lose.

Hitman: well we will have to see about that.

At first all three agents start to walk toward Mac and Hitman but AO and S1 shout out at them.

S1: where do you two think your going?

Right Agent: Now you want to fight?

S1: Oh yea me and AO, but not you ( AO and S1 look at the agent on the left. )

Left Agent: Your choice...

The agent on the right is attacked by kobra and Sync when the other two agents look at it AO and S1 attack the left agent and Mac and Hitman attack the middle agent.

S1: who is your dady hu? i said who is your dady?

Left Agent: get off me human.

S1 is thrown off the agent and flys into the air and lands on the ground with great force.

Left Agent: It is time.

AO: what about me you dumb shit.

Left Agent: ah yes you.

AO: yes me.

AO and The left agent run toward each other with great power but AO is puched to the ground by Kobra who is near by and the left agent jumps in the air and misses AO but does not miss the wall in front of him. that agent turns into a old man.

AO: thank Kobra...WATCH OUT!

Kobra: oh shit. ( kobra ducks as an agent is swinging Sync in the air. )

Right Agent: can you fly human?

Sync: woooo..wooooo...ahhhhh

Kobra: OMG sync watch it.

Sync is tossed in to the air and lands on an apartment. he barely makes it.

Right Agent: ah to bad.

AO: why you mother...

AO is stept on as well as Kobra by the right agent.. at this post it seems hopeless for AO, S1, Kobra and Sync but it is going good with Mac and Hitman.

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Ok batter up...Under Construction!

Completed:
Together, Mac and Hitman working with their blades was as though something cosmic had finally been completed. They moved as - no, better - than one, communicating without words. Two blades covered and slashed what one could not, and the agent found himself on swiftly on a shaky defensive. No sooner had he landed a blow on one when the other would drive him off and buy enough time for the one to recover. Their expressions emotionless and thus invulnerable, the two created a swirling dervish of death.
The agent, running out of patience and room, decided to switch the battle around decisively. He caught advantage of a small opening in their offense and once more knocked Hitman in his stomach, lifting him a pace both back and up. As he landed in a pained crouch, the agent anticipated MacLeod's response, for he was not an exhaustible human like his opponent. He deflected his katana with a sweep of his arm and punched his right armpit for a disabling blow. MacLeod had anticipated it and had twisted his body to follow and lessen the blow, continuing to twist and converted his recoil to a swift and savage slash from the opposite direction. Unfortunately, the agent once again anticipated him. He ducked, and wasting no time, went for a hammer blow that would break the man's ribs....

...Then there was silence, a pause of infinite length as the combatants finally stopped moving...
...To reveal a blade protruding from the back of the agent's head, the hilt almost touching his brow. On the other end, Hitman was frozen in a lunge, breathing hard. He looked up at MacLeod, similarly frozen in the slash that could have been his last move, and the two shared a moment of relief and acknowledgement. They spoke together.
"Thanks."
Then Hitman withdrew his katana from the limp body of the dead accountant, and the men smoothly turned as one away from him, and into the rest of the battle waging about them.


...Next!

"Operator" said Niva.
"We need an exit, n quick. We need to get her located as soon as we give her pill." UT yelled in the phone.
Niva got up n ran to another screen.
"There's a building down the block. The building number is 169. The first floor, apt 1D. Thats the best a closet place." Niva replied.

She started preparing everything, for the rescue of Liani mother. N keeping an eye on the screens.
She sees run to building with no problem. But the others that stood behind, r having a hell of a fight. We better not lose no one she thought to herself.

"We made it." PP called this time.
"I need NMN back here once he gets Micheala stable. She may give us some problems located n getting stable here." Niva replied back.
"No problem." PP said.

Someone take over.......

uhh may i continue the fight or not. because you putted under construction above it ?

well i will only now write about the escape the others are making.

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UT: come on guy's we realy need to hurry. i don't whant to disapoint liani
NMN: where going as fast as we can, without hurting her.
suddenly Micheala starts to talk (in pain of course)
Micheala: l...liani ? where...... where is she ?

UT: soon you will see her again, she has missed you
Micheala: are y...you the people that took her away from those evil men.
Freddy: i think she means the agents. and yes Micheala we took liani.
Micheala: is she .... alright ?
NMN: she is fine. even better then it

on the Caduceus
liani: so how do you see people ?
niva: well darling, the matrix is too big to decode. but if you look good at the code's you can see who are who. see i will zoom in alittle.
Liani: that glowing spot is that ?
niva: yes thats our crew, and there carying your mommy
liani suddenly starts jumping up and down, and looks very happy

Liani: yes, i'm going to see mommy again :D
Niva (thinking to her self): ah kids, so full of energy

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back in the matrix

PP calls helios. *so got a exit for us ?*
Helios: you see the big appartment infront of you, acros the street
PP: yeah i see it.
helios: second floor, room 101. there's your exit. hurry, signals are going red with agents.
PP: what you mean
helios: there will be alot more agents coming your way. in 5 minutes. SO GET HER OUT FAST !
PP: oke you call the Caduceus and tell them that they need to find, Micheala body fast
helios: roger. calling now

PP shuts her phone, and jumps up, she lands on a car. the traffic is heavy. cars every where. PP jumps from car to car.
TINM: humm i hope this works. never tryed it before
NMN: huh what you mean ?
TINM: freddy hold her for a moment.
Freddy: oke. but what are you going to do

TINM morphs into Magneto (from X-men) and lifts all the cars up into the air
TINM: HURRY, i can't hold this for very long
UT: RUN !
freddy and NMN that are holding Micheala run as fast as they can to the other end of the street. and UT follows closely behind them.

when there at the other end, TINM let's the cars drop again. he morphs back into himself. and runs and jumps over the cars.
PP: since when can you do that
TINM: well it's not perfect yet, but i trained it. i can for a short period of time. also copy some one's powers.
Freddy: that can come in handy sometime's

UT: no time for chat guy's. we are on a mission
NMN calls niva
Niva: niva here, whats up NMN
NMN: niva, how are the others doing.
Niva: Mac and hitman have killed one of the agents. but the others have alittle more trouble with the agent there fighting
NMN: call sync or mac. and tell that even more agents will come in about 3 minute's

Niva: i will call them right now !
NMN and Freddy pick Micheala up again, and begin running again.
UT and PP open the doors and they walk in
a young woman walks towards them, and she see's the wounded Micheala
woman: this isn't the hospital ! what happend to her
TINM: she got shot. uhhh we need to get to room 101 on the second floor
woman: you need a apointment to go up !

UT suddenly get's mad, and grabs the woman by her neck and shouts at her * NOW YOU LISTEN BITCH, YOU ARE NOW GOING TO OPEN THAT SECURITY DOOR AND LET US PASS. OR I WILL RIP YOU F*CKING TONG OUT !!!*

but then to everyone's horror, the woman turns into a agent. he then grabs UT by the neck and begins chocking her
agent: you where saying ?
NMN: LET GO OFF HER !
NMN let's go of Micheala legs, and runs towards the agent. and begins attacking him

the agent trows UT against a near by wall and she falls then to the ground. PP runs towards her to check if she is alright.
NMN attacks the agent, by giving a serie of punches.

the agent blocks them, and counters them by a serie of kicks.
he kicks NMN against his stomach and chest. but when he whants to kick against against NMN neck. NMN grabs the agents legs, and trows the agent to the ground.
he jumps back, and trows his long jacket off. In his hands now holding 2 tomahawk axe's.

The agent get's up again, and does his tie good again, he wipe's the dust off him, and cracks his neck hard.
agent: now die
the agent quickly pulls out his desert eagle, and begins shooting at NMN
-BT- NMN begins spinning his 2 axe's fast infront of him. he hits away the bullets,and begins running at the agent, wile stil spinning the axe's -EBT-

when the agent has run out of bullets, NMN jumps up and kicks him against his face. the agent walks back, and trows his broken sunglasses away. when NMN lands on the ground again, he does a serie of hacks and slashes.
the agent dodge's them but then get's hit against the side of his face. a long deep cut is on his face.

the agent puts his fingers over the wound and looks at the blood.
he become's very angry, and then attacks NMN. punching the axe's out of his hands, he then grabs NMN by his shirt and trows him at PP, she catches him and puts him on the ground

Freddy: is it me, or do they always get angry, when you cut them ?
agent: who is next ?


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the tomahawk axe

http://www.matrixmania.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=144546

Um I see PP online. PP HEY HONEY! WE BLOODY MISSED YOU GIRL!!! :D

Great work FK, now let's see if PP wants to add something while we've got her here. Please girl just a little (or alot lol).

oeps lol Niva, you just posted seconds before me. i didn't see it in time. hope you don't mind :)

Good job so far, folks...and if you were referring to me FK no prob: I usually put 'under construction' and post, then edit the story in on my leisure, so save space. If you see both the message and a story after, it means I've finished. :)

yea this is going good. Great job everyone the story is going along nice. just a heads up if you see under contruction at the bottum of my post or if my post just says work in progress well then you know what iam doing. Just a head up for all of you.

hey you guys are doing a great job on this. i have a little bit to add but i was wondering if i could continue with my part on the fighting part of the story? if not that is okay.

Hey smith1! How've you been? Well at the moment I'm writing an add on for this mission as FK has this sneaking suspision I'm about to make the next mission after this about retriving the childs daddy lol. So if everyone's having a break then it's good with me hon.

Oh and guys, use the Mr Flibble construction sign I made if you're in the middle of writing, that way we can see him and his huge glowing penguin eyes and know it's a no touchy lol.

oke smith1 here your battle

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the agent runs towards smith1, and punches her right against her face, the agent smile's but then is confused. she didn't fall or whas punched back.
smith1 looks at the agent and then smile's, she grabs his hand breaks it and then trows the agent in the air. when he falls down again she kicks him towards AO, he inturn punches the agent towards her again. and they begin kicking and punching him over.

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lol oke this is not realy for the story, just thought it would be funny. lol i have no (realy good) idea's at the moment. to realy continue the story.

Originally posted by Freddy Krueger


lol oke this is not realy for the story, just thought it would be funny. lol i have no (realy good) idea's at the moment. to realy continue the story.


allow me to continue it if thats ok...

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smith1 leapt at the agent, giving him a strong blow to the face that sent him reeling. the agent immediately was on his feet, realizing that smith1 meant business, he decided to end it quick and blocked her next move, grabbing her arm and crushing it. smith1 screamed in agony and fell to the ground, cradling her broken arm.
the agents' shadow engulfed her and she looked up to meet her demise, only to hear a *snap*, and a scream, this time from the agent.
he fell down next to her and smith1 looked up at the hand reaching out to her. its owner said "sorry im late, had afew things i had to do." iamatwin smiled as she helped up smith1 and led her away.

Originally posted by iamatwin
allow me to continue it if thats ok...

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smith1 leapt at the agent, giving him a strong blow to the face that sent him reeling. the agent immediately was on his feet, realizing that smith1 meant business, he decided to end it quick and blocked her next move, grabbing her arm and crushing it. smith1 screamed in agony and fell to the ground, cradling her broken arm.
the agents' shadow engulfed her and she looked up to meet her demise, only to hear a *snap*, and a scream, this time from the agent.
he fell down next to her and smith1 looked up at the hand reaching out to her. its owner said "sorry im late, had afew things i had to do." iamatwin smiled as she helped up smith1 and led her away.

Please do!! That is if it's ok with everyone else.:) Great work hon, keep adding to it!!!!

Hell yeah :)
good to finaly see you (again) ima. now let's get busy again :D

Hitman and Macleod sheathed their swords and headed for the hospital. Along the way the met up with Ima and Smith1. "Ima! Good to see ye lass..." Macleod said, drawing his handgun. "Sorry I'm late guys...had some things to take care of." The now foursome caught up to UT and NMN, who were babying Michaela. Hitman drew his uzi from under his coat. "Mac and I will hold them here. GET her out...no matter what...We've got to get her moving...Give her the pill now!! That way we can start tracking her while we make our way outta here..." UT called Niva for the exit. "We need an exit in the hospital...can you do it?"

In the real, Niva smiled. "Can I? Heh...watch your girl at work." Mad typing sounds ensued, then came the reply. "OK, UT, get your team to the 6th floor Oncology Unit. There's a quiet room with a phone I can use." UT and NMN lifted Michaela again, who groaned in agony. Hitman took a silver case out of his coat and produced the red pill. "Normally there's a big to-do about this, Michaela...but we don't have the time. Do you want to see your child again?" Michaela nodded and said, "No...matter.....what..." Hitman looked at UT, who said, "Good enough for me. Red pill her." Hitman slipped the red pill into her mouth, which she swallowed. Macleod got on the phone. "Niva...start searching for her location." "Ten steps ahead of you Macleod..."

As NMN and UT carried Micheala up to the onocology level, NMN noticed her having more trouble breathing and a slight blueish tinge around her lips. He motioned for UT to see.

UT: You hang in there ok. You've come this far girl, I'm not gonna lose you now. Understand.

Micheala was trying to nod, however chest pains suddenly took over her and she cried out in pain.

NMN: We gotta do this quick UT. It's not looking good.
UT: Listen, the phone..It's ringing. This way hurry!

The both headed toward the sound of Niva calling and made Micheala go first. UT then urged for NMN to follow.

NMN: Look out UT an agent behind y.............

UT swung around and drew her katana as she did so. The agent drew his gun but was too slow. In one swift motion she took his gun along with his hand, and they both ended on the ground at her feet. The next sound she heard was the phone ringing, however she had to focus on the agent before she could answer it.

As the agent was looking at picking his gun up from the floor, UT lunged her sword into his chest, and as he morphed into another down the corridor she used that time to answer the phone.

I'm in a LOTR kind of mood...

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Within five minutes Michaela is being reeled into the mighty hull of the Caduceus. Niva truly worked a miracle with the location, she locked on the target in record timing. Mac is holding Michaela. She is breathing heavily and does not look too well.

Michaela: Why… Why do my eyes hurt?
NMN: You’re staring at Mac… The sight of him would make anyone go blind.

Mac balances himself and Michaela on one leg and kicks at NMN with the other.

UT: Very funny… Michaela, honey… Calm down, I’ll explain everything to you later.
Liani: Mommy?
Michaela: Baby?!?

Michaela blacks out. NMN places two fingers on her neck, reading for a pulse.

NMN: Mac, get her over to the med station. We have some serious work to do if she’s going to make it.

Mac rushes Michaela to the med lab, NMN follows. UT begins to chase after them but is stopped in her tracks when Iamatwin places her hand on UT’s shoulder.

Iamatwin: UT… I insist that you go take a break, for your own sake. You’ve worked harder than any of us and no good will come of you worrying about Michaela.
UT: No… I want to be there.
Iamatwin: Captain, I’m ordering you. There’s no reason to fret.

UT gazes down at Liani.

UT: Come on honey, let’s go have a sit... Mommy will want to see you soon.

UT and Liani sit down. Liani rests her head on UT’s shoulder. After some time she falls asleep and UT is left alone to her thoughts.

UT *Thinking*: How do you pick up the threads of an old life?… How do you go on, when in your heart you begin to understand there IS no going back?… There are some things time cannot mend… Some hurts that go too deep that have taken hold.

Hitman: UT…? UT…! What’s going on? You’re stealing quotes from the Lord of the Rings!
UT: What? Huh?
Hitman: Were you thinking out loud again?
UT: I… Uhh…
Niva: Forget about it, guys… We have an incoming call from the Osiris!

Niva puts on the speakerphone.

Freddy: Requesting assistance! We’re traveling in the sewers heading north, being pursued by exiles!
Hitman: What? How the hell did exiles get there?!?
Freddy: The Merovingian payed us a surprise visit right after you guys jacked out… He’s obviously VERY pissed that we took two of his prized possessions… Liani AND her mother…

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Hopefully that last part adds a nice twist to the story, as we have the Merovingian and crew on our hands now.

Hey, I figured, I am a part of this group so I will give this thing a try. It probably wont be very good I just made it up on the spot so I would like some help. (and if there is any confusion, see the profile for Smith1).




As Ima led the way through the door of the room, S1 was wrapping up her arm in a makeshift sling, and all of a sudden she stopped.

Ima: S1 are you alright, what's wrong
S1: squiddies!!!!!!!!!


With one quick motion she pulled her phone out of her pocket and dialed the number for the Osirus.
Helios: operator
S1: I need an exit, fast and make it close
Helios: Okay, I’ve got one, one floor up room 202, but what’s the rush?
S1: check your monitor
Helios: holy shit, we’ve got squiddies coming



As S1 heads up to the second floor, the pain in her arm is excruciating, but all she can think about is protecting the ship as best she can. She reaches room 202 and picks up the ringing receiver immediately being pulled into the real.

S1: call the others, we need all hands on deck for every squiddy attack
Helios: okay ( over phone in matrix) Freddy, get the crew to room 202 now, we have squiddies on approach
FK: Right( looks around at the crew) where is S1
Helios: she is already here hurry the exit is waiting.

Freddy hangs up the phone and he and the crew run to the second level


(ah man TINM i guess you and i were kinda on the same page i hope we can adapt it to fit i guess i posted like 2 seconds after you did oh well if you dont like it we can cancel it )

smith1 don't be silly. That was fantastic :) And TINM nice LOTR touch there mate.

Ok, who's next? We've almost finished another mission here guys, damn brilliant. We should have a notch system going for our sigs soon.....mmmm gives me an idea hehehe.:D

S1 pulls out her 2 revolvers, and waits in the room for Freddy and the others
S1: come on guy's hurry. we need to protect our ship

meanwile downstairs
TINM: we realy need to run faster, a big ass sentinel alert
Freddy: alright, everyone hold on to me !
when every one is hanging on to freddy, he fly's up and fly's right true the window of room 202.

S1: wtf, wow damn i almost thought you where agents.
AO: nah, we just took a short cut.
S1 and Kobra open the door, and look in the hallway to check if everything whas oke.
Kobra: alright, no agents. also mero's goons aren't up here
AO: there down there. oeps damn they saw me
PP: AO, damn you.

the phone starts to ring
Freddy: oke gunners first, we need a defence on the ship !
PP is the first one to plug out and then Kobra.
TINM: freddy you go now, you can fly the ship better then the rest off us.
Freddy: oke. but be carefull. and grab the phone as fast as you can
AO: GO ALREADY

Freddy picks up the phone, and disapears.
TINM: alright, now you S1. your the one thats wounded
S1: you sure, you don't need help.
AO: what can happen
seconds later S1 also plugs out. and wakes up on the ship.

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Helios: good to see you, let me check your arm.
S1: i don't feel a thing now
helios: humm yes, good everything is fine. now quickly get to your station. to the reloading station.
the feel the ship beginning to move, and then they fly off.

Freddy calls all near by ships.
Freddy: This is Freddy Krueger, Captain of the Osirus. my ships needs helps. we just escaped from the matrix, and we have a big sentinel alert.

Helios: Freddy i know now how many sentinels are coming
Freddy: wel how many
Helios: ...... over 250 sentinels
Freddy: Holy shit. *to other ships again* we realy need help fast. over 250 sentinels are coming for us.

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TINM: oke now it's your turn.
the phone starts to ring, and just when AO whants to pick it up, the door get's kicked open. the goons of the merovincian stand there.
One pulls out his gun and shoots the phone.

AO: ah godamnit.
TINM: hello ladie's. that wasn't very nice of you
goon1: our master, whants to see you. NOW !
AO: tell your master, that he can kiss my ass !

TINM and AO jump out of the window and slide down to the next building. they begin running
AO get's his phone and calls helios
Helios: what happend
AO: mero's goons again
Helios: let's see i got a new exit. third at 24 street. it's 2 mile's west of your curent position. room 129. get there quickly. we need your help.

AO: oke to third at 24 street.
the jump down, and stop a car. the pull the driver out and jump into the car. they quickly drive off.


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Hmm, let's see if I can twist this to make a bit more sense in continuity.
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Inside the Matrix, AO and TINM are cruising down the street in their stolen Cadillac Escalade. All seems well, the vehicle is going at a steady 60 mph and they will arrive at their exit soon. Suddenly, the car is struck. It begins to turn to the right and soon topples over, rolling forward on it’s side. TINM manages to get a quick glance behind him and sees that the roof of the back end of the car is crushed inward. Dazed and confused (Which is an excellent song AND the state of their consciousness), TINM and AO struggle to exit the Escalade. After a while they finally manage to get out.

AO: What in all of God’s green goodness caused us to crash?

TINM looks up into the sky. Soaring through the clouds is an enormous winged creature, resembling a pterodactyl. The monster encircles TINM and AO and soon lands but a few yards away from the two. It is now clear that someone… Or, rather, something is riding on top of the winged creature.

Witch King: I am the With King, valiant servant of the Merovingian.
TINM: Hey I've seen you before! Didn’t you… Didn’t you die in Return of the King?

While TINM humors the Witch King, AO pulls out his cell and gets Helios on the phone.

Helios: What the hell is that in front of you? His code reads like none I’ve ever seen.
AO: He says he’s the Witch King… It appears our situation has gone from bad to worse.
Witch King: You will come with me.

At that, the Witch King sweeps at AO and TINM on his mount and throws two of these on AO and TINM:

http://www.kc-denmark.dk/public_html/300899/net1_l.jpg

With these nets upon their heads, it is impossible to escape. AO drops his cell phone in the heat of the action. The Witch King takes our two heroes and flies away with them, his destination being the Merovingian’s Chateau.

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On the Osiris…

Helios: Craptain -
Freddy: - Captain.
Helios: Right, we have a problem.
Freddy: Other than the 250 sentinels that appeared out of nowhere in pursuit of us?
Helios: Yes… One of the Merovingian’s programs… He took TINM and AO captive.
Freddy: What?
Helios: He had nets, sir… They didn’t stand a chance!
Freddy: Goddamnit… How far away are those sentinels?
Helios: At the current velocity of our ship and the sentinels, they should close in on us within an hour.
Freddy: That just may be enough time… Tell Kobra to take control of the ship. The rest of the crew and I are going on a little rescue mission.
Helios: Aye aye, craptain.
Freddy: No, no, you’re pronouncing it wrong. There’s no ‘R’. Repeat after me… CAPtain.
Helios: CRRRAPtain.
Freddy: No, CAPTAIN.
Helios: CRRRRRRAPTAIN.
Freddy: There’s no 'R' in the word, goddamnit!
Helios: Que?

In case you weren’t paying attention to the story thus far, I, the narrator, shall recap... Kobra takes control of the ship, doing his best to buy time from the armada of sentinels. Freddy and the rest of the crew jack in to the Matrix to save TINM and AO.

The camera swings around a room, revealing the crew standing around a ringing telephone in an abandoned basement. The crew heads for the Merovingian’s place, but soon run into a couple of his goons. Since time is of the essence, they descend into a manhole. The exiles are still chasing the crew through the sewers, splashing soiled water everywhere. Freddy takes out his cell phone.

Freddy (This is where the stories should coincide and make sense): Niva? Is that you honey? We have a problem.
Niva: Sure is, one sec buddy.

Niva puts her hand on the mic and yells to UT and Hitman behind her.

Niva: Forget about it, guys… We have an incoming call from the Osiris!

Niva puts on the speakerphone.

Freddy: Requesting assistance! We’re traveling in the sewers heading north, being pursued by exiles!
Hitman: What? How the hell did exiles get there?!?
Freddy: The Merovingian payed us a surprise visit right after you guys jacked out… He’s obviously VERY pissed that we took two of his prized possessions… Liani AND her mother…
UT: Oh my…
Freddy: We need some help… One of the Merovingian’s exiles, the Witch King, captured TINM and AO. We’re on a rescue mission, but it went a bit sour when we unexpectedly ran into these exiles.
UT: Right. *On the intercom to NMN:* NMN? Mac? How’s Michaela holding up?
NMN: We’re a bit busy right now… She should be fine though.
UT: Alright. Freddy, how's your ship holding up against those sentinels?
Freddy: They shouldn't meet with us for another hour or so, we SHOULD have enough time to save TINM and AO.

UT turns to her crew members around here.

UT: Let’s suit up guys… Looks like this mission isn’t quite over with yet.

LMAO..."He had nets, sir… They didn’t stand a chance!" Brilliant. I love your work TINM.

Gracias, senorita :D.

Heh. Man this story has twisted. I wonder who'll try continuing this. I like the 'Craptain' part!

"Let's suit up, guys," UT said, "Looks like this mission isn’t quite over with yet." Hitman and Macleod looked at each other. "Witch...King..." Hitman said slowly, "Where the hell do they come up with this stuff...I mean, really, on a giant Pterydactyl? That's just plain silly." Macleod shrugged. "Aye, lad, but ye see...That's how the programs work in here...they adapt to whatever will suit the situation." "There's no situation," Hitman said as the crew sat in their respective chairs, "That would warrant a 'witch king' riding on a giant pterydactyl being considered 'normal'." With that, they entered the whiteness of the Construct.

"So...what do you guys need?" Niva asked sweetly. Macleod looked skyward and said, "Besides a friggin' miracle?" Hitman smirked and said, "Guns...lots of guns..." UT shook her head. "How many times are you gonna run that joke, Hitman? As long as I've known you, every single time you jack in, you say that...Doesn't it ever get old to you?" Hitman, who was wiping down Masamune, his trusty blade, shook his head and replied, "Never." Macleod checked Connor, his Katana, and sheathed it. "How do you kill a dinosaur and a witch?" "Witch King," Niva corrected. "Whatever," Macleod replied. "Hmmm..." UT thought, then added, "Giant can of Witch-Be-Gone? Big ass fly swatter?" Sync walked up, seemingly out of nowhere. "Guys...we've got a job to do, right?" Hitman shook his head. "So much for witty banter," he sighed.

Once again the city rushed up around them, and they found themselves on a rooftop. UT's phone rang. "New ringtone?" Hitman asked. "Yeah, it's the theme from Leave It to Beaver," UT replied. Hitman nodded, then realized what she said. "Wait...what?" Hitman replied. "Can we please FOCUS people?" Sync asked, "We've gotta go get TINM and AO from the Witch King." Hitman snickered, then burst into full on laughter, as did UT and Macleod. "Come on, Sync, even you've gotta see the humor of the ridiculousness of that statement..." Sync smirked. "OK, OK...this is kind of silly...but that doesn't change the fact that they're still in danger." Hitman nodded. UT stepped forward. "All right people. We've got a job to do."

New ringtone...lmfao...you guys are fantastic at this you know. *Starts laughing hard about big ass fly swatters and 'witch-be-gone'*

It is done, deleted, gone and you will never see it again.
So here is a better one that will make more sense.
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With Freddy and the crew.

FK: S1 are they behind us ( freddy yells as S1 is the last one )

S1: Yes now keep going before they catch up to me ( Bang! ) Damn, now they are shooting at me.

PP: there not just shooting at you honey there shooting at all of us. It just so happens that your the last one and the one that the bullets get close to.;)

S1: (Bang!) Oh crap...ah right PP right.

FK: Will you to stop the chit chat back there because the more you talk the easyer it is for them to hear us and therefore follow us.

PP: Yes Freddy.

Goon 1: Waahaha...die you mother fuckers die. (Bang! the goon fires his gun again.)
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At Merovingian's chateau with WK, TINM and AO.

WK: It is time...

TINM: What is all this about?

WK: That is something you must ask Merv himself.

AO: I thought you might say that.

WK takes AO and TINM into the chateau and to Merv and some of his goons he has with him.

Merv: ( While eating ) Are yes you to I almost forgot. Emmm...Emmm you have something I want and if you give it to me I will give you something you want.

TINM: what is that Merv? (TINM says in weird voice)

Merv: Ah yes the attitude I see, well it so happens that what I want is not the eyes of the oralce but it is yet something simple and easy for you to hand over...Liani and her mum.

AO: Well what do you know it so happens that someone else already took them from us.:rolleyes:

Merv: I can tell that you are not telling the truth hey.

AO: No, no realy someone did.:rolleyes:

Merv: (looking and talking to TINM) Is this true?

TINM: Well in a sense it is...

Merv: Oh what the hell we all know you are not telling me the truth all so you can be freed. It is people like you who dont get to the point that realy piss me off. (he snaps his fingers to his 10 or so goons in the room.) WK let them go I want them to be tought a lesson in behavior and lack of listening.

WK puts AO and TINM down. TINM pulls up his pants a little and AO cracks his neck and loosens his body.

TINM: Lets go...

The goons with out guns to use this time (as Merv does not want to kill AO and TINM but only get info out of them) take off running toward them.
AO jumps in the air and does a jump kick with both feet flying in the air and takes out two goons. TINM does a front flip over three goons and turns around as he lands and does a sweep kick taking all three down.Though the ones taking down arn't out of the fight they are just hurt try to get up but fall back down in pain. The remaining five attack with duck tape and Two chairs. They get hold of AO and TINM and tie and strap both to a chair.

Merv: Hmmm...yes you to seem to be fighting for something yes?

AO: You mean more then our survivle?

TINM: No dumb shit he means we are fighting for Liani and her mother.

AO: I knew that and dont call me a dumb shit, dumb shit.

TINM: What the hell did you just say to me?

AO: you heard me or at least I thought you did. Oh I forgot your ears dont work as they are up your ass so they can hear me kicking your ass.

TINM start to fight to get Merv and WK to come near them as they are not realy fighting. WK is the first one to head toward AO and TINM. As he gets to TINM he grabs his mouth, but with some suprise for WK, TINM had a knife on him and durring the fighting he had with AO he used it to cut of the rope and tape. With that he stabs WK in the eye. After that is when Merv heads toward TINM.

WK: AHHHH! My eye.

TINM: yea (TINM looks to the corner of his eye to see Merv running toward him) oh shit.

But with sudden shock Merv is triped by AO who is still in the chair. Merv hits his face hard on the tile flooring.

TINM: Ouch that had to hurt. Here let me help you with that ( TINM cuts off AO's rope and tape. )

Some more of Merv's men walk into the room as in a near by sitting room they heard a noise.

Goon: Merv we heard...(he see's TINM and AO standing there and Merv on the ground holding his bloody mouth.) Why you (he snaps his fingers and then over 20 to 30 more of merv's men come out.) Get them.

AO: we are in big troulbe.

TINM: Yep. :(
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Back with freddy and everyone else.

PP: FK there is an opening over there I think we should take it.

FK: Alright lets go everyone head on up.

FK leads everyone else up first before he goes.

PP: hurry FK there right behind you. (she then looks in horror as FK is punched in the face by one of Merv's men.) NO!(BANG! the rest start shooting at PP and S1) ah go S1.

The goons do not kill FK they only take him to Merv's place as well. PP and S1 are still headed towards Merv's place as well just hoping that FK is still alive. When FK and the goons with him arrive they walk into a fight going on and so they get ready to go in but are held back by S1 and PP as they arrived there as well.
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hope that is better. Continue...

Ok lets see if I can jump in......
Back on the ship, Niva has to keep her eye on Liani n her mother.
Liani is very excited to have her mother back. N her mother is not doing to bad neither. I think what makes her stronger is knowing that her daughter is alive n well.
Returning from checking on Liani mom. Niva look at the screens.
So much is going on, everybody is either fighting or about to. N Niva has to keep her eyes open for anything.
After being out the Matrix, this is the only family has had n she does not wanna lose any of them.....
"Niva, do u have any family" Liani asked, as she walked up on Niva working.
"No, well I did in the Matrix" replied Niva.
"Tell me"
"Liani I had 2 beautiful daughters, n I really don't wanna talk about it, ok. Go to mom, I know u r happy that u have her back. N I know she is happy that she has her baby back."

Ok I jumped in there. I apologize I didn't write more but I love what is going on in the Matrix. So I am mostly reading, lol.

AO and TINM are just about to attack the group of 50 goons. when another door opens 5 goons walk in holding Freddy. he is knocked out and tied up with rope's

TINM: damnit they got Freddy
the merovincian get's up again and is still holding his bleeding nose, he walks to his goons and then start talking again
Merv: now it seems i have the upperhand again
AO: you wish, i just know Freddy isn't realy knocked out !

the goons trow Freddy on the ground, but he doesn't get up
TINM: umm AO i do think he is knocked out.
AO: ah shit, where are PP, s1 and kobra.

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in the sewer PP, kobra and S1 are still trying to escape the large group of attackers. that mero send after them
S1: can we stop running now. i'm getting tired
PP: hey why the hell are we running
Kobra: well the narator made us
PP: what that guy again

narator: yes ME. i'm telling the story now so you better do what i say
PP: alright that's it !
PsycikPsycho pulls out a shotgun, and starts shooting at the narator
the goons stop and look at PP
goon1: what is she doing
goon2: fighting with the narator
goon3: bad idea

suddenly the narator picks PP up and start shaking her violently
PP: let go off me... waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
Kobra: hey you prick, let go off her
narator: you whant some too ?
PP get's trown against kobra and they both fall down.
S1: i didn't say anything
Narator: alright, now let's go further with the story shall we !
Goons: yes sir.
PP: alright WTF are we supposed to do

Narator: START RUNNING !!!

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back at the mansion

TINM: alright AO, let's get them
AO: i thought you would never say it.

the 2 jump up and do in a kung-fu position
merv: oh please, you are still going to lose. get them men !
the goons run towards AO and TINM, and they start fighting. the fight is very violent. blood and body parts fly trew the room
Merv: ah damn, this is going to cost extra too clean.

Suddenly merv get's grabbed and a Knife is pushed against his troath
the fight stops and everyone looks at mero.
Freddy: alright you dumb goons, drop to the ground !
the goons drop to the ground and AO also
TINM: Not you AO !
AO: oeps sorry forgot.

Freddy come over here AO and TINM.
Merv: you realy think, you can just walk out of here.
Freddy: no, first were gonna bang persephone, then kill you and blow this place up
TINM: WHAT REALY ?
Freddy: nah, but mabey the persephone part we will do
Merv: your staying of her ! and she isn't even here now


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oke anyone continue

Much, much better AO! Niva, a wonderful addition! And Freddy, yet another exciting installation! The only problem, Freddy, is that Kobra is piloting the ship, lol.

I'll try to add something later tonight :D.

Ok TINM if you dont mind I would like to continue from where FK left of and then you can continue from where I leave of. That is if someone else hasn't already.
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FK: Well why do I have the feeling you are not telling the truth Merv?

TINM: Could it be because you are protecting something?

AO: Or could it be that you are scared and dont know what to do?

Merv: I will not tell you, you see the only why iam going to is if you give me what I want.

FK: well thats to bad looks like you just have to die then. (FK slowly moves the knife closer to Mervs neck.)

Merv: NO! no wait I will tell you just stop please stop.

TINM: Well that was easy.

FK: Yea that was wasn't it?

AO: If you dont mind me saying so it was a little to easy.

Merv: She is hiding upstairs in our room under the bed.

FK: (moving the knife closer.) THAT! sounds a little to childish to me Merv so I will give you one more chance to tell me the truth or this knife will be going down your neck and not from your mouth.

Merv: PLEASE! no iam telling the truth (he says crying)

FK: Hey AO go upstairs and see, and if she is not then you can be the one to kill Merv, but if she is then as I said we will bang her dry. Then after that we will kill her.

TINM: Ah what how come I cant do it?

FK: Oh come on TINM dont start that...just go AO.

AO: Alright FK

Merv still crying looks up at FK and gives him a little smile. FK with some confusion shakes his head and looks away.

FK: So TINM how was the trip with WK?

TINM: Ah it was the most dumb thing that I have every had done to me.

FK: Even worse then the time (BANG! BANG! BANG!)

FK and TINM both look at one another and Yell AO!. FK lets go of Merv and he starts to run up the stairs with TINM right behind him. When they reach the top the see AO walking with blood all over him.

FK: OMG what happend?

AO: dont worry it is not my blood. When I opend the door there where three of Merv's men waiting in there. Luckey enough I had my gun out and when I saw then...well I took them out.

TINM: Man thank god we thought it was you who was shot.

AO: No, no it wasnt but thanks for worrying. Hey where is Merv by the way.

FK: Ah fuck Merv.

FK, TINM and AO run down the stairs hoping Merv is still there. When they reach the bottum he is gone and all that is left is blood and body parts everywhere.

FK: DAMN IT!

TINM: Where could he have gone?

AO: I was going to say we could follow a blood trail but blood is every where.

TINM: Yea thats for sure.

FK gets a phone call and it is helios. She lets him know that we are running outta time and need to get to an exit fast.

FK: hello

Helios: Capitan we have a problem. it seems as the sentinels have engaged some sort of power and are moving at super speed.

FK: What are you getting at Helios?

Helios: with there current speed they are going at they should reach the ship in less then 20 to 15 minutes sir.

FK: DAMN IT! things are not going good. Alright Now when I say this I mean it...give me the closest exit and fast.

Helios: Em, Bang and Abra Cadabra...Nearest exit is just a block away in a contruction area.

FK: Good we will be there. (call ended)

TINM: What the hell is going on FK.

FK: no time to talk follow me and I mean it follow me now.

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this one will probabaly suck oh well again if you dont like it or if you dont think it fits cancel it. (p.s. i took out kobra since he is running the ship)

back inthe sewers:

PP and S1 are still running from the goons. PP's cell phone rings and she trys to answer it while maintaining her present speed.

PP: hello
helios: its helios, you two need to get out of there fast( static and breaking in voice)

PP:hello, hello, damnitt
S1:whats wrong
PP:apparently we need to get out of here but there is like zero reception down here and i lost helios
S1:i'll hold them off you climb the ladder over there and call helios back
PP: are you sure
S1: of course i am sure now go

as PP climbs the ladder S1 ducks in a corner and pulls out her 2 revolvers, ready for the 3 goons to round the corner. She hears their footsteps approaching and rounds the corner firing.



anyone continue.

Thank you S1 I will continue if you dont mind.
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S1 keeps on firering her two revolvers as she takes out the first two goons that turn the corner. The last goons is so scared now that he starts running the other way as you can hear his screaming. After that S1 goes to the surface to see PP talking on the phone to Helios.

PP: Where are they headed then?

Helios: there headed to an contruction site and from where you are if you run you should make it within 5 minutes.

PP: Where is it then?

Helios: To the south of you about a block and a half away.

PP: Thanks Helios. (call ended) Come on S1 lets go we have to catch up with TINM, FK and AO.

S1: what the hell is going on?

PP: Just go I will tell you on the way.

PP and S1 start running faster then they have ever ran before. While doing so PP tells S1 what is going on just as she said she would. She tells S1 that the sentinels are getting close to the ship and that if they dont get there in time to help fight them off witch is in about 10 minutes then there is a good chance that they will all die.

S1: OMG that is not good news at all.

PP: Tell me about it...now lets keep going it should be close now.

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Back with the guys FK, TINM and AO

TINM: Hey fK is that it right there?

FK: You know TINM I think it is...lets go.

AO: Wait who is that running to the same place over there?

FK: Hey I think that is PP and S1.

The guys start yelling to them trying to get there attention. But with out luck since the construction site is so big PP and S1 can not hear them.

FK: come on guys we will meet them there.

So the guys start running as fast as they can and with in a minute they reach the phone but PP and S1 are not there yet.

AO: Ah shit where are they?

FK: I dont know but what iam worried about is why isn't the phone ringing yet? ( phone rings )

TINM: Luck:rolleyes:

FK: Alright TINM your the first. (he puts the phone to his ear and goes away. http://img54.photobucket.com/albums/v166/theOnEalmighty/phonin.gif)

AO: FK I think it is you who needs to go because iam less important.

FK: On my ship AO capitan or not every one is the same so go. ( FK puts the phone to AO's ear and he goes away.) Where is PP and S1?

Once again with some luck when FK says that PP and S1 turn the corner.

FK: Ah yes there you two are.

PP: sorry we are late but I droped my phone so we had to go grab it.

FK: No problem just hurry and get out.

PP: Smith1 I think you should go.

S1: Why that is nice now give me the phone please. ( she says in fear. she to puts the phone to her ear and leaves the matrix.)

PP: Well FK who is it going to be?

FK: I think you know the answer to that question girl. (Freddy looks a PP with a grin on his face. Then the phone starts to ring.) Take it PP.

PP: I will see you in the real world. ( she leaves the matrix and wakes up in the real world.)

FK: Well looks like it is just me ( he waits for a few seconds looking around.) Wow I wonder what they are building. (The phone rings. FK picks it up quick and goes away.)

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UT hung up the phone and felt something heavy in the inside pocket of her white jacket. Mac holding his kat conner, Hit armed to the eye teeth with guns and swords of every description...and UT looking down at the industrial strength can of 'Whoop Ass' concentrate.

UT: What in the name of christ is this shit supposed to be right here?

Mac:Ummmm...LMAO
HIT: Man, Niva found some. Awesome shit, I'll swap ya!
UT: With pleasure dude. Honestly I'll give her bloody whoop ass when we get back.

UT walks in the direction of the co-ordinents followed by a laughing Mac and Hitman picking up the can UT dropped on the ground.

UT: Hit, put it down now.
She said without turning to see him wondering how she knew...

UTs phone rings once more, and it's Niva.

UT: Dude Where the f........
Niva:No time to explain Cap, we need you guys back here stat. Go to the north side of the building, room 666 on the 7th floor.
UT: You're shitting me about the room number right?
Niva: No hon, I'm serious.
UT:I don't think the guys are gonna like this. Remember Hit has a number phobia!
Niva:WTF? Oh crap, that's right, Ok well you'll have to knock him unconcious before you reach the room.
UT: Check..no wait a damn sec? I can't do that!!
Niva: Oh yeah you can, as you've got company on that roof. 20 agents closing in on you and fast!
UT: Hit him over the head. Check.

UT grabs the huge can of 'whoop ass' off Hit.
Hit: Hey I thought you didn't want it?
UT: Ummm I've changed my mind! Hey Hit dude, look over there!

*Thwack*

Hit:Ouch man, wtf did you do that for?
UT: No reason, just checking.
Mac: You've both gone mad!!!!!!

They all turn to see a slew of agents running toward them and run as fast as they can as UT tells them where the new exit is.

Hit: IT'S WHERE? OH CRAP!!! I'M NOT GOING THERE!
UT: DON'T MAKE ME HIT YOU AGAIN HONEY. *pant pant....run*
Mac:Hit, you're gonna go into that room, and I don't give a damn what the friggen room number is. Got it!

The both start draggin HIT as he starts kicking and screaming toward the door...

EDIT: This:

http://www.reddwarfgraphics.com/meh/net1_l.jpg

was some funny bloody stuff right there TINM Lol.

FK: alright everyone battle stations. PP, Kobra man your guns. S1 and AO get to the reloading station.
TINM: i'll use the upper gun
FK: good idea.
Helios: shall i try to contact UT or shall i man the lower gun ?

Freddy quickly runs to the front of the ship, he jumps on his seeth, and activate's the ship. The Osirus Fly's off at high speed, after several seconds there at top speed. 350 kilometers per hour.
FK (trew headset): alright, first try to contact UT, then man the lower gun turret !
Helios: roger craptain
FK: HELIOS, what did i tell you about the craptain part
Helios: sorry captain, i won't do it again. alright calling Niva now.


Niva: operator here.
Helios: we are in serious trouble, the sentinels have some kind of new boost. there flying twice as fast as normal. they will be us in 15 to 10 minute's.
Niva: damnit, the crew is at the moment plugged in but they will be here again in some minute's.
Helios: how far are you away from us ?
Niva: 30 minutes. were going as fast as we can, but the main roads are destroyed, by the explosions. so we have to take a longer road. so it's 30 minutes
Helios: i think we can hold them off for a wile. but try to get to us faster.
Niva: we will try


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On the osirus again

FK: shit, damn explosion destroyed all the main line's. i have more trouble dodging objects then flying at this speed.
Helios: i had contact with niva, they will be with us in 30 minute's
FK: damnit and the sentinels in 10
Helios: well we may can go faster, if we drop off all the gun turrets. then we can go 500 instead of 350.
FK: and have no defence. we can't use EMP because then we must stand still. but then they will use those bombs.
Helios: i'm going to my turret now
FK: we will survive

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UT, Mac and Hit finally make it out and back to the Caduceus, and the pair look over at Hit as his eyes are the last to open and he starts screaming.

Hit:666.666.666
UT: Hey you're back now. See you're phobia was unfounded hon.
Mac: man that sounds like the devils IP....

They both look at Mac blankly and back over to see Niva coming toward them

Niva: The Osirus needs us stat.
UT: HIt, to the guns. Niva, let's get into postition asap to get that ship some help. What's our ETA?
Niva:Now ir's 25 mins.
UT: And the squids?
Niva: 5
UT: Not good enough. I want to be there in 4. Let's make this an actuallity.
Niva: Roger.
Mac: Where's NMN?
Niva: Checking Micheala, though he's been helping sparky arm the guns also.
UT: Right, Mac tell NMN to go and man a gun along with all other available crew. You stay with Liani and Micheala and I shall go up with Niva and get this baby to the Osirus at warp speed..
Mac: Aye Capn'

Eon comes running in and Niva grabs her. Niva tells her to back up Mac in sick bay and prepare him for who awaits him when they reach Zion. Eon smiles from ear to ear as Niva quickly breifs her on the situation at Macs home at Zion and then follows UT to the controls.

The crew of the Caduceus arm their stations, and Niva and UT prepare to push the ship as hard and as fast as possible.

Niva calls over the ships speaker: Hold on folks, we're gonna be in for a bumpy ride...

someone take over please.

Ok I'll try...Work in progress.

MacLeod stumbles as he enters the medical bay, feeling somewhat like a fish out of water. He spots Liani struggling mightily at her mother's emergency bed, but she sways worse than the support systems and drip bags. He catches her in one arm then almost falls over himself, but he doesn't care: Liani is tear-stricken and keeps clawing for her mother. Pained, he settles down in a safe corner and turns her to speak to him.
"Liani...Liani! We need to get secured - we've done all for your mom now, we need to see to ourselves!"
Liani keeps shaking her head, positively fear-struck.
"Mommmeeeeeeeeee!!!!"
"Hush! Hush...Look, Unc - Uncle Mac's here. I'll make sure nothing happens to your mom...not while I'm here." Before he even knew it, he had put on a silly face of determination for her, something he would have shot himself for doing just months ago.
Abuptly, she stopped. She rubbed her eyes, finally torn away from her mother to look up at him, and tried her best to look brave. He could swear it might've been something UT herself, the 'matriach supreme', saw rarely.
So saying, he tucked her close by his side, trying his best to balance Liani's mother's bed on his other arm. Both looked up toward the front of the ship, faces full of fear and concern for a battle that they were unable to help...

Connnnnn-tinue!!

Yo People Weoples Raj asked me to come on here and tell every1 that he won't be able to come online fo' a while 'cos he got a virus and he's getting his system rebooted or sumthing. Later peeps.

Him too...I have also been haivng problems here with this comp. Thats why I haven't really posted, its driving me nuts. Anyhow bac k to the story......

Niva knew how babdly they had to get to the Osirus. Everyone else just got unplugged, knew they had to get there but not like Niva...

It seemed forever going through the tunnels, n having stray sentinels on ur ass...Knowing the location where u have to be, n its taking forever, thats not a good feeling. Knowing that the lives r at stake, r the closet thing u have to a family in Zion.

'Niva, where the hell r u guys???' asked Helios over the radio.
'We're getting there five minutes tops....Just hang on there, we'll be there to kick some serious ass. Keep playing with them a bit more.' Replied Niva trying to be positive but is worried to death.

Some else take over....

Bullets were flying true the air, each time a sentinel came too close to the ship, it would get blown away.
FK: how is everything back there
TINM: we are keepng them at a distance, but they just keep on coming
FK: shit is it me or is this line getting smaller.

Then suddenly the sentinels split up in 2 groups. 1 group fly's above the Osirus and the other below it.
PP: godamnit those f*cking machine's. there going for the engine's
FK: oh hell no ! hold on thight everyone this is going to be one hell of a ride !

Freddy make's the ship make a hard right turn, they fly in a small pipe line. the ship scratches against the walls, but fly's on.
Some of the sentinels crash against the walls. but most fly in the pipe line and go after the Osirus again.


Niva: niva here calling Helios. do you read me
Helios: yes i hear you, but we got some transmission trouble's so contact is low.
Niva: yes it looks like the machines are doing it. there cutting our long range communication.
Helios: i see, and because your close to us we can still talk to us. now i understand why i can't get a line with a other ship.
Niva: were almost at your location. wich pipe line are you now ?

Helios: let's see, ummm it's a small old one. nummer 96.
Niva: we are in pipe line 75. where almost there !

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i'm back now. the computer guy came and fixed my computer today. he came to my house an 9:30 am and left at about 5:30pm.
luck he was a friend of ours and didn't charge us. lol

Continuing from FK's part.:D
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TINM: Sir we seem to have a problem!

FK: what is it?

TINM: Its the sentinels sir...they seem to be retreating.

FK: No, it cant be. Its a trick.

PP: could it be there headed to another ship sir?

FK: (pauses for a second) thats it there headed toward Niva and the crew. Helios I want you to radio into Niva and let her know the sentinels are headed her way and ASAP.

Helios: doing it now capitan.(buzzzz sound in the head phone)

Niva: (buzzzz) Hello this is Niva here...hello?

Helios: Niva is that you? (buzzzz) the sentinels are headed your way. I repeat the sentinels are headed your way!

Niva: What (buzzzz) the sentinels are headed where?

Helios: Shit!...sir the sentinels are blocking our communication signal and I cant seem to get a good hold of Niva.

FK: Damn It!...well lets just hope they are prepared for what is headed there way. (FK looks to the gunners then makes a fast U turn.)

Kobra: WO! capitan what are you doing?

FK: Iam taking us to Niva and the crew because now it is our turn to help then as they were going to help us. All we gotta do is follow the stench of those sentinels. So how about are you all with me?

PP: with out a dought in my mind sir...yes.

Kobra: what she said.

TINM: I speak for me, AO and S1 sir...yes sir.

S1: your lucky TINM that I was going to say yes to.

FK: lets go.

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it seems that you made alitte mistake AO. it whas not Kobra who whas flying the ship but me. kobra whas behind one of the guns (he is a gunner ;) )

Well all fixed and ready to go FK. You always have had an eye for people mistakes FK...good eye.

UT took the controls. "WE GOT SWARMS ALL OVER!" She shouted. Macleod strapped Liani into a seat and said, "Hang on tight little one. This will be over before you know it," and smiled with an apparently unwavering confidence...or at least, he hoped it appeared that way. Macleod glanced at the sonar scans and said, "Ach...We've got sentinels at...well, every o'clock!" "Where are my guns?" Hitman slid into the first gunner's seat. "Locked and Loaded...I'll clear the path ahead first, then concentrate fire on incoming." With that, he shouted, "Yippee Ki-Yayy muthaf***ers!!" and began blasting a clearing as the sentinels began to surround the Caduceus.

Niva and NMN were with Michaela. "How is she?" Niva asked. NMN shrugged. "She's taken quite a shock in the Matrix. Her mind and therefore her body hasn't accepted the fact that she's not really wounded...Her mind's making it too real."

Liani screamed in terror as she heard loud banging behind her. "EEEEEEEEEEE!!! They're coming!! Help me Macleod!!!" Macleod glanced to UT, who, without turning around waved him to check on the child while she skillfully maneuvered into Sewer 36. Macleod made his way to Liani's chair, where he noticed several large dents in the side by her head. Suddenly the hull dented in more, and a metallic claw punched through. "Sh!t!!!" Macleod shouted, and grabbed Liani out of the chair. "Hitman! Get this thing off of us!!" UT did the honors instaed, however, and scraped the sentinel off via one of the cavernous walls. "We got something else incoming," Hitman shouted to UT, "It's...the Osirus!" "Good...why should we have all the fun?" UT smiled.

Just dropped in to say; great work so far folks. The different styles do make an interesting read. We're so close to Zion now; who's gonna make the final push that'll see us all safely to h(e)aven's gates? :)

"Shit!" UT shouted, "We can't just lead them right into Zion's gates, can we? Osirus...come in. Yo, Fred?!" "Krueger here, thank Neo we finally can communicate with you..." came the response. "We gotta shake the swarm before we reach the final junction tube leading home..." UT shouted as she scraped a few more sentinels off the sid of the ship before executing a barrel roll that prior to this was believed to be impossible. "Damn UT's good..." Freddy thought to himself. "OK, UT...I'm in position behind the swarm, and they don't seem to be minding us at all. They want you guys bad, UT. I'll lay down suppressing fire and try to reduce their numbers from behind. Your gunner needs to concentrate on keeping your hull cleared off. At the junction after next, invert polarities and use your reverse jets. Hopefully, they'll pass you."

UT raised an eyebrow. "Hit the breaks, and they'll fly right by me? Is that what you just said to me?" Freddy Kreuger laughed a hearty, unsettling laugh and said, "Yeah! Let's get crackin'!!" With that, the Osirus weapons whirled to life and opened fire on the swarm of sentinels pursuing the Caduceus. The sentinels started to drop like flies. "They're droppin' like flies," Niva said, viewing the action. "You've got a keen grasp of the obvious, Niva...you know that, right?" NMN said with a smile. Niva responded by erecting her middle digit. "Radio ahead, Niva," UT said, "and apprise Zion of our situation." Niva nodded and got on the horn.

The Osirus had reduced the swarm's numbers greatly; only 25 sentinels remained. Hitman also was doing well with the guns, blasting chunks off of the sentinels that landed and rendering them nil. Freddy Krueger radioed the Caduceus again. "UT, there's a junction coming up. It's real tight and wraps back around to the home stretch. If you can maneuver it properly, you can take out the rest of the sentinels before they can breach your hull any more." UT nodded and said, "Thanks...we'll celebrate at Kara's tonight." Freddy nodded back, then replied, "drinks are on UT!" Then the Osirus broke off its attack, and the sentinels continued to pursue the Caduceus.

UT reached the junction. She threw the engines into overdrive, inverted polarities and then hit the brakes. The swarm flew past, then tried to correct its collective pattern and instead lost another 15 from its number, reducing it down to 10 pursuing sentinels. She adjusted the pitch of the hovercraft so the nose pointed upward and ascended the tube, navigating it with expert coolness.

Liani held tight to Macleod. Scared to death, Macleod was the closest thing to family Liani had at this second, since her mother was in the infirmary.

The Caduceus spun through the tubing and weaved over and under and through the debris, smashing another 6 sentinels in the process. The ship emerged from the tube to find themselves face to face with the great doors to Zion. "We still got sentinels on us!!" Hitman shouted. UT said, "I can't deal with that now." Just as she said that, however, the guns on Zion's doors roared to life, firing huge blasts that incinerated the 4 remaining sentinels. "Doors open, beds made...Welcome home Caduceus," came the announcement over the com system. The Great Doors of Zion opened slowly, welcoming them home, and inviting newly freed Micheala into her new future.

w0000t! Bloody brilliant stuff guys! Hit I was on the edge of my seat while reading yours. Magic. :D Ok I'll add mine on the morrow for I've got another character I'd like to introduce who welcomes us off our ship. ;)

Freddy, your ship next if you like hon or my crew expand on Hits, however leave Mac on the ship till last lol. I've a method in my madness don't worry!

Oh aye that's a beaut indeed! We've clean forgot about Zion's secrecy...but what have ya got planned for Mac? <Paranoid twitch>

Ok this piece is to be incorporated into the main mission. However I know this is slightly premiture, I couldn't leave Mac in suspence any longer lol....

Mac felt exhausted mentally and physically as he packed up his kit bag
to leave the ship. The last thing he packed away was a small photo that
sat by his bunk. He carefully placed it ontop of his things and closed his
kit, slowly walking toward the door of the ship that would lead him
once more to his beloved Zion. In his short time there he'd seen
so many changes, some good and some bad however it was home nonetheless.

Niva: Hey Mac, are you going to look in on Liani when you've settled in?
She wanted to know if you'd join her in the main medlab at Zion, think she's a
little daunted by what's happened...

Macleod: No worries, I'll be there. I just need a little time and I'll go straight
there.

Niva: Ok mate, then I'll let UT and NMN know as they're there now.

Macleod: Thanks..

Niva smiled coyley as she watched a lone figure on the dock walking toward
the Caduceus. The woman stood out amongst the crowd as she always had and held
herself beautifully. Truth caught Macs eye as she was entering the ship and he felt
his head go light. Slowly checking his kit to make sure her picture was tucked safely
inside, he faced her. The pair scarsely noticed Niva slip by them and leave quickly.

Truth: Macleod. You haven't changed a bit.

Macleod: Aye, the same can be said for you...

He felt akward and stumbled over his words hoping against hope it wasn't painfully obvious.

Truth: I missed you, forgive my absence honey, but it's been hectic. I wish I could tell you
more, however now is not the time. You'll all know what's been happening when we sit with
the high council next week...

Macleod: So..Will you be staying?

Truth: Yes Mac, I will be.

He suddenly grabbed her waist and drew her close. Holding her tightly he said. "I missed you more
than you'll ever know".
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Well it was time to be forceful Mac damnit lol. Ok more from me soon :)

LMAO! Yeah!!! Go Mac, get the girl!!! Woot!!!

Niva: captain, there is something not right.
UT: huh what you mean ?
Niva: well the ship has too much weight at the back. ummm the loading dock. it's 100 kilo's too much
UT: how can that be. did some stuff fall in there ?
Hitman: ima and i will check it out
niva: take the pulse gun. you never know

IMA and Hitman, walk slowely and calm to the back of the ship. they open the door and hitman points the pulse gun. nothing moves.
ima: alright, nice and calm now.
they are in the middle of th room now, and looking at everything in there sight
hitman: i don't see anything that doesn't belong here. Niva are you sure it's too heavy
niva: the comps don't lie

suddenly they hear a loud bang
ima: wtf whas that
hitman then get's punched away by a large tenticel
ima (true com): ah shit, goddamnit a sentinel. it's in the loading dock of our ship. it's aaarggghhhh

the sentinel punches IMA against a wall, and she falls uncounsious
it walks towards her ready to cut her to piece's. when suddenly hitman jumps infront of it, blood is dripping from a wound above his right eye. he is holding the pulse gun at full charge pointing it at the sentinel

the sentinel make's it self bigger by stretching it's 'legs' it's robotic eye's become blood red. and it jumps towards hitman
he shoots the electro pulse at the sentinel. but still get's hit by the now off-line sentinel body.

after some minute's ima get's up
hitman: can i have some help here. i can't get this sentinel off me by myself you know !
ima: relax, let me get up first. ahh my ribs. i think i broke some of my ribs.
hitman: get some help then. this thing weights a ton

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lol...an Aliens inspired piece...I've just finished seeing it!

And wow - I see what you mean, UT, Hit! Thanks alot...forceful? :p Heck just having you feature her brightened me day. :)

Originally posted by MacLeod
lol...an Aliens inspired piece...I've just finished seeing it!

And wow - I see what you mean, UT, Hit! Thanks alot...forceful? :p Heck just having you feature her brightened me day. :)

Now that's what I'm talking about!! :D I'm so glad it made you day bro, but you'd better get used to it for I intend adding and expanding when it comes to the interactivity of Zion and its people, as you've stated in the past (and rightly so) we are forgetting about all it's secrets....Ahh, so much room for expansion here it's not funny. :)

Grr, I need to catch up in my reading here, I've been lazy.... Good work from what I've read so far!

Damn, there you are TINM lol. Hollar or honk something before you sneak up on me mate. I'm old! :)

Ok, so we have some of us writing still in almost-end-of mission mode, and me writing in end-of-mission mode lol. Usually it's the other way around. ;) So, who is going next? I'll add mine tomorrow night (after college) either way.

whats up people. I am back from Mexico, yes i know you all missed me, i mean how could you not, hello its me!!!!!!!!! Yeah anyway i am not concieted at all. But ummm i just wanted to say this is looking great AO i am still confused on something about my character. well got to go. loves ya all.

What more can I say, but I have writer's block. I came here everyday n nothing. I sit down with a pad n pen, n nothing. I love where this story is going, but I can't freaking write nothing. Hopefully this weekend I'll get ideas.
Sry about that, but I am trying here.
*banging my head against the wall*

It's ok mate, I'm going through one now. Communication is the key, and it's all good honey so don't worry. ;)

Ahhhhhhhhh!!!! Writier's block sucks monkey balls!!! I guess we all have it, man that sucks. Oh well i am trying to think of something. Come on people lets think, we can do it.

Originally posted by smith1
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!! Writier's block sucks monkey balls!!! I guess we all have it, man that sucks. Oh well i am trying to think of something. Come on people lets think, we can do it.

It certainly sucks hon. Ok people we're in the home straight here. Now let's finish this mission.

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UT amd Mac run towards the sentinal. Hitman is yelling for someone to get it off him as he feels the wieght of it crack one of his ribs. He lets out a howl as UT picks up a steel pipe and knocks the living shit out of it. Mac grabs Hits arms and drags him